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Aayat23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: payal94
Wonderful os

THANK YOU...

GLAD TO KNOW YOU LIKED IT😊

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: prerulalli
Mukta 🤗🤗
HELLO PRERNA 🤗🤗

Iam back to comment on ur work but on a different forum...😉
YEAH...AND I'M GLAD ATLEAST I FOUND YOU HERE...😃

i know i couldn't comment there as i have my exams nearing just like u😊😊😊

But no probs..

OH YOU TOO HAVE YOUR EXAMS...ALL THE VERY BEST THEN😊

This story is so heartwrenching in the beginning only to end in a beautiful way

👏

Loved it to the core

THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH FOR COMPLIMENTS...'GLAD TO KNOW YOU LIKED IT😊

Hope u r doing well with ur exams
YAAR STILL SUBMISSIONS ARE GOING ON...EXAM WILL START AFTER 28TH APRIL...

All the best and do write more😊😊
ALL THE BEST TO YOU TOO...AND YEAH WILL TRY TO😊

Love,

Prerana😊😊😊

STAY BLESSED

MUKTA..

MY REPLY IN BLUE😉

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: hs77
Loveliest piece of fiction, that too without using names
I loved how manik brought her out of the darkness with his patience and TLC

You described nandini's trauma beautifully

And loved his mom's part too, though I'd say she was at fault for dragging her otherwise well intentioned idea

The confrontation at the park was much needed and it provided the most prominent aspect of the story

Well if this is your first, then girl you're here to stay! And rock!

Keep writing

HEY...THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR WONDERFUL COMMENT...

GLAD TO KNOW YOU LIKED THIS IDEA OF NAMELESS FICTION😊...

gIRL WENT THROUGH HELL SO IT WAS NATURAL FOR HER TO LOSE IT YET SHE HELD THAT INVISIBLE THREAD AND HE WAS THERE HOLDING OTHER END..

HIS MOM WAS AT FAULT TOO BUT SHE WAS MOTHER AT THE END AND WANTED GOOD FOR HER CHILD..

YES...YOU SAID IT RIGHT THAT CONFRONTATION WAS MUCH NEEDED, SO GLAD O KNOW YOU THOUGHT IT TO BE MOST PROMINENT ASPECT OF THE STORY😊

WELL IT'S ACTUALLY MY FIRST STORY IN THE SENSE OF THIS WAY AS IN NOT USING NAMES ELSE I HAVE WRITTEN QUITE FEW ON OTHER COUPLES...IF YOU READ OTHER THAN MANAN THEY YOU CAN CHECK IT...LINK IS IN MY SIGNATURE OR I WILL TRY TO POST THEM ON MANAN TOO...

THANK YOU ONCE AGAIN AND STAY BLESSED

MUKTA😊

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: KhdAne
AND I DONT HAVE WORDS WHAT I FELT AFTER READING YOUR WORK...YU JUST PRESSED MY MOST SENSITIVE NERVE...HER CAUSE OF PAIN..TEARS FLOWING THROUGHOUT THE STORY HW I CONTROLLED MYSELF ONLY I KNOW.
OFCOURSE YU HAV WROTE AN AMAZING PIECE KUDOS!! HOPE TO READ MORE FROM YOU!!
KEEP SMILING!!
WELL I LOVE EMOTIONAL STORIES :) :) 👏 👏

HEY...THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR WONDERFUL COMMENT...

GLAD TO KNOW YOU LIKED THIS IDEA OF NAMELESS FICTION😊...

gIRL WENT THROUGH HELL SO IT WAS NATURAL FOR HER TO LOSE IT YET SHE HELD THAT INVISIBLE THREAD AND HE WAS THERE HOLDING OTHER END..

YOU LIKE EMOTIONAL STORIES?

😊

THEN I GUESS YOU WILL LIKE MINE TOO AS IT'S MY MOST FAV GENRE OF WRITING...

IF IT MADE YOU CRY THEN I WILL TAKE IT AS COMPLIMENT😳..BUT SORRY TO DO SO😊

YEAH WILL TRY TO WRITE MORE😊

THANK YOU ONCE AGAIN AND STAY BLESSED

MUKTA😊

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: elsaanna
so beautiful..
pure..

wonderful..

tremendous job..

beautifully written..

thanks for this truly commendable,superb story..

keep writing..

i would love to read..again and again..

God bless you..

HEY...THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR WONDERFUL COMMENT...

GLAD TO KNOW YOU LIKED IT AND THOUGHT IT TO BE BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN..

IT IS BEST COMPLIMENT THAT READER WANT TO READ AND REREAD THE STORY😳

THANK YOU ONCE AGAIN AND STAY BLESSED

MUKTA😊