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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Am sorry for being late..
Nice storyline..

It's different... Loved it.
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
new concept ..

heart wrenching update ..
Nandani has gone through so much pain bcoz of her father ...

cont soon ..

stay blessed ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Mindblowing concept..!
Nandini suffered so much..

Their hug..i loved that..!
U made me cry..!

Really excited for the nxt update..!

Bt where is nandini..nw..?

Plz update soon..!

Eagerly waiting..for the nxt update.!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Interesting story
Wohh manik celebrating his break up
Omg nandu n her past
She has suffered sooo much
Manik Phele nanzar mei fida uspe
Aww he is gonna take care of her now
Thnkz 4 the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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U Touched My Soul


Part : 2 (Final Part)


Outside Hotel room

"Bhai.. ushne tujhe kl kuch mila kr toh nhi pila diya na.. kaisi bekhi bate kr rha hai.."cabir said in fun way to manik when tell his friends that fallen in love with nandini


"Cabir.. manik.. ka ek din mase krne pet nhi bahra aur use aur mase krne hai uske sth.. aur aise yeh love ka naam de rhai hai.. manik.. humhai bhi thodhe fun krne de uske sth.."His friend Druv said n awaken the monster in him n than he get a shock


Manik puch hard on his face n shout angrily"shut.. up.. bola na i love her how dare u to say.. dat."


"Manik.. relax.. "cabir said holding him from shoulder


"Rainde yr.. dikh liya humhri doshti ko bsh itni hi thi.. tum mujhe kabhi smj hi nhi pae.. "Manik said sadly looking both of them n they both get shocked after seeing manik so serious first time in his life


"Manik.. aisi bt nhi we understand u.. hua kya jo tujhe ushe itna pyaar ho gya aur tune druv pr bhi haath utha diya aisa toh hum teri pichli girl frnd ke bare mein bhi bolte.. thai.. "cabir asked now calmly n manik tell whole story of that girl


"I don't know mujhe kabhi aisa feel nhi hua uska pain sunkr i feel ache in my heart in whole i never bothered about anyone tears but her tears affect me n whole life i was so wrong i thing everyone live life happily but after meeting her i came to know that there many who r suffering like her.. i..love her yr.. really.. i want to see her happy . Mujhe tb tk chain nhi aega jb tk i will not see her happy"manik said making his friends hell shocked they can't just believing that the person standing infront of their eyes is manik or someone else


"Manik.. hum yeh toh nhi jante ki pyaar kya hota hai but we always support to u.. "cabir said


"Thank u cabir "manik said hugging cabir n druv felt bad for his statement


"I m sorry.."druv said in guilt


"Ab ruhega kya ?"manik said n they hug together


"Sb milwa toh de humhri babhi se.."cabir said


"Guyz.. abhi u can't meet her she is very scared voh tumhai dekh aur dhr jaegi.."manik said
N they made sad pout


"Manik it's okay but tu ushe lekr kha jaega uncle aunty ko kya bolega.."druv said


"Mom dad 2 4 din ke liye tour pr gye hai. Tb toh ghr phr aage ki baadh mein dekhege.. "manik said


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"Dekho tumhai mujhe darne ki zarrorat nhi hai.. i m not going to harm u.. "manik said when she get up from sleep n sit on bed holding her knees


"Mein tumhai apne ghr lekr ja rha there u will be safe "manik said but she didn't say anything


"Wear this u feel comfortable"manik said giving her proper dress as he can see she is feeling uncomfortable in her short dress


And she without saying anything taking dress goes to bath to change


_________


Manik P.O.V.

I taking her to my place i know she is very scared but i will make her believe that she is safe wid me i know it going to be very difficult but i will..


In whole way she keep looking outside i can feel her pain becoz she is my soulmate


After 1 hour we reached n come outside n open the door of her side but she didn't came out as she lost in deep thought


"We.. "i about to say to her by touching her shoulder but with in a sec. She jerked my hand as i can feel she got hell scared by this only


"Voh i was saying that we reached home.. u can come out"i said looked at me trying to recognise me.. n than she come oustide n looks at house


I take her to my room as i don't want her live in guest room or some other room as her place is in only in my bedroom


"Dekho.. tum bina kisi tension ke yha rhao.. mein yhi hn kisi jis ki zarrorat ho u can call me.. "i by saying this come outside


Till night she remain inside n whole day i keep on wht i can do make her happy , to make her believe that she safe here


We were eating food n i was trying hard to make her speak by sharing my funny experience but she was eating dinner silently


"Nandini.. i know it's not easy to forgot that thing easily but believe me i m not going to harm u.. i wanna take u out from every pain i wanna see.. u.. happy.."i said as i really wanna she her happy n than ashe looked at me tear fall from her eyes n close my eyes to control myself


"Kyo.. kar rhai ho.. jishe tum pyaar bol rhai voh pyaar nhi hai.. ek mujh jaisi lachr pr ek daya ae hai tumhai bs aur aghr pyaar hai bhi toh mein tum kabhi kuch nhi de pau.. becoz meri jindge mein pain ke sifa kuch nhi hai.. "she said looking at me i can clearly from her painfull voice that feel how broken she is but i wanna say that i m not showing any mercy on her n this only my true love aur i will love u throughout my life without accepting anything in return


But before that i can say something she left from there n go inside the room cryingly


Writter P.O.V.

