Beautiful
Manik's life is so dark
He is lonely and broken
I hope that girl is nandini
She understands Manik
Totally loved the beach scene
Manik is changing
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Hello people, how are u all, thanks to all commenters, and yeah silent readers story acchi nai hai kya please bathna yaar, likes and comments are decreased compare to first one, kya yaar tum log? ok give some time so that story would proceed further...
Manik's pov
As I was about to start car I heard some announcement nearby, I saw some lighting over there, I really don't know when I started walking towards it, I walked slowly as my distance decreased , I myself found near a temple, I must say the beauty of temple where enhanced by Diwali effects, wow! Was the only word came out of my mouth , as I saw kalyani(a small pond in temple), I must it was glowing with effects of diya, everything was so nice, over here, as if calling me to light with open arms..
I slowly walked near the stage, as the crowd was too loud, I couldn't go fast near the stage, but I was feeling that someone was pulling me, I felt my breath was not proper, my stomach was making hell of noise once again, I looked the girls back , it didn't took me time , who it was yes she was my stranger, who I met in beach few minutes back, yes I'm sure, huh! I recognized her back, which was covered by her long hairs in beech and now also, I'm obsessed with her hair, OBSESSED, fish , hey nandini to nai na, oh! God someone save me...
Crowd was crazy, I came to know she is popular dancer here listening the crowd craze to her, side dancers where making steps around yeah not really to mention my whole concentration was on her, now she was doing kathak steps, know my doubt was clear the girl, who I meet in beech is nandini only, because nandini is a kathak dancer. Yeah must say she is beautiful dancer, all thanks goes to my buddy for small information about her, yeah there are many it seems, he said, I should find out myself. never the less it will best job for me..
Now I could only see her back , as she was doing steps , wow! My god she is wearing my fav. Colour dress, impressive ms.murthy
Bolo Radhe Radhe
Radhe-Radhe Radhe-Radhe Shyam (x4)
So, lets introduce ms. Nandini murthy to u all, who I never saw in my entire life, but for whom I'm falling from past10 years of my life...
She opened her dupatta, and did some basic thumka steps still showing her back to me..
She turned at me,that was end of my life, oh! My god, she was beyond my imagination, she was an angle who was dressed in red dress, she was perfect example for indian beauty, infact I can never explain her beauty in my vocabulary , she gave her million dollar smile to me, now I can say , i fell for her smile, and too expressive eyes...
Wait what she said kaanha , that to looking at me, she winked at me, that was my last breath I guess so, I had smile which I never got in my entire, she was my smile, yes she is, and she will be, always hamesha but I had many questions , but only she can answer, till then lets to some radhe radhee
Radhe Radhe... hoye
Radhe Radhe... ho
Radhe Radhe... aaho
Radhe Radhe, bolo Radhe Radhe
Somebody patted my shoulder, and I saw a small boy, who told me he will take my phone and record, without any objection I gave him, because nandini smiled that us, this means she knows that boy, or I can say she knew I will come here..
Nindiya udaaye meri birju ye *
Abhi entered the stage, yeah buddy khase aya, yaa pe? My thought process was still on and then
Entered cabir, his crazy steps around her, I was amused , I smiled more widely looking my friends happier than ever...
Makhan ka naam leke karta hai dil tu chori
Kaanha tu chor hoke karta hai seena-jori
Now it was arya, now I knew the whole lines were said to me only, he was grinning like idiot making heart shape showing nandini as if referring me to her as her kaanha, but what I saw in nandini's eyes, was content she was happy to see me, but she is not happy more than me, but something caught attention, that was her pink blush on her cheeks as if saying I'm the reason...
Baadnhi thi seedhi, tirchi si laage
Julmi ye zulfein tere peeche bhaage
Ho adharon ko kaise karun kaho bas mein
Bhor ki laali lagai ke ye jaage
She stood perfect nearly me, my heart was going at the speed of my racing car no..no.. its more than that, nandini stop, warna mera dil bahar ajayega..
She pulled my hand , took me to stage, yes I was on the stage with her , my family was there on stage, I looked small boy he was still recording the dance, which has my family in it, in one frame... life is completely bliss...
