MANAN OS 'PAL PAL DIL KE PAS' part B updated below 1st part

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hello guyzz...here I'm with a OS..
Wait wait..
It's not written by me..
But by my lovely friend Yuga Prabhu..
Maybe many if u know her from fb and read this OS too..
But those who did not read...here u go...

HAPPY READING ;)

Pal pal ke paas

Location :Malhotra mansion's terrace

B : Areee baby ruk jao...areee wait don't climb up..jaan tum gir jaaoge ...dekho aisa matt karo...

G : naahiii...she screamed dramatically...
No no no Mr. Malhotra aaj aap muze nhi rok paoge...

Boy's POV
Ufff kya karu mai iss ladki kaa...kya jarurat thi isse uss soha ko challenge karneki...chalo Mr. Manik Malhotra lagg jao kaam pe...

(Obviously that boy was manik)

Meanwhile that girl climbed and Stood on the edge of terrace

G :kuud jaungi gir jaungi marr jaungi...haaat jaaaooo... (she screamed dramatically)

M : areee baby girl kyaa karr rahi hoo ?? Utrooo...

N : wahi karr rahi hu jo majanu ne laila ke liye kiya tha...ranjha ne heer ke liye kiya thaa romeo ne juliet ke liye kiyaa thaa..n abb nandini manik ke liye karegi...suiciiideee...suicide.

(Ya that girl was the one jo tum logone guess kiya...u guyz r sooo smart. Nond other than Nandini murthy )

M : areee what are u talking nandu...tumhe suicide kyu karni hai..

N : matt puchu...matt pucho...meri dukh bhari dastan sunke tumhare aankhose aansu nikal aayenge...iss story mai drama hai emotions hai tragedy hai...she said in full talli mode
Yeh jo basanti hai naa (pointing towards manik ) iss'se mera lagan hone wala tha...leken iss ki bud'dhi mousi soha ne beech mai taang adadi...
mai iss duniya mai aur nhi reh sakti..gaaowaalooo tumko meraa aakhri salaaam...
Good baaayeee..

M : nandini niche utro.

N : waise maaanikk...she stretched word manik. Kya mai aasmaan mai hu ???
Kya mai udd rahi hu ??? Am I surrounded by clouds. She said closing her eyes..
Suddenly she opened her eyes n started laughing...
N : no no no no...mai toh aasman mai nhi hu...meri naaa size badi ho gayi hai...
I became giaaant.
Look at those people they are looking sooo small..she said while pointing towards road. ( as they were at malhotra mansion toh terrace was not so high bt nandini was drunk toh golmaal hai bhai sab golmaal hai )


Manik was controlling his laugh by pressing his lips...but alas...he burst out laughing...

Manik's pov
Omg this girl...she will make me mad soon. Omg i lover her alot...i love her alot. How cute she is...mera bass chale toh I'll eat her up.

Nandini glared at him
N : don't laugh or else I'll jump.

Manik was still laughing
M : haan haan thike hai karo jump...

N : dekho manik mai sacchi kudd jaungi...

M : Go ahead I'm waiting .

Nandini was behaving brave in front of him bt she knew that she cant jump.

N : dekho manik fir aap rona matt mere jaane ke baad.

(Yaa I knw its awkward n cheesy that nandini denoting manik as aap bt honestly i love when girl calls her bf as aap..i found it cute)

Manik was in full teasing mood.

M : mai ??? Why will i cry ? Mai nhi rounga . Don't worry.

N : in dramatic tone ...acchhaaa toh hum chalte hai...wahi jaha koi ata jata nhi..
Bye mani aapna khayal rakhna..thiik se tym pe khana khaa lenaa apni health ka dhyan rakha...jayada late tak parties mat karnaaa...n haa...Uss maosi i mean soha poha se durr rehnaa...byee mani m going...

Slowly she started moving backwards,

1...
2...
3...

She reached at the edge...n her foot slipped
She screamed Manikkk...her eye were closed due to fear ..she didn't understand what's happening around...but in sec she was in the world's safest place.
She was in his arms safely.
She clinged to him. N started sobbing.
N manik was patting her head. She digged her head more n more in his chest.

M : shuushh..shuush..jaan don't cry dekhoo..kuch nhi hua tumhe u r fine. N u r wid me. Dnt worry baby stop crying. Mere hote hue tumhe kuch nhi ho sakta. I'll never let u fall.

Nandini was still sobbing. They stood there hugging each other for don't know how much time.


