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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
Read your story in one go its such a beautiful story (well i meant a beautiful dark story :p) and keep it up want to read more.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
It's sad how Manik has lost his sanity in his obsession for her.
Maybe she was the one who flirted with him, but that doesn't make her a prisoner in his house where only he can see her and keep her away from the other guys.
Forced marriage, oh god.
Finally you have started a new story, the old one was left alone :/
Please continue this
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
Please continue this story . It a new concept and I'm loving it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94

I'M VERY HAPPY WITH THE RESPONSE, HENCE A PUBLIC UPDATE. IF THERE IS LESS RESPONSE I'M GOING TO PM THE CHAPTERS.

PAST: ARIEL FONT

PART 4

Manik's deep breathing confirmed his sleepy state. Sneakily she tried to reach his mobile. She will have to try a last time.

Thankfully she got it. Password unlocked nandini.

She had to send mukti the news. Only she can save her.

Save me plz. He is going to marry me tomorrow. 10 am here - Nandini.

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Sleep was far away. Nowadays this was a routine for mukti. Nandini's state dint let her sleep at night. Her one mistake.

Her phone beeped.

Manik's msg?

She opened it curiously to see nandini's msg for her.

That monster. Now he is forcing her into this.

bas***d' she cursed.

Abhi jerked up with mukti's curse.

Mukti elaborated her husband with the happenings.

Her hyper behaviour made abhi irritated. mukti calm down, its too late there is nothing u can do about it.'

How can u abhi, woh behen hai tumhari' mukti was angry now with abhi's insensitive behaviour.

Behen nahi, cousin hai.' Abhi corrected her.

Whatever, but woh meri behen se bhi zyada hai...I will do whatever is needed to save her' mukti declared as she banged the door on abhi's face.

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Mukti and nandini reached a posh club in Mumbai.

Her excitement made mukti smile. Its her first time in a club.

The two friends were here to unwind, they have to leave early next morning.

chal muku lets dance' said nandini.

tu ja I'll take this call n come', abhi's call mukti thought.

As nandini danced with the peppy beats, unknowingly she attracted a lot of attention.

Little did she know someone in the club was already irrevocably attracted to her.

Manik malhotra was here to chill with cabir. Nandini have already caught his attention.

The evening was well spent. With a semi drunk nandini, mukti was leaving the club.

Halla re halla re' nandini sang in her drunken voice.

And bang...

What the hell dikhai nahi deta?' nandini spoke to the Eiffel tower like human

I too can ask u the same, young lady' manik spoke.

bhai' mukti shuddered.

And a commotion was created.

But for the first time in life manik enjoyed arguing with someone. The cute drunk girl nandini.

Manik finally knew what he wants...nandini.

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"I need to call Navya" mukti thought. She would need cabir too to execute the plan. Nandini would not be with the monster anymore.

She wont let abhi come in between her friendship with nandini. She knew that there was something terribly wrong with abhi when it comes to nandini. He HATES her.

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It was 3:30 am when navya rang the doorbell at mukti's house.

Her hysteric cries and the news about nandini brought her here.

They'll have to do something asap.

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It was 3 days since manik collided with nandini at the club. 3 days since he lost it all sleep, hunger n concentration.

He knew everything about her by now. She was a rebellious child to her conservative parents. But her father's princess.

Mostly seen with mukti. An absolute romantic.

His thoughts broke with some giggles coming from the living room.

He went to see nandini laughing at mukti.

As she saw manik, she gave him a sexy smile.

Mukti looked at nandini in disbelief. She was flirting with bhai.

She walked upto manik and said, I'm really sorry uss din bahut rude ho gayi thi mein.'

She uttered with so much innocence that manik got full lattu on her.

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PRECAP: Plz manik...plz don't do this...

M: nandiniii...

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C'mon manik u know how important you are for me.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Why did Nandini have to flirt with Manik.?
By this, I don't imply that she is a girl and should know her limits, am all into "let girl have a little fun" but an act, just done for fun got her in hell lot of trouble.

Eager to know the story behind Abhi's hatred for Nandini. Does it have to do anything with Nandini': rebellious nature?

Thanks for the pm :)

Love
Nandini
Maramkhan thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
I'm sooo in love with story .pleasee pm me .totally amazinggg
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
superb
awesome
liked it
thnx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Glad u r back with dashing updates...
Reallly very happy...
And coming to update...it created much more curiosity in every word...
Nandini's flirting...abhi's hatred...omg...
Awesome...
Will b waitn...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
Awesomeee amazinggg update
Thnx for pm me
Lovd it
Edited by dhillon90 - 9 years ago
anonymous77 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
awesome
amazing

mindblowing update

loving manik's obsession for her

eagerly waiting

for the next chapter

plz update soon

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