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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shoana

awesome update dear
nandini is too cute
she asked him to carry her
Breaking of nandini 's sandal proved beneficial
finally nandini was successful in bringing bAck music in his life
loved the song...the lyrics were Awesome it looked like they were written on manik's condition
thanks for pm dear
take care
stay blessed

Thank u so much.. The soul of manan is their music.. N either they will find it or music will find them.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shaan...

Amazing update...

Manan's moments were awesome...
Their convo was superb...
Luved it...
Thnx 4 d pm...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...

thank u so much,
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: _Samthanian_

Damnnn...
Its my fav chappy from the whole ff till yet...
Just loved it...
Uh penned it beautifully...
She gave his Music back to him...
Just like he gave her music after that Pandit incident...
Hats off to uh girl...
Continue soon..
Eagerly waiting for next...


Luv uh,
Garimaaa

Yes u r right,, personally even i felt that this was d best chappy till now, not bcz of fancy wrds or dialogues but because this chapter had a soul of its own. N lemme tell u a secret, i didnt plan this, i didnt choose this.. Literally this song, this music chose me. I had written in d intro that destiny will guide me through as destiny had brought them together n thats what is happening
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vaanii078

words are not enough for your magical writing skills. I mean u r awesome. sooo talented. And the last two part was incredible. The way you showed maniks pain of being all alone was perfect. That song was really an inspirational one not only for our manik but also for your readers .can't wait to read more.

Thank u dear.. I strive to keep them real..
You r right that song was almost written for him and for us too. They should live, fail and then win and through their journey they should teach us a thing or two about life, friensdhip and love.

I m glad u liked it.

Love
RK
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Posted: 9 years ago
Well this one was actually very special sach me manan wali feeling ati h tumhari fiction pdah kar and it was long enough purane update se thoda bda tha i liked it and i m feeling bad for both them i wish to see them together asap but lets see what is stored for us, and your skills are really great yar matlab kafi ache se u describe the feelings, sceneries and lot of things everything and comparison, kitna time ho gya writing me ? Aisa lgta h its been years youre in writing because the words are awesome, i really need to learn it from you anyways update soon waiting for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

Well this one was actually very special sach me manan wali feeling ati h tumhari fiction pdah kar and it was long enough purane update se thoda bda tha i liked it and i m feeling bad for both them i wish to see them together asap but lets see what is stored for us, and your skills are really great yar matlab kafi ache se u describe the feelings, sceneries and lot of things everything and comparison, kitna time ho gya writing me ? Aisa lgta h its been years youre in writing because the words are awesome, i really need to learn it from you anyways update soon waiting for the next update


Check ur pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey roh

wow you made my sunday


this update was magical

he had a peaceful sleep with her

he don't want to disturb her but ...


Roh u r blessed with some magical power yaar the way you wrote those lines

uff ... hum to fidaa hogaye hai


the word SUNRISE :nandinin what system boot :laptop

😃

Nandini was not just a piece she was a limited edition custom made pc ...

😃

Even god must have been confused ...with her specifications ...

😃


whn manik offered to carry her ...nandini s reaction was thanq aaiyyappa pehli baar MnM have spoken sense

😃

unmatched quality of walking right in to trouble

😃

manik did nt like nandini s idea but he was grateful to her as she had given him some wonderful moments so he agreed to close his eyes

this song I heard it before

but toda this song was really magical

thanq for that note whr u clearly mentioned
no no ordered to listen to this song

😃

😆😆😆

when she told him to open his eyes

that moment was beautiful n the song ...😊




he got tears in his eyes

he was speechless
she had given him a wonderful moment

nandini was not bothered about her feet

she didn't even care that this is the same MONSTER who left her heart broken

but she was happy because she had given him his MUSIC

typical nandini

even if she wants
even if she tells

even if she tries

she cant hurt her monster
she cant she just cant ...


hey

superb update

👏

take care dear

thamanna









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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: thamannamanan1

hey roh

wow you made my sunday


this update was magical

he had a peaceful sleep with her

he don't want to disturb her but ...


Roh u r blessed with some magical power yaar the way you wrote those lines

uff ... hum to fidaa hogaye hai


the word SUNRISE :nandinin what system boot :laptop

😃

Nandini was not just a piece she was a limited edition custom made pc ...

😃

Even god must have been confused ...with her specifications ...

