Manan os Aye khuda

this story is different guyzzz i hope u guyzzz will like it ..
Its a story of man who lost everything but got a sweet reason to live ...

Character sketch .

MANIK MALHOTRA : A secret agent officer get trained for special missions dedicated towards his work ...
Something happened that change his life ...

NANDANI MALHOTRA : Manik malhotra wife irrevocably in love with each other ...

ANANYA : A small girl leave with her mom ...

Thy r some more characters will come in the os ..

This concept come in my mind whn I was listening this song n whn I watch the movie thought that this will b amazing os on manan ...

Hope u all like...
give ur precious comments n review I will update the os till afternoon ..

stay blessed

samkhan

PART 1

PRESENT..
Manik was out for some work he came across a small girl .

Manik thought that she has lost a way to her house so her take her with him to his house..

(Manik leave a simple life alone )

Manik to a girl : wht is ur name .

Girl : Ananya .
Aap ka naam kya hai .

Manik : mera naam Manik hai ..
aap waha akele kya kar re the ..

Ananya : woh kuch nai mai school se arahi thi ..

Manik : ook aap ka ghar kaha hai ..

Ananya : yahi pass hi hai.
( Ananya call Manik as handsome )
Handsome I see u daily here ...

Manik : ooh toh u stay near my only ..
(This was first time manik was talking to someone to good after 5 years )...

Manik : Kuch khaogi

Ananya: yaha bohath bhuk lagi hai pasta khaongi..

Manik : ook lets make pasta for u ...

In sometime pasta was ready manik n Ananya have it while talking or I should say only Ananya was talking ...

Manik : ok Ananya I will drop u home ur mom must b worried ...

Ananya n manik leave for Ananya home ..

Ananya mom was navya..

Manik : Navya tum ..

Navya : manik tum yaha

Manik : haa yeh waha raste me Ananya mili thi soo I came to drop ...
I will leave .

( manik leave as if he will stand anymore thr he will breakdown )

Flash back

Thy r seven friends ...

Navya : yaar baas kar kitna pakega ..
From last half n hour u r giving this lecture ...

Cabir : yaah bro baas kar hum samaj gae ..
Tu majnu hi thik hai yaar serious math hoya kar.

Nandani while blushing : cabir shut up ..

Manik glares@ cabir give I will not leave u look ..

Ook guyzz lets leave ...

All in unison said : thank god . Yah lets leave ..

Manik gave a whatever look n leave ...

PRESENT ..

Le aayi hai beethe huae
Lamhon ko phir haan yeh zindagi
Yoon beraham si ho gayi
Lene chali jaan ye zindagi
Khuda kyun ruth gaya mujhse
Nahi tha bair mera tujhse
Kyun tune cheen liya mujhse mera jahan
Aye Khuda (khuda)
Tu bata (bata)

My life not same maine sab kho diya ...
My life my love.

Somedays pass manik n Anany share a good bond now...

Ananya : handsome chalo na kahi bahar chalte hai ..

Manik : nai Ananya phir kabhi I m so tired ..
N aap b ghar jao hum phir kabhi jaenge ..

Ananya : handsome this is not fair ha u always do this ..

Manik : plzz Ananya baby phir kabhi jaenge aap ke mom ko math bolna aap yaha the ..

Navya come to manik house..

Navya : kyu manik ,
Kyu bhag rahe ho hum sab se hume pata hai tumare liye woh sab bhulana is not easy but , running is not the solution manik...

Manik : navya plzzz mujhe nahi bath karni jao yaha se ...
Aur kya bhulu ki meri wajase mera pyaar mere sath nahi hai yah yeh ke mere wajah se tumlog ki b life danger me thi ...

Just go from here navya leave ..

Navya :manik

Manik : I said leave ...

After navya left manik take a frame in this hand n start crying ...

Flashback ...
Manik was on his leave for somedays..

Nandani n manik was having good time ..
Nandani : This is 2 yr 6 months manik we r married ...

Manik : yaah baby life is so beautiful with u n now my princess will also come ..

Nandani : hw can u b so sure it will b a girl ..

Manik : it will b a girl my cute princess ..

Nandani : manik kal appointment hai doctor se ..

Manik : yaah Nandani we will go ..

Next day
Nandani : manik get ready soon hume late hora hai ..

Manik : yaah baby I m ready lets leave ...

Manik Nandani leave for hospital ..

Everything was going good thy whr soo happy .

Nandani was waiting in the car manik was coming down he got a call he receive n wht he listen shock him to the hell ..
He directly see to Nandani it was late the truck attack the car ..

Manik : Nandani

Some persons shout manik ..
The call was from some members from his officer ...
To warn him ..

After getting cure from he left everything his job his friends everyone go sooo away ..

PRESENT
Le aayi hai beethe huae
Lamhon ko phir haan yeh zindagi
Yoon beraham si ho gayi
Lene chali jaan ye zindagi
Khuda kyun ruth gaya mujhse
Nahi tha bair mera tujhse
Kyun thune cheen liya mujhse mera jahan
Aye Khuda (khuda)
Tu bata (bata)
Yeh kya kiya Khuda.. haaye!
Yeh kyun kiya Khuda
Bata mere Khuda..
Thi kya meri khata..
Bejaan si hai zindagi
Har saans hai ghumzada...