I and nandini, became star couple over there, infact I was matching her steps perfectly, no it was perfect, my all friends backed out , it was only some side dancers and its us, I enjoyed the dance for the first to the core, I never can say or explain this moment in my life, I had her in my life , completely, that to for life time, mostly "she was the ONE"...
Bolo Radhe Radhe
Radhe-Radhe Radhe-Radhe Shyam
The song ended with my steps along with her, we bowed our head in the name of gratitude, which I never gave a damn in my entire life , whole crowd was going crazy, and all credit goes to nandini, she made my day, my waiting for her was worthwhile today, I thanked the god in my mind, for this pleasant day in my entire life, which curse every year, but from here I won't curse my life because today she came to my life, bringing light and shine in my life..
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We headed towards backstage,where every friend of mine was waiting for us..
ab-doll(he exclaimed his joy)
Still nandini was holding my hand, but she didn't left her hand even for second, I smiled widely arya just side hugged me, saying he was happy for me, seeing my happiness next to mine, holding my hand...
Na-abhi(she to exclaimed )
After all they were meeting after two years, same smile was reflected in me, or should say more than him, she jumped on him and hugged him, there friendship was something that i can never explain , it was unique one, he was too lucky to have her, she had content, some strange content, she smiled on shined brightest among us...
Ab-how are u doll? Kha thi tum? Where is ur bloody phone?
He scolded her, which she shrugged in disinterest for scolding session, completely like me, he smiled ...
Na-hogaya, now hato.. cabir...(she said in joy)
Ca-hey kiddo, how are u? (he said in equal joy)
Did I miss something, mathlab, abhi and nandini are friends , but cabir like kiddo, what's happening here...manik patience ...
Na-I'm fine (she hugged him, both exchanged some pleasantries in each other ears, which off course we couldn't hear, as they were talking within hug..she broked after it, she turned towards arya,
Arya just took her in his arms and twirled like a kid...
Ar-I missed missed u sweetheart...
Nandini laughed like kid, but I saw veeba , who was laughing, I mean jab bf kisi aur ladki utatha hai, gf should be angry, but here it is completely opposite, who was angry and little possessive was me, on top of it, he called her sweet heart, like seriously he can call her by other, but no he should call her sweet heart, and yeh madam , she didn't even stopped him,, urggg manik control control urself...
Na-missed u arya.. u know veeba missed u like hell
Ar-is it ms. Veeba, ips?
Ve-not really, I was missing mr. malhotra.(she winked at nandini)
arya was still holding nandini in his arms, but veeba dragged me, and I gave her hug to make him jealous, but no he smiled widely, infact evilly , nandini laughed like small girl..
Na-I guess, hame dusra bhabi dudna padega, haina arya?
Ar-yes sissy, waise en dono ka erda kuch nek nai lagra hai...
Oh! My god nandini is arya's sister, but where that come from, uff I need know many things , but how how...
Veeb-fine dondlo, mere liye manik hai
She said to me, oh please stop this, nandini is enough for me, what should I do... before I can do anything arya pulled veeba from me, and pushed nandini towards me, who perfectly came to my arms, as if god was listening to my wish... she gave me smile, I smiled at her..
Ar-manik she is my girl, don't u dare (he warned me)
For that everyone laughed..
Ab-manik she is my doll..
He introduced me, but how can I say, I had already meet her, but I can't say because its matter of my reputation , the manik malhotra's reputation.. before any further talk happens there was announcement on mike and crowd were going crazy to listen ,who was the winner..
And the winner of state level kathak dancer is
Any guess(judge was asking the crowd)
And only one name came out of crowd, it was nandini, my nandini
And the award goes ms.nandini murthy...once again
If I was champagne in car race , she was champagne in dancing, yes she is state level kathak dancer, no one can ever bet her in dancing, like no one can bet me in my racing, she was more or less similar to me in many things... I looked her , she gave me a look I left her, I was proud of her, proudness was seen in my face, arya kept his hand on me, abhi was smiling seeing his best friend receiving award...
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Before receiving it, she saw me, I blinked my eyes, saying her i'm there, and I'm proud of her, her face glowed out of happiness.. she turned and took award, and showed us the award, she was happy, she took in presence of her friends, yes nandini don't have anyone, other than us, friends are her family, nandini is an orphan, she don't have anyone except a sister, who doesn't leaves with her, she lives alone in manglore, veeba and abhi come here and there, that content having someone beside them , when u don't have anyone, is something which u can't explain, but today having them bought huge content on her face...
