Manan SS: It was always you ..... Chapter 5 pg 8...15/05

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello guys I am writing another manan story . Let me know what you think.

Prologue

It's good to be back after 5 years and Mumbai hasn't change much. The busy streets , heavy traffic everything is the same yet nothing is as it used to be. When I had left I was sure I would never come back but then as they say never say never and here I am back where I met HIM. I had just landed in Mumbai and after settling down I had went to bed straight away but sleep was far away. I could not stop myself from thinking about HIM. If he still remembers me or not. If he was married now. This is the reason I never wanted to come back but then one day you have to face the reality and it was time to face mine.

Next day
I woke up early or you could say I never slept. Got ready and left my apartment for the morning jog. I was running lost in my own world when I bumped into someone. When I looked at the person well she was a lil girl maybe 3-4 year old wearing a school bag . I bend down to ask her if she was alright but the moment I saw her eyes I couldn't speak anything. She had HIS eyes, same deep brown eyes and then I heard HIM.

Ohh I forgot to introduce myself . Hi I am Nandini Murthy and this is my story.

So how was it . Tell me if I should continue or not . It will be a short ff . And a very simple sweet story . It would be mainly Nandini's POV
You can also read my other story My Love Will Heal You. (Link in signature)

Love
R


PS If I don't get good
response then I won't continue


Index
Chapter 1... Pg 3
Chapter 2...Pg 3
Chapter 3... Pg 4
Chapter 3B... Pg 4
Chapter 4... Pg 5
Chapter 5... Pg 8
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Sandhya098 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey dear...

Congrats for the new story...

Prologue was confusing...

Nandu kiski baat kr rhi thi...

Aur woh bacchi kon hai...

Continue soon eagerly waiting...

I want pm for this story as well...

So please pm me whenever u update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting prologue...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start

Is the girl is manik child


Intersting


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sandhya098

<font color="#cc6666" size="5">Hey dear...</font>

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<font color="#cc6666" size="5">Congrats for the new story...</font>
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<font color="#cc6666" size="5">Prologue was confusing...</font>
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<font color="#cc6666" size="5">Nandu kiski baat kr rhi thi...</font>
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<font color="#cc6666" size="5">Aur woh bacchi kon hai...</font>
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<font color="#cc6666" size="5">Continue soon eagerly waiting...</font>
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<font color="#cc6666" size="5">I want pm for this story as well...</font>
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<font color="#cc6666" size="5">So please pm me whenever u update...</font>



Thank you for liking my story. Will PM you . And Nandu kisi se baat kr rhi thi next update me pta chl hi jyga.chapter in few minutes.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shaan...

Interesting prologue...

Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...



Thanku. Will update me in few minutes
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: barkhachawla95

continue soon waiting...



:) enjoy the first chapter. Updating in few minutes
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jamunamanik

Nice start

Is the girl is manik child


Intersting


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Tha ks... About the girl wait n watch
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Continuation from prologue

Chapter 1

I was looking into the same pair of eyes that have always made me forget the whole world just the difference was that this time it was a small girl reminding me of him and then I heard his voice. I was sure it was him even if it had been 5 years since I have heard his voice I can never forget him or his eyes or anything about him for that matter of fact. I was hoping I am wrong . It's too early to face him . I am still not ready but my heart knew it was him . I turned and it indeed was HIM standing just few feet away still so handsome. He was busy in his phone and hadn't seen me yet but my eyes were fixed on his face. He had always been handsome but now he was not a college going boy but a mature man and still he was looking no less than a greek god. After few seconds he looked up from his cell and our eyes met . When ever I had thought about meeting him I have always dreaded that he won't recognize me but when he is standing infront of me looking at me like that I realized it doesn't matter if he remembers me or not , all that matters is he is finally here with me. Then I heard him saying my name with a hint of surprise in it and I was happy he remembers me. I have always loved the sound of my name from his mouth and listening it after years brought a smile on my face.

"OMG Nandini is it you, I can't believe it it's been such a long time . Where were you . We all tried to find you but you just vanished after graduation. Chacha , Chachi bhi sb chle gye . I still can't believe it , it's really you. " He asked me all the questions at one , I was about to answer his questions when I saw the same girl clinging to his legs as she was so small and he picked her up and that's when reality struck me the girl had the same eyes, she had to be his daughter. And suddenly the happy meeting was turning out to be a sad encounter. I composed myself and answered his question without breaking down.

"Yes , it's me Nandini, I know it's been 5 years actually we shifted to US due to rishu'a treatment and just got busy you know. I am glad to see you. How are you and others. Where is Aa... " Before I could complete my sentence his phone rang . I guess he was running late for some meeting. "I am
Sorry Nandini but I have to rush Tia ko school drop krna h and then I have meeting. Will catch up later ok . Just give me yo phone" . He took my phone , stored his number and just left asking me to call him. But I knew I would never be able to but I had a feeling I would meet him soon . I still was in a shock when I reached my Aptt. I took a shower and left to meet my friend.

Btw I forgot to introduce HIM didn't I. Well he is Manik Malhotra. Yes The Manik Malhotra, the rockstar and FAB 5 lead singer ,the famous business tycoon and most importantly The Love Of My Life.

So here goes the first chapter. What do you think . So all those who wondered who the guy was well who else ofcourse Manik and about the lil girl well todi mystery toh honi chahiye . Drop your comments and silent readers yaar comment nhi krna toh atleast like hi krdo

Love
R
PS if anyone wants me to PM them then drop a msg and specify for which of my story you want the PM.
PSS Will update My Love Will Heal you in evening
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update
so many confusions😕
is tia really manik's daughter?
cont soon

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