After sometime nandini's breathe became even that means she fell asleep.
Manik lift her...n took her to the room.
He tugged her in bed widout disturbing her sleep.

He changed himself into track pants n black vest. He rested besides her. His hand was supporting him. He was staring at her angelic face. He came close to her n put some loose hair strands which were disturbing world's best view. He was lost in her beauty. Her eyes which kept roaming whole world. Her chotusaa nose..her chubby chubby cheeks...her pink pouty luscious lips. She was perfect for him. Manik pecked at her temple...feeling him close to her she snuggled him more. Manik smiled at this.
After zillions of pecks on forehead n om lips he dozed off.

In morning
After a long struggle nandini opened eyes she was feeling as if someone has put heavy metal on her eyelids which were preventing her to open her eyes. She felt it had been ages after she had woken up. She holded the side of her forehead n tried to get up bt she failed..
..she felt two well built muscular arms were giving support to her...widout delay she hugged him.

N : manik my head...its spinning . Kuch kariye na...

C : ohhh mere brother ki dulhan...its me ur devar ...cabir...he said in his teasing tone.
She broked the hug.

N : cabir bhaai aap ??? She said while holding her head.

C : ya I'm sorry ...i knw that u were expecting manik...but he is down making coffee for u...toh uss ne kaha ki mai tumahre pass baith jau.

Nandini kept her head on Cabir's shoulder n closed her eyes
N : bhaai manik ko bulaiyena...

C : haa bass atahi hoga baby doll..he said, patting her head.

Meantime manik enters in room holding coffee tray, smiling brightly.

C : Yeeh lohh aa gaya tumhara manik...

C : Yeh leh bhaai sambhal apni amanat...he said smilingly.
Cabir got up N manik sat next to nandini taking her in him embrace.
Nandini snuggled close in his arms..hiding her face in his crook of his neck.

C : chal mai nikalta hu ...office mai milte hai...

N : nhi bhai, manik aaj office nhi ayenge. She said widout moving a inch.
Manik please matt jaiyenaa..plzz pretty please ...she pleaded in childish tone.

M : ohhkiee baba m not going anywhere ...cabir plz aaj sambhal le. He said smilingly, patting her head.

C : No need to say 'plz' bro. I'll manage don't worry. Aur haa meri choti ka khayal rakhna. He left biding bye.

M : so how are you feeling now?

N : maniii...my head aaiiiyaappaaa...its paining.

M : ya yeh lo tumhari coffee. U'll feel better.

She drank coffee like a obedient child.

Manik was working on his lappy.

Nandini was sitting next to him...playing with his shirt' button..

Suddenly she got up wid a jerk.

N : aaaiyaapaaa...manik what's the time?

M : its half past eleven.

N : Aree manik...aapne muze bataya kyu nhi...Rishabh ka checkup thaa...checkup ke wakta usske sath koi chahiye rehta hai..ohh god...
(Rishabh lives in hospital for his treatment)

M : ohk Ohk relax relax...muze pata hai meri nandu kitni zalli hai...maine dhruv ko bhej diya hai rishabh ke saath...so dnt worry.

N : ohh thank god manik. U r the best. Saying this she hugged her n pecked his cheeks.

M : ohh so miss murthy subaha subaha romance ke mood mai haan. Bada pyaar aa raha hai aaj humpe ??

N : pyaar toh humeshase thahi Mr. Malhotra. Abb bass jata rahi hu.

M : Aacha ji ??

N : haan ji...

M : toh humebhi apna pyar jatana chahiye na... waise bhi mera morning dose baaki hai..he said while nuzzling in her neck. She shivered on his touch.
Manik smirked.
In no time he pinned her on bed under him. Nandini closed her eyes in proximity. Manik was nuzzling in her hair. Giving love bites on her ear lobe n neck. Nandini was moaning his name which doing nothing but Turning him on. Her hand was roaming in his hairs. He was dropping wet kisses on her shoulder n neck. N her nails were digging in his shoulders. Nandini was unable to handle this sweet tortures.

N : m..ma..manii ...pl...please...she stammered.
In no time manik fused his lips wid nandini's n she clutched his collar tightly.
He was kissing her pouring all his love.
Like there is no tomorrow.
Manik was sucking her lower lip. Nandini was sucking his upper lip. Manik bite her lower lip on which she opened her mouth. Both were exploring eachother's mouth.
Both were fighting for dominance. But their kiss broked coz of constant buzzing of Manik's fon. He unwilling pick up the fon. Nandini giggled on his frustration. It was none other than cabiraa...