She walked to us, abhi hugged her, everyone wished her congrates... but she just smiled without uttering a word, she was avoiding her eye contact with everyone, she was blinking her eyes several times, looking down, it don't took me time, she was crying because I do the same when I can't show my weakness infront of anyone, the difference is I show my anger , she shows her smile, which is now completely fake now..
Na-mai change karke athi hu
Ab-yeh we will be in parking lot , jaldi ahh..
She bobbed her head, and ran from there, as if she was waiting some time for herself, I need to go with her, I need my time with her, which is just US...
I looked everyone heading out, something stuck me, I saw color near me, I applied to my hands asap..
Ma-buddy, where is rest room?
Ab-kyu ? kya huwa ?
I showed him my hands, arya gave me I'm-impressed look , which was followed by veeba, abhi showed me direction, I ran to green room where nandini went...
I saw door closed but not locked, I peeped in she was not inside but I heard water sound, I guessed she was inside washroom... I waited for her standing outside,, then my mind strike to veeba's reaction, she know about my feeling for nandini, god somebody kill that bloody bf aryaman, now she will also teases me , kya karu yaar?
nandu's attire
Someone coughed behind me, only to see nandini, who was raising her eye brows, as if asking why I'm I here? And must say she was a good actress, no doubt, she can hide emotions in blink,
I walked near her, now I can see her properly, now she was sandwich b/w wall and me , a small amount of pink color was adding to her skin, second by second, I affected her, that something wow!, the girl who was I waiting for my life is infront of me, she had beautiful doe eyes, not to mention which has huge emotion in it, I kissed her both eyes, one by one, she just closed her eyes like obedient girl,
I saw her nose, which has perfect tip but small one, I kissed them too gently
she held my collar for support, as if her knees were betraying her, so I held her delicate and tiny waist of her, she shivered like dry leaf, I really liked that effect on her, yes only girl I should effect my entire life is affected by proximity, and she was my nandini, I just looked her cheeks which were more strawberry now, I just wanted gobble up them, slightly I moved near her cheeks, she tightly closed her eyes, I just gave feather kisses to each one, and looked her, she had become scarlet, I can hear our wild heart beats in that room, our breath was fanning each other, she held me tight for support, I held her tight..
Ma-nandini open ur eyes...(I asked her lovingly)
She will be the first girl, who I will be talking like this, with loving voice, warna mai kisi ladki ko bhi pas nai ane detha hu, and she will be last also, I promise myself that also now.. she just opened her eyes, I literally drowned in her eyes she had many emotions in her, she was not a girl , what she shows outside the world, she is just like me who masks , like me, she is not real to entire world, just like me...
I don't know when my lips touched hers, I just closed my eyes, I guess she was taken back by my sudden kiss, she didn't responded for two seconds, and eventually she also gave in, I kissed her upper lips and she kissed my lower lips, it felt divine , it felt bliss that I can't express, why I'm kissing I really don't know, but I felt no wrong, it was correct to me, I really don't about her, but somewhere she fells for me, I know, now she took lead and kissed my upper lip, and now I busy with her lower lip, I lightly bit her lips and opened my eyes to see her reaction, she was annoyed , like I took her candy, I entered her mouth, to relish my first ever kiss with her, this is my first kiss, which preserved for her, I left one hand of her and jerked her close to me with other hand, she was completely clinging me, and her hands went near my hairs, she was trying to deepen kiss, now I obliged like kid, giving her turn to taste me, with my free hand I took out something , now my hand went to her nape, I know she was engross to observe me, I took the opportunity , did my work effortlessly, now my work was done , I saw her she was kissing me, with all her passion, she just looked my eyes, now I held tight her against me and we kissed for another 5 minutes...
I back out seeing her out of breath, I looked her she was totally like a red tomato, I smirked at the effect and felt proud that I was the reason, the only girl I wanted kiss is her, and I fulfilled my promise.. I coughed to get attention of her...