She come inside n close the door n ly down on bed start crying she don't want to anyone to feel her pain but after meeting him she is wanna remove her pain but she knows if she will than inreturn he get pain n only pain


Here manik reaches at her room n open the door n see her crying n tear also fell from her eyes she looking at her Start singing
(Awargi se dil bhar gaya
Teri gali mein rehne laga
Jaise kabhi bhi ki na kisiki
Teri fikar mein rehne laga)
The each n everyword he is saying truly from his heart n she cry more after listening this
As she thinking she is not made for love she made for taking pain n only pain n she don't wanna involve anyone in this

(Tere aansu piyu main
Kabhi tujhko hassaun
Tujhe door se dekhun
Kabhi dil mein basaun)
Manik bend down on floor near to her face n n remove her hair n by caressing her face he remove her tear n sings n she keep closing her eyes


(Tere khaatir jeeyun main
Kabhi tujhpe lutaaun
Ye jaan meri jaan hai tu..bas tu..)
Now she open her eyes n he sings deeply looking into her eyes he wanna say thatHe want to reside her in his heart
He want to live for her he want to sacrifice his life for her, now she is his life

(Na tu khud ka tha kabhi
Na khuda ka main..
Tu mila toh hogaya
Khudbakhud tera main)
He get up from floor n sit on bed n make her set up on bed holding her face while singing deeply looking into her eyes


(Hone laga hai khud pe
Ab mujhko yakin
Imaan badal ke mera
Tu badalna nahi..)
He than cubbing her face sings he want to say that either he belong to himself nor to God
When he met her, he automatically became of her


(Tere khuda se maangu main kya?
Mujhko duaae aati nahi
Tujhse mohabbat kaise karun main?
Mujhko wafa ae aati nahi)
She get up from bed ran toward window n sings tear continuously falling from her eyes n he get up from bed look toward her

(Tujhe dekh ke lekhin
Yeh dil dagmagaaye
Mujhe aazaan dekar
Tu mujhko jagaye
Mujhe meri nazar mein
Tu mujhko uttaye
Mera imaan meri jaan hai tu..)
She than turn looks toward him n sings


(Bas tu.. Hai tu.. Hai Tu..)
She than ran n crashes in his arm n he also hold her tightly as he wanna protect her from dark world


"Mujhe wha nhi jaana.. plz.. take me out of this pain.. "Nandini said crying in his arm


_______


Some days passes in morning he come to her room


"Voh aaj mein tumhai khi lekr jana hai toh yeh dress phn lena"manik said giving her dress n she only nodded


They were going from car n suddenly in b/w the way manik stopped the car n make her to come with him


And he take her gola stall

"Bolo.. konsa wla khana hai "manik asked n she replied in low voice "koe bhi.."


And manik smile on innocence n ask the sales man to give 2 kala khata


"Wait.. i tell u ishe kaise khate hai.."Manik said stopping her
In b/w eating


"Yeh.. dekho aise.."he said sucks it n make sound


"Are.. dekh kya rhi ho.. tum aise hi khao.."manik said n she take also make sound but lit bit more


Than she look here n there feel shy n he smiles


Than he take her to parlor


"Yeh tum mujhe kha lekr ae.. ho.." she asked n scared lit bit


"Hey.. relax.. bs vaise u r beautiful aski koe zarrorat nhi hai but i want that my girl will look best.. zaddha kuch nhi bs they make hairstyle n lit bit more.. things.."he explain her holding her hand n give her smile


_________


After they make her ready nandini looked at mirror n she herself can't believe that she can be look so beautiful n than she turn n looked at him


Manik just looking at him she is looking like a fairy


"Beautifull.."manik come toward her n say in her ear n kiss on her cheeks n everyone claps she feel so special


"Hum kha ja rhai hai.."she asked in low voice looking toward when manik taking her somewhere from car


"Hum kha ja rhai hai yeh ek surprise hai.. "he said n she looked away


In whole way manik keep on talking to her.. but she speak very less



Suddenly he stopped the car n ask her to come out n take her somewhere


And she got fully amazed after seeing the veiw infront of her eyes as the place is fully decorated n sitting arrangement is there



For the first time he looked glow on face n she admiring the place n he is admiring her


"Shall we proceed "he asked n fowarding her hand n she holding her take her to setting place


And forwand the chair n she sit n than he also sit n than servant serve the juice to them n than he claps two time some guitarist start playing the guitar


And he get up from chair n goes toward her


"May i get a honour to dance with beautiful lady.. "he said forwarding her hand she smile lit bit n hold her hand get up


