MaNan FF- A Beautiful Disaster [Chpt 4-Pg 4 on 11/07/16] - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
PROMO


Are you kidding me?

I picked up my phone from the side table to check the time.

It's F-U-C-K-I-N-G 2:18 am!! Who on earth listen's to such loud music this late? And that too, some pathetic INDIAN song? This person surely has no taste in music and is pure DISGUSTING.

We don't have any Indians living in our neighborhood, well obviously apart from us and the Murthy's. And even the Firangs living here are old bones and plain boring. Secondly, they don't have a ear for such crappy bollywood songs.

...Dekh tera rang saawla hua baawla
Ladki nahi tu hai garam maamla
Bolti bandh meri, kahoon kya bhala
Arey ladki beautiful, kar gayi chull...

Ohkay..Was the miserable song not enough, that this CRAZY WOMAN has to now shout her lungs out?

Wait a minute..Did I just say woman? Oh yes. It was a girly voice. I'm 100% sure of it.

So, according to my calculation, Um..

CRAZY WOMAN+ PATHETIC BOLLYWOOD SONG+ SINGING ALONG WITH THE DREADFUL SINGER IN PROPER HINDI

Correction, THIS is not what sane people call singing, this is termed as yelling at top of one's lungs!

Didn't her lungs blow up yet? I wondered.

This definitely has to be one of those Murthy sisters..Who else could it be? Why can't these girls let me rest in place.




Hey readers, I am still working on the fourth chapter. Well it'll take some time..And I doubt that I shall be able to upload it by midnight. So thought of giving you guys a small promo..I shall update the chapter tomorrow for sure..pakka..Nandini promise😛

Okay, so do tell me what you guys think of the promo.. And btw who do think is this crazy woman? Is it Nandini. Well, it could be Alya too...😛😛Socho socho..zorrr se sochooo😆😆

With loads of love,

Your Writer

Okay thanks byee...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: rockstarlover

awesome update
manik was so lost in her
nandu was adorable
manik's organic fight was cute
he was already thinking about making her gf
but poor manik
she is now in friends zone
cont soon
can u plz pm me


Thank you so much sweetheart. And you don't need to worry about the pm..I'll do that once the chapter is ready to be published. The promo for chpt 4 is out. Do let me know what you think of it..cheers
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
unres
omg... all these were a dare... hehehehe... manik was completely smitten by nandini... manik's heart vs brain war was hilarious... lolzzz...
poor manik he is now FRIEND ZONE...
& manik's ring tone... lolzzz seriously he used this song as a ringtone... 😆
promo was also interesting... crazy murthy sisters...
btw where are you disappeared???? update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Chapter 4- Ladki Beautiful

MANIK

...Kaise kamar tu jhulaaye Physics samajh nahi aaye

Sandal mere cham cham karde
Hege high brand ve
Airplane mundeyan de
Mere heel pe honde land ve

Saari kudiyan haye desi chiddiyan
Saari kudiyan desi chiddiyan
Club ki main bulbul

Main ladki beautiful kar gayi chull
Chull chull chull
Main ladki beautiful kar gayi chull
Chull chull chull
Arey ladki beautiful kar gayi chull...

Are you kidding me?

I picked up my phone from the side table to check the time.

It's F-U-C-K-I-N-G 3:18 am!! Who on earth listen's to such loud music THIS LATE? And that too, some pathetic INDIAN song? This person surely has no taste in music and is pure DISGUSTING.

We don't have any Indians living in our neighborhood, well obviously apart from us and the Murthy's. And even the Firangs living here are old bones and plain boring. Secondly, they don't have a ear for such crappy bollywood songs.

...Dekh tera rang saawla hua baawla
Ladki nahi tu hai garam maamla
Bolti bandh meri, kahoon kya bhala
Arey ladki beautiful, kar gayi chull...

Ohkay..Was the miserable song not enough, that this CRAZY WOMAN has to now shout her lungs out?