She opened her eyes, she tried cover up her emotion, which still she couldn't as my body was totally pressing her body.. how badly I controlled myself , when I saw her first time, when she held my hand infront of everyone leaving all my friends hand...
My thoughts were disturbed by her, her blush was decreasing as she frowned ..
Na-u (she pitched little high) ruined my first kiss
She said, my happiness as no bounds, it was her first kiss too, nothing can be better than this, any man can be gifted, when u gave her first kiss, and I was happy and content to know that...
Ma-then , why did u responded?(in curious tone, off course to tease a little)
I asked her, to know the answer...
Na-because I don't want to ruin my first kiss, by pulling out...
Ma-are u sure(I asked her, she hided herself in my arms) okay I may buy that?
I said her, by holding her near to my heart, we meet few hours go, but I felt I was connected with her much more longer than before, this 10 years I always wanted her in my arms, In fact I never planned my first meeting with her, I thought I will let it go in flow, I felt I did correct by leaving in flow, I never thought Diwali would bring "best" also to me, life cannot be much better than this, I never knew my feelings, I guess I should never find it out, because everything as its own way to come, I let it come, how it wants, still she will be with me, I closed my eyes, to make this moment to capture, I took my phone , I clicked our pic
still she was in my arms, feeling me near her, as if she was also waiting me like I did, people say na , we will be delight when u get ur feelings reflected, that I was having now, I thought she will not like me, but what I saw was completely different , than what I thought...
After reciprocating each other feelings, I stood there to see her face, I wanted say so many things, I wanted to know many things from her, but only silence was there, but there was no awkwardness in that, she was trying to not look my face, but I made her look in my eyes..
Ma-congratulations, I'm proud of u
I said my heart to her, she just kissed my cheeks, now it was my time to blush, but I hid it like always when arya teases me...
Na-congratulations,
Ma-and voh kyu?
Na-es liye because u won car race..
Ma-how do know?
Na-I have my ways mr.malhotra..
She walked to mirror giving me small push, I rubbed my nape, and stood behind her, suddenly her eyes travelled there..
Na-what's this?
She said showing the pendent which I bought for her..
Ma-my gift for u, to remember our first meet, but it became second one, but still for me its first meet, so how is it
I asked her she smiled brightly, traced BEST name again and again, she was happy, nothing more I wanted...
Na-its beautiful, but where is another part
she asked me , I showed its another part , which had FRIENDS in it, actually I had already wored it, I wanted give her , this at right time, but nothing can be right time , atleast for now...
I asked her in doubt, nandini is a person, who doesn't trust people easily, even it took time for arya and cabir to make a space in her life...
Na-I don't make friends easily manik , I need time
Even though it hurts me, I must appreciate the answer of her, she said what feels, she is straight forward, she is completely different from other girls , who literally droll and die to become my friend, or be around me, she is different yet only mine..
Ma-I will wait for it...
Na- I guess wait is not too long
I smiled at her took her in side hug...
ma-ask
na-is it also ur frist kiss?
She asked me , now I wanna tease her ..
Ma-actually u know, I had 99 gf's, so I basically more or less I had 100 kisses
I lied her, but she covered mouth , and raised her eye brows, asking is it true..
Na-oh! Mr. malhotra had "99 gf's", I'm impressed(I smiled brightly , which sooner got vanished after her second line) , huh! Manik I just meet a boy around one hour back near the beach , who was not even looking at my face, even for once, as if he would cheat his girl, upon me and do think so he will have 100 , sorry huh! "99" gf's , I'm amused , I'm really amused now..
Wow! Manik beta , wah , kya fm gari teri vo , think before u talk, no why won't u understand, bloody man, she was the same girl who u meet near beach, who u didn't spared look also, and literally pissed her, when she herself tried to look me, do think she will buy something silly lines,, manik do something..before she digs ur own grave..
Ma-voh mai..
Na-its manik, cool, I know it will be ur first also(she winked at me, in full confidence)
Ma-but, I want say something to u?(she looked me in mirror and turned to my side)
Na-bolo
Ma-I wanna promise u, it will be my last also
hogaya guys ab app sabki bari , to do der sari comments and likes, did u liked, maybe u feel it is filmy but I thought, I should introduce nandini in this way..
did u think, nandini will be like this towards manik?
many things are there to reveal till then wait for me...
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