For some days manik dnt meet anyone ..

One fine day manik n Ananya was out as a Ananya wish to have lunch out ..

( Manik love Ananya soo much because he feel he got his daughter in her )

But how can life give a happiness ..

Some goons kidnapped Ananya ..

Yeh kya kiya Khuda.. haaye!
Yeh kyun kiya Khuda
Bata mere Khuda..
Thi kya meri khata..
Ummeed hai tutti hui
Tanhaaiyon ka daur hain
Hai khwaishein bikhri huyi
Khamoshiyon ka shor hai
Bula le apne paas mujhe
Naa aaye jeena raas mujhe
Kyun thune cheen liya mujhse mera jahan..
Aye Khuda (khuda)
Tu bata (bata)
Yeh kya kiya Khuda.. haaye!
Yeh kyun kiya Khuda
Bata mere Khuda..
Thi kya meri khata..
Bejaan si hai zindagi
Har saans hai ghamzada
Yeh kya kiya Khuda.. haaye!
Yeh kyun kiya Khuda
Bata mere Khuda..
Thi kya meri khata..

After kidnapping Ananya thy came to Ananya house n killed navya ..

That goons r from the gang who run many illegal crimes ...

(Many childs get kidnapped and r use to beg and more )

Ananya getting kidnapped this is it for manik he lost his temper.

After seeing navya in that condition he was so broken...

He get a call unknown no.

Person : do our work n get the girl ..

Manik : kya karna hai ..

Manik did everything according to thm but he dnt got Ananya back ...

He thought thy have killed Ananya ...

He search that gang of people n had fight with .

With that manik get Into police trouble ..

As he was a trained officer he ran from the hand of detective officers .

He came across a lead of head member of the gang
N thr he into a big fight he get injured he killed the every persons of that gang ...
As it will give him peace .

Manik was abt to shoot him self he see Ananya come running to him she hug him sooo tight ..

Aye khuda tune rahaam kiya Aye khuda

Aye khuda tune karam kiya ..
Aye khuda ..

Officers whr soo kind with manik he has taken a law in hand but he safe many childrens lifes..

He gave every possible things to Ananya ..

Maniksee n smile to Ananya

Ananya smile back n said : handsome tum smile b karte ho mujhe aaj pata chala ...

Manik smile back b said: Ananya wait karoge na aap mera ..

One hug dogi
Thy both hug each tight.

Thy was a peaceful smile on Manik n Ananya face ...

Ananya responsibility was given to some near by orphan age till manik get out ...

After 1 n half year manik was out n Ananya n manik have a beautiful life ...

AYE KHUDA TUNE KARAM KIYA ...

.To B Cont

HOPE U GUYZZZ LIKE IT ...
AVOID MISTAKES PLZZZ GIVE UR REVIEW N LIKE N COMMENTS.

STAY BLESSED ..

SAMKHAN

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awesome...
aye khuda is one of my favorite songs... after watching the movie, even I thought it could be good concept on manan... at that that time I was like 'I wish someone write ss/os based on this concept'...you fulfilled my wish...

Originally posted by: Snehasn

Gossh Sam
You literally made me cry...
This was really heart touching one
But what's the reason they killed Nandu... Navya??
Where's other member's of fab 5??
Who's Ananya's father??
So many questions...
I think you've to make it as shot's... Coz it's still not clear... So can you plss continue and give the right direction to story??
Pleejjj... It's really good one... And I am asking you to drag it little...
Hope you will consider it..

You wrote really well
Want to read many more from you
Try some more OS
Hehehe... Not asking more naa:P

Thanks for the pm
Hope you will continue
Will be waiting for next part:P

Take care

I will clear it I will give one more update on this update ..
for u ...
Thnks u like it ...

n u dnt ask much ..

Originally posted by: ProttashaPriya

awesome...
aye khuda is one of my favorite songs... after watching the movie, even I thought it could be good concept on manan... at that that time I was like 'I wish someone write ss/os based on this concept'...you fulfilled my wish...

thnks dear ...

Originally posted by: Manansamkhan

I will clear it I will give one more update on this update ..
for u ...
Thnks u like it ...

n u dnt ask much ..

Really... Wowww...
Bring it on soon
I'm super excited
Thank you so so so much...

Originally posted by: Snehasn

Really... Wowww...
Bring it on soon
I'm super excited
Thank you so so so much...

ur welcome ...

I think I have edit the first update n give it as first part ...
I will update it in ni8 ...
I Have to answer all ur question ri8 n also it should look perfect ...

NOTE

I want to make it as a TS as some question r not clear for some readers of the story...

hope u guyzz dnt have problem with it ..

till ni8 u will get the next update ...

plzz give ur review ...

thnks for liking the story ..
after a long time writing something on manan..
feeling good to back on IF..

stay blessed .


samkhan

Originally posted by: Manansamkhan

ur welcome ...

I think I have edit the first update n give it as first part ...
I will update it in ni8 ...
I Have to answer all ur question ri8 n also it should look perfect ...

Done done... Kabhi bhi do update... Its ok
Par yeah... I'll be waiting... Hehehe...
Ok... Edit karo... And yeah you've to clear doubts:p