#4 MANANSS: OUR WILD LOVE (Link to next thread PG-1) - Page 61

Originally posted by: aarzooarora

will end soon right😭

Yeah!

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

Hello I'm back sorry for not commenting earlier exams are going on so i don't have much time for forums anyways lets come to the update all over it was nice "At a blink of an eye, it could all end... Someday our hearts will stop and our breath will cease... I was crumbling thinking how fragile life was, how easily someone could be taken away from you... That you could be holding the person you love one moment and she could be gone the next.

I loved Nandini and she loved me... All my life, I knew I had waited for her, longed for her... I had known loved and had been blessed by it...Who knew when the end would come along and sweep us away? I closed my eyes" i like this lines it shows the depth of your writing and skills.
And two three positive points i have seen in your writing would love to mention
1 The dialogoue delivery is too good, conversation part really sounds good they doesn't sounds like cheesy or extra emotional something type which i hate the most so yeah dialogues are awesome.

2 It is about the character's sheds i haven't seen any villain in your fiction and that's a good thing every person has little goodness inside them, people are in gray sheds even in real life. So i like the way you handled shreya, aryamann and rishab character's. Specially shreya !
So again it shows your maturity, how mature you're when it comes to writing, its a good thing every person has some reason behind there deeds and you should not blame one person for everything. So that was all i like about your writing. So all over good job
Keep writing
Stay blessed

Thank you so much

Originally posted by: Vandyandy

Hi Alisha

Thks for the PM dear..

Why ??? Why Rishab had an accident ????

Bechara he did nothing...

Why he has to suffer so much ????

Shit !!!! He slipped into COMA.. !!!

Hope he gains conscious soon..

Manik was so shock to react to any thing, as his best buddy was hurt badly..

Manik made a good move to talk to Rishab about his love for nandini, and that he will never ever hurt her..

Srsly !!!! Rishab's GF RIA filed for divorce..

Superb, after all she is carrying Rishab's baby..

Yeah yeepee !!! Manik finally proposed nandini for marriage.

Like it has to happen very soon.

Manan were happy with their take on marraige

Meeting plan for the Malhotras and nandini's dad Mr. Murthy great

Awesome update.

Nx one soon

Do post MY ONLY LOVE TOO ALISHA

I need some time for that

Originally posted by: Sreeja_babu

Wow!!! Awesum update dear..
U penned it well dear..finally manik proposed nandu..
Dat too in an unxpctd place on unxpctd tym...
Emotional as well as romantic update..
Lvd it 2 core dear...thnks so much dear 4 d pm..

Really shckin dat rishab met vid accident n went 2 coma..
Omg!! Dat ws really unxpctd n damn shckin...
Both rishu n nandu r in same condition...both were in luv vid a person who were already in a relationshp..
Den y he s nt allowin nandu 2 chose manik..evn he s also waitin 4 ria n lovs her so much...
Rishab's accident ws really bad...manik s supportin nandu...
Manik's talk vid rishab ws supeb ..he confessed 2 rishab abt his luv 2wrds nandu...
Really luvd dat scenes vru much...

Den cums manik's unique propsal 4 nandu...really awesum...
Manan decided 2 get marry...really hpy 4 dat...awesum dear..
Luvd d charactr of ria..she s takin cre of rushab inspite of her worst health..
Evn she attain divorce also..her sincerity s really commendable...
Finally nandu talkin 2 rishab abt manik's propsal...
Hope nandu's dad also vil agree 2 manan marriage...
Get up soon rishab..di continue dear.. Waitin 4 nxt update...[FONT=Times][/FONT]

Was stuck somewhere...will continue soon

Originally posted by: etuu

oh shit rishab met with an accident...!!!! also gone coma...!!!! hope he'll be fine very soon...
finally manik proposed nandini... *_* hope nandu's dad agree for their marriage...!!!! poor ria but she was a strong lady...
update as usual amazingly awesome... can't wait for next... update soon...

Hope for the best

PROMO

"I love your daughter...Sir, she's the only thing in the world I want. I want to make it right this time, for u and for us. I would do anything to have your blessing." He said and Dad let out a sigh

"Manik, u r a divorcee...remember, when u marry someone it's for life, for better or for worse." He said

"There will never be a divorce Sir. I promise u." He said

Manik suddenly got to his feet and we watched as he walked to dad's side, wondering what he's do. He dropped to dad's knees.

"Sir...I'm begging u...please can we have ur blessing? I've never desperately wanted anything so much as I want this. I promise to love her till my last breath. I want to walk through like with her by my side, I want to build a future together with her. Please." He said

Dad looked at me, his eyes softened and then he looked back at Manik. He sighed as if defeated.

"Okay. Just promise me u won't hurt my brother." He said

"I promise." Manik said with a huge smile on his face

I hugged him tightly and he lifted up off the floor,giving me a kiss on the lips. It was official. We were now almost engaged. We already had my dad's blessing. The dinner turned out great. Dad got along easily with Manik's parents...we all got to know each other more. We shared stories and a few good laughs. It ended so well.

awesome promo... 😊

finally like finally nandu ke dad bhi maan gayye...

manik ne convince kar hi liya unhe...

everything is gonna be perfect now...i hope no.more problems now...

loved it...

eagerly waiting...

update soon if possible...

Finally her dad us always in their side..

Wow.. awesome

Nice promo...finaly all are ready...waiting for update.. thanks for promo