😃


whn manik offered to carry her ...nandini s reaction was thanq aaiyyappa pehli baar MnM have spoken sense

😃

unmatched quality of walking right in to trouble

😃

manik did nt like nandini s idea but he was grateful to her as she had given him some wonderful moments so he agreed to close his eyes

this song I heard it before

but toda this song was really magical

thanq for that note whr u clearly mentioned
no no ordered to listen to this song

😃

😆😆😆

when she told him to open his eyes

that moment was beautiful n the song ...😊




he got tears in his eyes

he was speechless
she had given him a wonderful moment

nandini was not bothered about her feet

she didn't even care that this is the same MONSTER who left her heart broken

but she was happy because she had given him his MUSIC

typical nandini

even if she wants
even if she tells

even if she tries

she cant hurt her monster
she cant she just cant ...


hey

superb update

👏

take care dear

thamanna



I was waiting for u.. since the moment i posted.. this post was different, I didnt write it, something guided me to write this... i dont know what and who...

n yes u were right NAndini, no matter what happens can never hurt him,

I dont know what else to write.. this was a little too emotionally overwhelming
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Posted: 9 years ago

My beloved readers,

I realized I have never really spoken to you, never had one of those heart to heart chats with you. So one month and 28 chapters later, here I am, trying to breathe and look back at the journey so far.

Yes, breathe... because it has been pretty breathless so far, one chapter a day, sometimes I have written faster than you have read :)

So let's just pause for a while and rewind. Rewind to 16th April.

Every one of us has a dream, and that dream for me was to write. Write not for livelihood (I do something else to earn my bread and butter), but write for my soul. I have been writing for as long as I can remember, but in bits and pieces..or more approriately..in paragraphs and stanzas..

I have written short stories before but I have never had the courage to delve into fanfiction, and I will tell you why.

Fanfiction is tricky because you are weaving your story around characters who your readers know inside out. You cant mess with your characters or your readers will chop u too pieces (*wink). And then you have to make a commitment to write at a certain frequency which for me happens to be daily. So I never considered writing one.

Then Manan happened to me. I don't know why, where, when I fell in love with them. To be honest with you I hadn't seen them on TV (I don't really watch TV and that's another story), I just happened to search for a song and destiny brought them to me. Within a month, I had finished the entire series on youtube & FB and then I started watching season 2 and as many of you would identify with me, I was left heartbroken. It was beyond me how someone could ruin something so beautiful, how the creatives could dig their own grave and crush so many hearts. I felt angry. I needed a closure. For days I pondered over it and finally came up with the thought,

'If you can't fix it, Create it'

And I started writing, not for readers, not for accolades, not for hits and likes but for myself, out of love for the guy who shines like stars and the girl who glows like fireflies and for their love that transcends eternity.

When I started I didn't know how far I would go, I didn't know if even a single person will read my words, I didn't know if I would be able to bring Manik and Nandini to life, I didn't know whether I would be able to steal time out from my life that ticks away like clockwork.

But here I am, doing better than ok. I have my readers (I know compared to other FFs, I have a chotu sa reader base, but I was never in the race to compete) some who are graceful enough to cheer me up with their comments and some who perhaps want to say a lot but don't find the right words. But they all wait eagerly for me to post the updates.

I am doing ok, stealing time from my rides in the metro on the way to office, stealing time in between presentations and stealing time from sleep.

I am doing great learning from you all, because you are my mirror and you show me my beauty as well as my flaws.

I am doing great because I have made some friends here..

And I am doing great because I am living Manan, I am painting them in my colours :) And sometimes when some of the chapters come out good, I read them again and again just like u do and I smile to myself (*stupid me)

But it has ceased to remain just my dream, for those of u reading this, this is now a collective dream. I never really had a decent introduction, but today, I invite u all to come onboard this journey. Please feel free to drop in your ur suggestions, complaints, praises.. I cant guarantee that I would always be able to incorporate every single suggestion of yours because I already have a journey planned in my head, but I would be more than glad to know and think and tweak if required.

I have come a long way but I have far to go. Thank you very very much for your support till date. I hope you would continue supporting me. Do like and share if you feel its worthy of being shared and please keep reading. U push me to better myself every single day.

The next update will be up soon :)


Love

RK21

Edited by rk21 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
u r such an amazing writer👏
and i really love this story😃

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