M : bata kutte kitne paise milte hai tuze ?? N kon deta hai ??

C : oyee bro kya bol raha hai...subaha subaha chadd gayi kya tuze

M : haan saale bata kitne paise milte hai tuze humare private moments ko kharab karne ke...

C : hahaha..accha toh yeh baat hai...bhaai muze bhi koi shaok nhi hai...bt kyaaa kareee...

M : ho gayi bakwass..chal abb bhonk kya hua ???

C : aree maine bass yeh batane ke liye fon kiya tha rishabh ka checkup ho gaya hai...toh they have decided to watch a movie...toh wo waha gaye hai...nandini ko bolo tension na le.

M : haa thike chal rakh abb.

N : kya hua mani ??

M : wo cabir ka fon tha he was saying that rishabh n dhruv movie dekhne gaye hai...so i dnt worry.

N : accha thike.

M : soo let's continue jaha humne adha chodd diya...u knw manik malhotra koi kaam adhaa nhi karta...he said wid a grin.
Nandini blushed like tomato hearing this.

N: abb aap ko aapka morning dose mil gaya naa. N waise bhi muze fresh hona hai. Hatiye muze jane dijiye.

M : matt jao naa...

N : manik hatiye naa ...

M : acchaa nw m leaving u...bt u cnt stay away from me for long tym. He winked at her.

Nandini ran towards washroom.
He smiled on her innocence.

Manik sat on the bed digging his head in lappy.

Nandini came from washroom wearing bathrobe.
Manik was awestruck. She stood in front of mirror drying her hair.

Manik literally threw his lappy..nandini was unaware of his gaze. He back hugged her placing his chin on her shoulder. Nandini smiled looking through mirror manik too smiled back.
N : manik hatiye. ...muze tayar hone dijiye.
Manik was busy nuzzling in her hair.
N : ma..ma..ni.kk...

M : hmmm

N : hatiye na plzz...she pleaded.

Manik slides her bathrobe from shoulder n dropped a wet kiss there...current passed through her spine. He turned her. Now she was facing him. He cupped her face n kissed her forehead. He was coming close to her. ..they were inches aprt...
But nandini was in teasing mood...she pushed him and ran away...

N : manik aapse nhi hoga...she said sticking her tongue out.

M : acchaa...manik malhotra ko challenge? ?? Challenge accepted madam.

Both started running in the room. Whole room was filled with their playful laughter. After good 10 mins of small marathon...they fell on bed breathing heavily.

M : haaa toh kya bol rahi thi tum ? He said gasping .

N : nhi toh maine kya bola ?

He came on the top of her.

M : muzse nhi hoga ha..?

In no time manik captured her lips. It was a small lovely kiss.
They rested their foreheads.

N : manik aap na din ba din bohot greedy hote jaa rhe hai...

M : i just cant get enough of u. U r my addiction sweetheart.

Hearing this she blushed.

N : accha muze taiyar hone dijiye.
Manik again got busy in his laptop

N : Manik..Help me na...konsa crop top pehnu ?? Yeh pink wala ya yeh red wala...she said holding both the tops in front of her.

M : dono bhi achhe hai...but baby i think u need a new wardrobe.

N : what manik ??? Have you lost it ???
Areee yeh sab clothes new hai ...adhe toh maine pehnebhi nhi hai. N aur jagah bhi nhi hai new clothes ke liye.

M : nhi fir bhi i think we shud go on shopping. N sare clothes hum kisi orphanage mai de denge...

N : areee but manik...she was cut by manik.
M : no IFs n BUTs we r going matlb going bass.

Nandini knew there was no point in argument. So she surrendered.

N : accha baba chalenge...but abb m hungry. She said in babyish tone.

M : kya khayega mera baby?

N : jo aap apne haath se banake khilaoge.

M : acccha ..but muze toh pasta in white sauce hi ata hai..

N : ohkie wo bhi chalga.

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Location : kitchen

Nandini was sitting on kitchen's platform wearing pink crop top n black shorts munching her fav chocolate. Manik was preparing pasta. Nandini was distracting him by doing cute antics.

M : To be Mrs. Malhotra stop distracting me or else u'll get punish HARD. He said huskily nibbling her ear lobe.

N : I would love to get punish then. She said in a same tone.

M : achha miss murthy...aapko nhi lagta aap...din ba din bohot bold hote jaa rahi hai ? He smirked.

