Maybe he'll never know/maybe She'll never show//14 March'16

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys! You all must be knowing me as the girl who comments humongous paragraphs on your fan fics. Okay not bragging and all. 😆
I have seen many of you write and share stuff here. I admire a few people too. And they know who they are.😉
So I thought why not share something I wrote with you all. 😕 so here it goes...




He may appear
Cold, stoic
And unaffected.
But see him through her eyes
And you will know
The real him.
She brings out
The best of him.
He might not accept
His fear
For darkness
But his eyes tear
Up when the lights go off
And when blackness sucks him in.
She has the power to calm his raging nerves;
She can look past
All his facades
And strong build walls
Crumbling and crushing
Them, with her one gaze.
The dexterity of his movements
When he is angry or sad or hurt,
She knows them all.
Her words entices and beguiles him.
Binding him with a wreath with her very soul.
How does she do it?
Maybe he'll never know
Or maybe Shell never show.
---Annanya



I know it is a poem and you all might find it boring because there are a few people who likes poetry but anyways, I was in "aj kuch toofani karte hain" mood. Aaand it is okay if you people won't comment or like my post even after reading because I just posted it for my satisfaction :) Love yaa all :*




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Posted: 9 years ago
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I don't know why you said that nobody would like it .
This is beautiful. <3
-God bless
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Posted: 9 years ago
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My rock star's first post ever! Yippee! Wait, let me dance first.
*Naach meri bulbul paisa milega*
Okay I know it's an old song but perfect for dancing.
U published a poem and that too one of my favorites!😊
I love it, but not more than U❤️
But now, go to sleep a******!😲 U have an exam tomorrow!😡 Rock it, and I know u will...😆
Come back with a bang and publish more and more.😳
I'm waiting. Can't wait to eat ur head. Until then,
Bye
Tc
All the best

Love,
Ssshhh...It's a secret😉

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Ananya,


I hope your exams are going well. It was a surprise for me and a pleasant one as i have returned back to IF after sometime. I always wanted you to publish your poems and here you took your first step. I am so proud and happy today with your post.


I know you are a very capable writer and it feels so good to see the budding talent in you flourish with every passing day. I just hope that you keep showering the rain of words and we keep enjoying it. It's a beautiful poem with simplicity yet has depth.


I wish you all the luck in life and I hope you remember that somewhere in this world there is a girl who would pray for your well-being and success.


Lots of Love

Ankita


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey baby doll... It's just mind blowing
Wow... Really impressed by your this talent
I seriously liked your Aaj kuch toofani karte hai mood 😃
Lemme change your misconception doll
Why you said that no body would like it or comment on it... Seriously... Huuhh...
Who ignores this poem after reading naa they are just jealous of your writing coz they don't know what to say about your work 😉

Don't stop your work...
Bring your talent to the light... One day you seriously love your decision...

Loved it..
Take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That's beautiful.
Manik and Nandini can't be explained better than this.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Adeebaayub

I don't know why you said that nobody would like it .
This is beautiful. <3
-God bless



Heyaa! Thank you for appreciating my poem means a lot.😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: VatsDWriter

My rock star's first post ever! Yippee! Wait, let me dance first.

*Naach meri bulbul paisa milega*
Okay I know it's an old song but perfect for dancing.
U published a poem and that too one of my favorites!😊
I love it, but not more than U❤️
But now, go to sleep a******!😲 U have an exam tomorrow!😡 Rock it, and I know u will...😆
Come back with a bang and publish more and more.😳
I'm waiting. Can't wait to eat ur head. Until then,
Bye
Tc
All the best

Love,
Ssshhh...It's a secret😉



My bae:*
Thank you for such a lovely comment and that too in red!
Yeah keep on dancimg 😆

Love,
You know who :*
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankita_t

Hi Ananya,



I hope your exams are going well. It was a surprise for me and a pleasant one as i have returned back to IF after sometime. I always wanted you to publish your poems and here you took your first step. I am so proud and happy today with your post.


I know you are a very capable writer and it feels so good to see the budding talent in you flourish with every passing day. I just hope that you keep showering the rain of words and we keep enjoying it. It's a beautiful poem with simplicity yet has depth.


I wish you all the luck in life and I hope you remember that somewhere in this world there is a girl who would pray for your well-being and success.


Lots of Love

Ankita




Didaaa??
Oh my gawd! Where have you been? No replies to my msges and no nothing! I missed you.
Thsnk you for your beautiful comment. And I will always remember you.
I hope everything is good with you too.

Love ya 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Snehasn

Hey baby doll... It's just mind blowing
Wow... Really impressed by your this talent
I seriously liked your Aaj kuch toofani karte hai mood 😃
Lemme change your misconception doll
Why you said that no body would like it or comment on it... Seriously... Huuhh...
Who ignores this poem after reading naa they are just jealous of your writing coz they don't know what to say about your work 😉

Don't stop your work...
Bring your talent to the light... One day you seriously love your decision...

Loved it..
Take care



Heyaa
Thank you for such kind words. It made me so happy .And yeah I will hopefully start up something but after my boards. Love you too:*

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