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archu_asok

@archu_asok

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Posted: 9 years ago

#971

Awesome update. Manik's state was well penned and heartbreaking. U nailed it. Hats off. Flashback was emotional. Church part was rocking. Loved the way manik expressed his past in front of God.manan's moments were beautifully penned. Loved it. Wow nandini want to come back to manik.us means nandini and baby. From ur words seems like next update is going to be emotional. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon. Thanks for pm.love to read further

Keep writing

Stay blessed😊

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591994

@591994

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Posted: 9 years ago

#972

Godd...it was so heart wrenching dear...loved it to the core...so she want to come back...bt i think u r going to seperate them before even their reunion...n i think nandu is pregnant too...
Will be waiting fr next...
Cont. Soon...

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Aakifa Hussain

@Aakifa_Hussain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#973

So heart wrenching chappy Mao..!
Hum pdhke ro dete h tum kese likh leti ho..!?

Manik's condition wen he woke up.. I hd no words to say hw I felt while readng it.. hw He might b feeling knwing dat shez nt gonna cum back..!?

So emotional..!

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ritu bansal

@ritzsubu1204

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Posted: 9 years ago

#974

is nandini pregnant ??

if plz dont harm their child..!!

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Aakifa Hussain

@Aakifa_Hussain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#975

"Love of My Life
Beat of My Heart
Soul of My Body
Blood of My Veins
Wisdom of My Mind..!
I loved her truly
I loved her madly
I loved her insanely"

My heart melted while readng dis lines Mao..!
U deserve Massive appreciation for writing dis b'fully..!

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Vandyandy

@Vandyandy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#976

OHHH Mawara ...

Itna emotional ...kyun...

Giving so much of pain to ur little heart...

Manik was totally shattered ...

It was as if he was dead... But saasse chal rahe thi...

Manik's condition shows how madly n truly he loves his SHIMMER

Cabir n Navya were so much worried for Manik...

They just couldn't see him in that condition..

Halliculating n ALLL Shit !!!!!!

Nandini ka pyaar hi tha Jo Manik ne confession Karne ka fesla leya

Manik wanted nandini back to him so if confession se she comes back , he was ready to do it.

Confession Karne se dil ka bhool kam hojata hai..

Aur essa hi hua Manik ke saath.

It's only in ur heart to believe in THE ALMIGHTY.

YEEEPEE !!!!! Finally his Shimmer called him

Manik was on cloud nine...

Couldn't believe his ears listening to her voice

UFFF !!!!! Manik Nandu convo over the phone was heart wrenching

So touchy ...

What !!!!!! Is Nandu pregnant ??????

We matlab baby ?????

AARE yaar aur kitna tadpenge yeh dono ?????

Sooch ke hi daar lag raha hai Mawara

Thoda REHAM Karna in par...

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Friendsforever9

@Friendsforever9

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Posted: 9 years ago

#977

Too emotional part

I think nandini is pregnant

Awesome update dear

Cont soon...

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Aakifa Hussain

@Aakifa_Hussain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#978

Bt destiny really plays unfair at tyms..!

Bt wat can b done.. karma gets back at us anyway..!

U cntinue wid however u've decided d story.. I've full faith in u
n No bashing..!

Love u n proud of u..!

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cutypie04

@cutypie04

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Posted: 9 years ago

#979

Wow amazing mind blowing update dear

Emotional too😭😭

Very well written

Continue soonnn

Tnx fr d pm

Stay blessed

Keep smiling :)

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Sumaiya

@Poushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#980

i think nandini is pregent...right??????
manik ko apni sin ka price pay karna hoga...
but wo price kya hae?????
plz kuch bura mat hone dana...
after one month manan doebara mil raha hae...

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