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singh.man

@singh.man

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Posted: 9 years ago

#131

it was too confusing... like what does nandini want... i think she too is confused... and that vertically and horizontally wala part was AWESOME ... like literally i couldn't stop laughing... the end was so sweet where she holds his hand and put on her waist...

way to you girl... i must say more than the show itself or the actors ... i am a fan of your writings...

god bless

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mamalovesbalto

@mamalovesbalto

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Posted: 9 years ago

#132

hi loved it i really love reading this kind of dark stories so I am very happy that you are going to write something like this because I love the way you narrate your stories and I appreciate your efforts that you always put in sweetheart i am telling you again you should write a book and never stop writing like always i am going to look forward for next update take care keep smiling and god bless you 😛 😊 ⭐️

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Aamikrish

@Aamikrish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#133

Uffs wat a start. You really know how to keep your readers addicted to your stories. There is something which keeps us to asking for more.

Nandini sent goons to hurt Manik, really a different Nandini.

Manik z der, in front of her. He took her to her room for making her heal him. She wants him to get hurt, but wen she see his wound n chest she z blaming dat goons.

Wat z dat your husband won't be happy to know dat, I thought Manik z her husband and dey have differences but that z so confusing.

They know each other very well. The way he z watching her to confirm z she saying truth or not. She wants Manik near her to sleep.

Nice update. So many questions about their relationship.

Thanks for the new story. I was sad because of LDL . But now that you came up with another one 👏

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Swift007

@Swift007

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#134

You never missl to surprise us

Amazing start

Continue soon

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windowseatbug

@windowseatbug

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Posted: 9 years ago

#135

Awesome one!

Nandini sent goons for him.

That's so different from her usual self.

She still was worried to see the deep wound.

Manik too is ready to harm her.

But at the same time deeply affected by her.

If this isn't love.

Why they got married on first place?

The story seems definitely different & interesting.

Continue soon please.

Thanks for update & pm.😃

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aahanaK

@aahanaK

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#136

superb update

manik even understand his body language

whether she is down or not awww

but she is married to someone else I guess

its damn interesting

thnks for pm

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ASDF101

@ASDF101

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Posted: 9 years ago

#137

OWWW... NANDINI😲

Husband Manik nei hai...?😕

Awesome story...👏

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nita24

@nita24

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#138

Interesting concept
Continue soon
Waiting for next one
Tc thanks

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Sonalmanan

@Sonalmanan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#139

Interesting start!! Dawa bhi wahi lagata h dard bhi wahi deta h 😉 Nandini is married but then what is her relationship with manik... She even sent goons to beat him... Pls continue soon... Thanks for the pm... 😊 😊