N : kya kare Mr. Malhotra...aapkehi sangat ka asar hai. Abb future Mrs. Malhotra ban'ne wali hu toh...Malhotras jaisa behave bhi toh karna padega...she said tracing his jawline .

M : ohhh...waise...I'm loving this side of Ms. Murthy.

N : but u knw i hate jala hua pasta.

M : kyaa ???

N : Mr. Manik Malhotra...aapka pasta...neechese jal gaya hai...pura jalnese pehle...gas off kardo...she said looking in his eyes.

M : ohhh freak nandini hatto...dekho..jal gaya na...i told u naa stop distracting me. But nhi...aapko toh romance sujh raha tha... he said frustratingly.

Nandini was giggling.
He glared at her

M : stop laughing. He said in irritated tone

N : hahaha..manii...aap hatiye mai banati hu.

Manik moved from there.
Now nandini was in charge.

She started cooking. N now our monster manik was trying to distract her.
He hugged her from back placing his chin on her shoulder. Nuzzling in her hair.

N : manik u knw wt ?? Cooking na is my passion. So aap yeh jo sab mehnat karr rahe hai na to distract me yeh sab West hai kyuki mai distract nhi hone wali.
Manik made a puppy face.
Nandini giggled n ruffled his hair. N started cooking.
Manik kept standing in that position.
After good 15 mins.
Pasta was ready.
Their lunch time went laughing...giggling feeding each other.
They left for shopping.

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Here it goes...
It's 1st part...
The 2nd one is too ready..
But frr itna bda ho jata...
I don't want u to feel bore..

So how was it?
Do tell me ?

CREDITS
#YUGA DARLING

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and wanted to share one more thing...we both were chatting and discussing about abrar being hot...and Yuga posted as on insta...
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AND NEXT PART TOMORROW PKKAAA!!!!

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Posted: 9 years ago

PART B

Location : Mall
M : aree jaan try dis naa...its pretty.

N : but manii it's very expensive.

M : baby girl...mai yeh jo sab earn karta hu wo tumhare hi liyehi naaa...toh u dnt worry about money..jo bhi tumhe pasand aaye buy it.

N : but manik there is no need of this...

M : u shut up. We r taking this n it's final. I dnt want any further discussion bass.

They bought dresses. Footwear n lots of accessories.
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Location : food court

N : manik I'm hungry.

Manik's pov
I just hope sab preparations theek se hue honge. Usse pasand toh aayega naa..
Hope sab plan ke mutabik ho.
Pov's end.

N : Maaannniiikk...she shook him.

M : haan hann...kya kya? Han bhuk na...h wait

N : kyaa kaha kho gaye the?

M : haan wo nhi kuch nhi... you are hungry naa...kya khaogi batao. I'll get that for u.

N : waise toh i love MacD but muze...KFC se khana hai.

M : fyn mai order deke ata hu..u wait here.

It's been 10 15 mins. Manik was nowhere to be seen. Nandini got lil worried.

Nandin's pov
Aaaiiyaapaaa...kaha reh gaye manik.
Muze yaha chodd kaha chale gaye..? order dene mai itta time lagta hai kya ...
Her self talk got disturbed by a lady.
That lady was holding a box wrapped in a red cover.

L : nandini murthy ?? She asked.

N : yaa I'm... but who are u ???

L : Mam this is for u. She said giving that box to nandini.

L : for me ?? Kisne diya? She asked confusingly.
But lady moved from there widout answering her que.

Nandin's pov
Yeh jarur manik ka kaam hoga...but wo hai kaha...aaiyaapaa yeh manik na...unhe toh aaj nhi chodungi mai...kya chal raha hai unnke dimaag mai...
Pov's end.

Nandin opened the box it was sparkling bracelet of musical tie note. It was fragile n beautiful. There was a note also.

To my love,
I knw u r angry n cursing me but plz wear this bracelet n come on second floor at the chocolate shop. ( they were on 3rd floor)
Ur love manik.

As per the instructions..she came down at the chocolate shop.

L : mam u r nandini murthy right ? Lady from the chocolate shop asked.

N : yaaa...

L : mam this chocolate box for u. N this note also.
Lady handed that box to nandini.
Nandini read the note.

To my love,
I knw how much u love chocolates. N this is for u. Ur favourite one.
Have them n come on first floor at the toy shop.
Ur love manik.

