Manan- Unacceptable Relation (Link to thread 2-pg no.1)(15-9-2016) - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
nice update. ...

ohh nandu are missing kids...

Waiting for next update. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
nice update. ...

ohh nandu are missing kids. ...

waiting for next update. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93


Nice cute update. .

Nandni was missing them too. .

Looking forward to seeing next.

Stay blessed keep writing.



Thanks.




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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Hey manan moment kab start hoga...???
Eagerly waiting for manan...
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
CHAPTER- 11

Manik gave the phone to his kids.

They started fighting for the phone as to who will talk first to their Nani.

Manik took the phone from them and put it on speaker and made them sit on his lap.

Padma- Aarav-Khushi . Kaise ho bachcho.

Aarav-Khushi- Naniii...

Mishing you.

Padma- Missing you too bachcho.

Aarav - Nani thish housh is shoo bigg.
Khushi- Dadoo hash got shoo many toys for ushh.

Padma felt happy and said-

Ohho .so mere Bachche bahut enjoy kar rahe hai waha pe.

Achhe se rehna bachcho. Apne Dadoo ko tang mat karna. Unki har baat maanna.

Aarav-Khushi- OK Nani. Mumma she baat karni hai.

Manik looked at them. They were so excited to talk to Nandini.

He didn't want to end there happiness by telling them that Nandini is not their Mumma.

Padma gave the phone to Nandini.

Nandini- Hiii ...my darling babies. How are you both?
Missing me.

Aarav-Khushi- Mummaaa... We are mishhing you thhisssh muchhh...

They extended their arms to show how much they were missing her.

Nandini- Missing you too my lovelies.

Khushi- Mumma aap log kab aaoge yaha.

Nandini didn't know what to say.

But for their happiness she said- We will come there very soon.

Manik was hearing all this.

He felt happy seeing the never ending smile on his kids faces.

Manik took the phone from them and asked them to go and play.

Aarav-Khushi nodded and went to play .

Manik on phone- Hello.

Nandini- Hi jiju. Sorry if we disturbed you.

Manik- No no. Not at all.
You can call me whenever you want to talk to Aarav-Khushi.

Nandini- Thanks Jiju. Maa wants to talk to you.

She gave the phone to Padma.

Manik- Haa Maa boliye.

Padma- Beta mai soch rahi thi ke Aarav-Khushi ka birthday aaraha hai to agar tum bura na mano to can we celebrate it at Murthy Mansion. Agar tum ne kuch aur plan kiya hai to its OK.

Manik- Usme puchne ki kya baat hai Maa. In fact I am happy that you are planning a birthday party for them.
We will celebrate their birthday at Murthy Mansion but all the arrangements will be done by me.

Padma- OK Beta as you say.

Manik- Thanks Maa. Mai phone rakhta hu. Bye.

Padma- Bye Beta. Take care.

Manik kept the phone and went to check the kids.

Aarav-Khushi were sitting in front of T.V. and we're fighting for remote as to which cartoon they will see.

Manik- Beta aise ladte nahi . It's not good manners. Both of you can take turns in watching your favourite cartoons.

Aarav-Khushi- Dadoo aap to Mumma ki tarah bol rahe ho. Wo bhi aise hi samjhati thi hum dono ko.

Manik's point of view-
The kids are very attached to Nandini and she has given them mother's love.

Aarav-Khushi I know that you both are missing Nandini a lot but you are just pretending to be happy so that I don't get hurt.

I don't know if I have done right or wrong in bringing you both here.
But then I can't stay away from you.

You both are my life. I will die without you both.

I can do anything for your happiness.

I promise I will prove it to you both that I am a good father.

Nothing matters to me more than your happiness.

End of point of view.

Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.




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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
Awesome update...
I hope to see some manan scenes...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
awesome update...
kids birthday

it will be fun and i hope k hamein manan dekhne ko bhi mil jaye.,...

update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Thanxx for Updateing
nyc chap
but Manan happening or not dur dur tak nehi dikh raha...Manik bacho k sath alag Nandu alagg ese kese dono milegee??? !!!
N Manik k familyy Manik k 2nd mrg kiyu nehi karna chahate??? Hope Nandu n childs bonding dekhkee 2nd Mrg k liyee kuch sochee...

Desperatellyy waiting for Next parts mainllyy Manan partss plzzz
Update ASAP
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
Thanxx for Updateing
nyc chap
but Manan happening or not dur dur tak nehi dikh raha...Manik bacho k sath alag Nandu alagg ese kese dono milegee??? !!!
N Manik k familyy Manik k 2nd mrg kiyu nehi karna chahate??? Hope Nandu n childs bonding dekhkee 2nd Mrg k liyee kuch sochee...

Desperatellyy waiting for Next parts mainllyy Manan partss plzzz
Update ASAP
plzz update next jaldii
A12609z thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanxx for Updateing
nyc chap
but Manan happening or not dur dur tak nehi dikh raha...Manik bacho k sath alag Nandu alagg ese kese dono milegee??? !!!
N Manik k familyy Manik k 2nd mrg kiyu nehi karna chahate??? Hope Nandu n childs bonding dekhkee 2nd Mrg k liyee kuch sochee...

Desperatellyy waiting for Next parts mainllyy Manan partss plzzz
Update ASAP
plzz update next jaldii
waiting for some Manan afterall its almost 10 chaps n Manan k kuch ataa pataa nehi...reallyy feelliinngg desperate..

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