"U can smile tax nhi lgta " he said n she smiles n he just lost in her smile


Than they have romantic dance n she feel lit bit shy in starting but than she feel comfortable


"Hmm.. u dance so osm.."He said when they settle down again n she smile lit bit


"Aur tum smile krte aur bhi beautiful lgti ho.."he said she now smile more


Than they have a dinner with talks now she is feeling uncomfortable with him


_________


"Thank.. u.. this is best n special day of my life.. "she said when they were going to there room


"There r more to come.."manik said


"Gud.. night"he said pecking her forhead


Manik comes to guest room as nandini is living in his room n he is guest room


"Nandini voh din dur nhi jb tum mujhe puri tarha se accept kr logi.."manik said to himself


"Manik kl mein tumhai apni dil ki bt bol dogi.. "she said before sleeping


Next day she get n found the note on bed of manik


I m sorry mujhe subha subha khi jaana padha but i have surprise for u.. be ready till 1pm


"Suprise toh mein bhi tumhai dungi.."she said n get with hope that today she will tell her feelings


She is preparing his favorite food when one servant came running


"Mam.. koe log ae zabardasti ghr mein gusne ki kosish kar rhai aur bol voh apko liye bina khi nhi jaege.."servant said n she immidaitly comes to know who they can be


She immidaitly call to manik from landline but he is not picking up the phone n she start sweating torture of one mouth coming in her mind


_________


Manik reached home with her parent n he tell everything to his parent n they wholeheartedly accept nandini


"Ramlal..."Mr.Mahlotra said petting face of watchman


"Nandini..."manik saying this ran inside the house immidaitly

He feel on the groud after seeing the condition of go house broken vase n some more thing n servant tell that they take her forcely


"Nandini..."he screams after listening his scream his parent also came inside


"Manik.. beta.. kya.. hua."his mom asked taking him in his arm


"Mom.. voh log ushai le gye.. meine ushai promise kiya tha that ab ushai vha nhi jane.. dunga.."he said b/w his crys


"Manik.. chup.. ho jao.. beta.. hum ushai vapas lekr aege.."mrs. Mahotra said


"Yes.. mom mein ushai vapas lekr auga.."manik said getting up wiping his tear


"Mein ACP se bt krta hn.. manik tu jaldi ja mein Police force ke sth vha ata hn.."Mr. Mahlotra said


___________


"Plz.. let me.. go.. plz.."nandini begged as one person on his shoulder taking into bedroom


Than he throw her on bed n she shout


And than the person come top of her n tore her dress from side n kisses there n she kept on pleading n resisting him but he was too.. strong..


"Manik.. plz.. ajao..."she shouting again n again this..


The person about to claim her lips she closes her eyes n just praying to send manik


And there is loud sound on door as manik entered in room broking the door


"Manik.."nandini looked at him happily n called him


Manik beat the man blue n black n than police control him n arrest the man n sealed the place


Manik go to nandini n hold her tightly n said as he feels guilty "i m sorry..."


"Manik.. i know tum mujhe bacha loge i love u.."she said hugging him more tigher


After 4 year



Small 4 year girl came n closes manik eyes from backward when he thinking about the day when he met his soulmate


"Aye.. meri princess.. "manik said removing taking her in his lap


"Papa.. gul mrng.."the lit girl said she is manan daughter name Niharika


"Gul mrng.. my princess.."manik said pecking her forhead


"Papa.. mumma.. ki yl.. aa lhi.. hai.."She said sadly n manik mad sad face


"Princess.. mumma.. is here.."nandini said from the door as nandini is gone for 2 days out of mumbai for work


"Mumma.. "Niharika rans to door n nandini bend down opening her hand n she take her in his arm


And manik smilingly comes there looks most beautiful scene in front of his eyes his most imp. Person of his life hugging eachother


"Acha.. toh.. mumma agae.. papa ko bhul gye.. princess.."manik said in fun way


"No.. papa.. prlence(princess) kabhi ni bhul slti papa ko.."she said sadly n manik take her in his arm n said "ale papa toh mask kr rhai. Thai.. "


And nandini smiles n manik also hug nandini n said "i miss u.. shona.. "


"I miss u.. both.."she said petting her hand on niharika head n rested her on manik chest n manik pecks both of them head


End...


So here. End of this.. story..
Hope u all like it.. n guyz.. plz.. do big wale comment as i give u give a big upade n the song which i added is the nice from love games.. n howz the pic


Love Mehak

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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
awww..
so cute..
emotional...
beautiful..
ending is too good..
angel niharika...
nice job mehek...👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Nice and emotional ts.
Loved the way Manik trying to make her comfortable...😊.
Song was so perfect according to the scene...😊.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Lovely update
Loved all the efforts of Manik
The surprise was beautiful
Thnk god Nandu was fine😃
Ending was perfect
Loved their princess Niharika
😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
nice ts dear...loved it very much...it was really very beautiful...
keep writing more ts...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Beautiful story dear
So.. awesomely written
It had everything drama action and comedy!
Very sweet!
Thanks for the pm dear!

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