Nandin's pov
Kya karna kya chahte hai yeh...yaa waise i love teddies n chocolates but kya chal raha hai inke dimaag mai...is he gonna surprise me wid sumthing...
Omg i love surprises.
Pov's end

She came down on the First floor there was hamley's toy shop.
She went in, shopkeeper greeted her wid
A smile n gave her the biggest teddy among all.
It was as big as Nandini. There was a note in that teddy's hand.

To my love,
I knw u r tired now. My chotu baby. Its last. Now come on the ground floor. M waiting for u.

She came down there was dark all over.
Suddenly a spot light fall on her..n candles were showing her the way...
She got frozen after watching scene in front of her. Tears of happiness brimmed in her eye.
Her man..her manik was standing in front of her in heart shape made wid candles n rose petals holding a bouquet of roses. She was stunned watching this. Now spotlight was on manik also.
One by one all light lit up.
There were many people gathered around us. They recognised manik.
He started singing
She was glued her place...she wanted to move...she wanted to hop in his arms..but she was Unable to move an inch.
All were looking at Manan n both were lost in eachother's eyes.

Mere bina main rehne laga hoon
Teri hawa mein behne laga hoon
Jaane main kaise, tera hua hoon
Mujhe toh lagta hai main shayad tere dil ki dua hoon haan
Tujhko jo paaya aha
Toh jeena aaya
Ab yeh lamha thehar jaaye tham jaaye bas jaaye hum dono ke darmiyaan

(Manik sang n came near his girl. He was nodding his head according to song..n nandin was looking at him widout blinking her eyes..)

Tujhko jo paaya aha
Toh jeena aaya
Ab yeh lamha thehar jaaye tham jaaye bas jaaye hum dono ke darmiyaan

Pehle se zyada
Main jee raha hoon
Jabse main tere, dil se juda hoon
Raahon pe teri, main toh chala hoon
Tu meri manzil hai tere kadmon pe bas rukne laga hoon haan
(He sang wiping few lone tears from her cheeks which had escaped out of her eys n shook his head in no. As if he asking her not to cry.)

Tujhko jo paaya (tujhko jo paaya) aha
Toh jeena aaya (jeena aaya)
Ab yeh lamha thehar jaaye tham jaaye bas jaaye hum dono ke darmiyaan
Tujhko jo paaya (tujhko jo paaya) aha
Toh jeena aaya
Ab yeh lamha thehar jaaye tham jaaye bas jaaye hum dono ke darmiyaan
(His voice was soo amazing...so beautiful so soothing )

Teri nazar mein nayi si adaa hai
Naya sa nasha bhi ghula hai
Kayi dino se bandha tha baadal jo
Tere hi baalon mein khula hai

(He touched her hair n nuzzled in it...she shyly pushed him away as so many people were looking at them)
Teri haddon mein, meri basar hai
Ab tujhe bhi, jaana kidhar hai
Jahan rahe tu, main woh jahan hoon
Jise jiye tu, main woh samaa hoon
Teri wajah se, naya naya hoon
Pehle kaha na maine ab ye tumse kehne laga hoo
(He held her hand n pulled towards him...she banged in his chest)

Tujhko jo paaya (tujhko jo paaya) aha
Toh jeena aaya (jeena aaya)
Ab yeh lamha thehar jaaye tham jaaye bas jaaye hum dono ke darmiyaan
Tujhko jo paaya (tujhko jo paaya) aha
Toh jeena aaya
Ab yeh lamha thehar jaaye tham jaaye bas jaaye hum dono ke darmiyaan...

He sang so purely looking deep n deep in her eyes. she touched his cheek softly n tried to confirm that she wasn't dreaming...he held her hand n knelt in front of her like typical romeo

M: Nandini...i love u...i love u sooo soo soo much...! Will you be my life partner plz ??? Would you like to grow old wid me ?

Nandini's pov
I didn't had words to say...not even yes...my vocal chords cords ditched me too. I hardly nodded as tears were falling off my eyes..! He smiled n pulled out a diamond gold ring..n slid it in my ring finger. N then kissed my knuckles..
..n all started clapping n hooting for us. Widout bothering everyone's presence...i crashed in his chest...i hugged him tightly...he hugged me back..
We broke the hug ..he kissed my forehead n i hugged him again wid my tiny hands n he covered me wid his strong protective arms...

N from there they start new journey of their lives...n like every fairytale they lived HAPPILY EVER AFTER
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Here it ends...

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Edited by softysakshi - 9 years ago