Manan- Unacceptable Relation (Link to thread 2-pg no.1)(15-9-2016) - Page 23

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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update. .. and padma man gyi nandu ko kids ke sath bajne ko... and ab cabir aa gya h to vo to manan ko mila hi dega... aur hume aur manan moments dekhne ko milenge... waiting for next update. ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsmmm
Luv all the parts
Hats of to ur thinking nd writing skills
Cmpltly awsmmm read
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Plzzz
Luv uuu itna saaraaa
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome.. Manik n Nandini going to stay together Matlab same ghar me.. For the sake of kids... But what will this change in there relationship that will be so interesting to read
Thank u for the update
And the pm


Keep smiling
Stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awwweessoommee

finallyy Dono ek sath rahegee
suuuppeerrbb luv it
hope Next update se lots of Manan milegaa plzzz plzz want more more n more Manan updates Manan scenes Manan wid kids plz plzzz
hope Nandu Manik k feellings jaldi samajh jayee
dono ko luv jaldi hoo jaye plzzz

Cabir Manik ko moveon k liye samjhaee plzz zzz
want Manan wala updates from next parts some accidental closeness Romance plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awwweessoommee

finallyy Dono ek sath rahegee
suuuppeerrbb luv it
hope Next update se lots of Manan milegaa
plzzz plzz want more more n more Manan updates Manan scenes Manan wid kids plz plzzz
hope Nandu Manik k feellings jaldi samajh jayee
dono ko luv jaldi hoo jaye plzzz

Cabir Manik ko moveon k liye samjhaee plzz zzz

want Manan wala updates from next parts some accidental closeness Romance plzzz

Update Next ASAP plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi guys.

I am planning to start a new story on the most loved couple of television I.e. MANAN.

It is basically a story of 2 sisters who happen to fall in love with the same guy.

Both completely unaware of the fact that they have fallen for the same guy.

And about the guy, does he really love any one of the sisters or is he playing with their feelings .

This forms the basis of the story.

When the girls come to know about his intentions , they are shattered.

They then team up to teach that guy a lesson.

But the question is- Is the guy really bad or is there a bigger picture behind all this?

This is the glimpse of my story.

I want you guys to tell me if I should continue it or drop the idea.

And I need one more help from you guys.

Based on the concept , could you guys suggest an apt title for it.

Eagerly waiting for your response.

P.S. Show your creative side while selecting a name for it.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice concept pls continue.
About title I have no idea dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nyc concept but Manan ko together hi rakhnaaa plzzz


titel- Cursd Shade
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sounds interesting...
Really wanna know more...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
CHAPTER -21

Manik sat in the drivers seat and Nyonika sat in the passenger seat and the Nandini sat with the kids who were sleeping in the back seat .

Cabir , Navya and Manav along with Raj came in another car.

Manik started the car after Padma bid bye to everyone.

Nyonika observed that Manik was silent since the time Aarav-Khushi had asked Padma about taking Nandini with them.

Nyonika kept her hand on his shoulder and asked -
What happened Manik. Everything alright?

Manik nodded his head and said- Yes Mom. All's well.

Nyonika turned to Nandini and found her sleeping by leaning her head to the car window.

A smile crept on Nyonika's face.

Manik adjusted the mirror so that he could see Nandini.

He found her sleeping peacefully with a pout.

He ran his hand over his face and sighed.

He thought to himself -

I was trying to stay away from you Nandini but destiny is not in my favour.
Now we will be staying under the same roof .

You will be before my eyes 24*7.

I don't know how I will be able to keep myself away from you.

Why God? Why did you do this to me?

Why am I getting attracted to her so much?

He again saw Nandini in the mirror.

His thoughts were broken by Nyonika.

Nyonika - Manik where are you lost?
Mai kabse tumhe bula rahi hu.

Manik - Sorry Mom wo bas... Aap kuch bol rahi thi.

Nandini got up with the ringing of the phone.

Nyonika - Wo tumhara phone kabse ring ho raha hai.

Manik - Oh Ok.

Saying this he picked up the call which was from Cabir.

Manik - Haan Cabir bol.

Cabir- Maine uncle ko ghar drop kardiya hai. Do you want me to come there at your place.

Manik - Nai Cabir it's OK. Tum Navya ko lekar ghar jao. Mom hai na mere sath.

Saying this he looked at Nyonika and she blinked her eyes in assurance.

Cabir - Chal theek hai. Mai morning me aata hu. Bye.

Manik - Ok . Bye.

After 15 minutes, they reached home.

Nyonika and Nandini picked both the kids and went inside

Manik parked the car and went inside.

Meanwhile Nyonika and Nandini put the kids on their bed and were about to get up when Nandini realised that Khushi had held her index finger tightly in her sleep.

Nyonika saw this and said- Beta if you don't mind aaj tum yahi sojao bachcho ke sath. Kal mai tumhare liye room ready karwa dungi.

Nandini - Aunty isme mind karne ki baat kya hai. I would love to sleep here with them.

Nyonika blessed her by placing her hand on Nandini's head and went away.

Manik observed all this. He could do anything for his kids. If their happiness lies with Nandini then so be it.

Nyonika came out and saw Manik and said- Wo aaj Nandini yahi soyegi bachcho ke sath.

Manik - Ok Mom. Aap sojayiye. Thank gayi hongi.

Nyonika - Theek hai. Tum bhi jao sojao.

Manik left from there to his room and went to sleep as he was too tired because of the kids birthday party.


Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.




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