Wait a minute..Did I just say woman? Oh yes. It was a girly voice. I'm 100% sure of it.

So, according to my calculation, Um..

CRAZY WOMAN+ PATHETIC BOLLYWOOD SONG+ SINGING ALONG WITH THE DREADFUL SINGER IN PROPER HINDI

Correction, THIS is not what sane people call singing, this is termed as yelling at top of one's lungs!

Didn't her lungs blow up yet?

This definitely has to be one of those Murthy sisters..Who else could it be? Why can't these girls let me rest in place.

Is it Alya? Probably. Because Nandini would definitely not listen to such sick songs.

From what I have learned about her, she is a courteous girl.

What does this reason have to do with her listening to such hindi songs anyways?

And what about that, em, dare?

But it was Alya who asked her to seduce a guy..and Nandini seems to be the quite, good girl types.

"Dude, stop defending her. These are lame reasons. And don't judge a book by it's cover. This noise is coming from the next house, which, apparently belongs to the Murthys, so it could be her. Infact I have a feeling that it's Nandini." Oh so Mr. Brain was back on his job of giving me his expert advise. Seriously now. Why did he even have to poke his nose in between? Can't he stay quite for a moment?

"Yeah, but it's Alya. I guess." I was just waiting for this rebelious organ to open his mouth. How can Mr. Heart keep quite, when the matter concerns his dearest Nandini. Right?

HIS? Are you f**king serious Manik? What is wrong with you? All these stupid thoughts are just ruining your casanova image. Why are you behaving like this?

I need a break. From Nandini, her sister, and these stupid thoughts.

This is not me. This is so not me. Manik Malhotra is NOT a good boy. I am a Monster. I love crushing the hearts of millions of girls like Nandini, brutally, everyday. Yeah..

But Nandini, she..she is different. She is not like the other girls who throw themselves on me, knowing the fact that towards the end, they will be hurt. She is beautiful and confident. She is innocent, but mature at the same time. She is the most amazing woman I've ever met. She...

"STOP! Stop right there, young man. I think you just said that you needed a break from all this. Why are you thinking about her again Manik? All the girls are just the same. They run after money. Women are not innocent. They are self-seeking bitches. Fame, Money are their only needs. Have you forgotten what SHE did to you? You better not! Always remember, that you are the bad guy now. This is what SHE has made you. And this is your identity for the rest of your life." My brain shrieked, knocking some sense into me. Suprisingly, Mr. Lawyer Heart had nothing to say this time. I guess even he is just as hurt as we two are. Or maybe he is sligtly more hurt than us, afterall he is the Principal of this so called Love Departmment.

Ughh...

f**k my life.

__________________________________________________

Hey people, how are you all doing?

I'm sorry. I know that I am super late but I was seriously caught up in some personal work. I got some time off today so thought to upload the next chapter. I know, I know, its the crappiest chapter ever *sigh*.

Okay, I pomise I won't give such rubbish updates from next time onwards. Please do tell me if there are any changes that you want me to make in this chapter.

Okay thanks bye

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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
nice concept

though i dont like casanova manik, i liked ur writing

its entertaining

i liked all the chapters which i read in 1 go

lovely

nandini part was awesome

but why everytime bad boy manik gets good girl nandini? so unfair wid nandini...


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Posted: 9 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: KYYian

nice concept

though i dont like casanova manik, i liked ur writing

its entertaining

i liked all the chapters which i read in 1 go

lovely

nandini part was awesome

but why everytime bad boy manik gets good girl nandini? so unfair wid nandini...


I'm glad that you liked it..
To be honest even I don't guys who aren't faithful and true a single woman.. but for the story it was necessary to portray Manik as a playboy.. About Nandini, there's a lot more to her character.. she isn't the innocent gal..so stay tuned and Thanks for the support.. :)
Edited by manan_ky2 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Loved the update!! Hopefully nandini will be able to change manik's view towars love soon!!

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