Manan FF - A Dark Lovestory (chap 5 pg 8) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
superb amazing story dear
read all part in one go
continue sooonn
if possible pm me nxt time
stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
waiting, .

update karo na jaldi se
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
fabulous ff...
next update plz asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
First I'm really really sorry guys...I didn't post for so long...actually I was busy with my boards...plz forgive me...sorry!!!

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Chapter 5:

Manik: ok ab tum plz kuch kaha lo...main ne tumhare liye pasta banwaya hai..

Nandini: no Manik I'm not hungry..

Manik: no..u need to eat...tumhari health kharab ho jaye gi.

Nandini: Manik plz no

Manik takes a spoon and brought it near her mouth

Manik: come on open ur mouth...he said sternly

Nandini agreed and Manik fed her the pasta...after he was done..he wiped her mouth and kissed her forehead...

Manik: now sleep.

Nandini: ok

...

Next morning came...Nandini woke up due to the sun rays...she saw Manik still sleeping and came out after freshening up...she thought to call her dad and dialed his number...

Her dad attended the call.

Dad: hello?

Nandini: it's me Nandini

Dad: Nandini beta...how are you.. r u ok?...Manik ne kuch kiya toh nahi na beta..mujhe batao...main use chorun ga nahi..just tell me if he did something ..ill kill him...

Nandini: apna drama band kijiye aap...bohat ho Gaya...mujhe sab pata chal Gaya hai...

Dad: kya...kya pata..chal Gaya hai?

Nandini: ab aap itne innocent toh nahi hain ke guess na kar saken...Manik ne sab baat diya hai mujhe...mujhe sharam a rahi apne aap ko aap ki beti kehte hue...

Dad: nahi..jaisa tum soch rahi ho waise bilkul nahi hai beta...us ne tum se jhoot kaha hai..main ne And tumhari mom ko nahi Mara...

Nandini: main ne toh mom ka naam bhi nahi liya dad...toh aap ko kaise pata?
Dekha...I was right...Manik was right...u disgust me dad...lekin kyun...kyun mara aap ne meri mamma ko?? Bolo?

Dad: wo...wo...
Beta main tumhe sab bataon ga..mujhe tum se milna hai..plz beta...main Kal hi first flight se Mumbai a raha Hun...

Nandini: fine...mujhe bhi aap seand milna hai...lekin last time...saying this she cut the call.

She turned back and saw Manik standing there...

Manik: ab how are you feeling...?

Nandini: kaisa feel ho ga Manik...yeh Jaan kar ke mere khud ke papa aik murderer hain...? Batao mujhe?

Manik came near her and cupped her face...

Manik: I don't know what to say Nandini...jo hai tumhare saamne hai...I can't do anything about this...

Nandini moved back...

Manik: kya hua?

Nandini: nothing
Saying this she went back to her room...

Whole day went like this...Nandini was ignoring Manik...and he was confused...it was night time...now he couldn't bear it and asked her...

Manik: tum mujhe ignore kar rahi ho?

Nandini kept mum...

Manik: speak up...what happened to u?

Nandini: kuch nahi...I want to sleep...

Manik became angry and gripped her arms tightly

Manik: first answer me..

Nandini pushed him away...

Nandini: Manik..mujhe sona hai..plz don't disturb me...

Manik: pehle mere sawal ka jawab do...phir sleep...batao mujhe..kya kiya main ne?

Nandini: kuch nahi kiya tum ne

Manik: phir why r u ignoring me damnit?

Nandini: kyun ke mujhe baat nahi karni tum se...tumhe samaj nahi ata kya

Manik: Nandini stop testing my patience and tell me clearly...

Nandini: Manik do u love me?

Manik: yeh koi puchne ki baat nahi...of course I love you...

Nandini: mere liye kuch bhi kar sakte ho?

Manik: Han kuch bhi kar sakta Hun...

Nandini: theek hai...phir tum saare illegal kaam...saari buri cheezen...sab kuch...u will leave everything...batao...kya kar sakte ho mere liye...bolo?? Mere liye tum yeh sab choro ge?

Manik looked here n there...

Nandini: bolo Manik...batao mujhe...

Manik: nahi main yeh nahi chor sakta...

Nandini's tears were falling down...

Nandini: aaj mujhe pata chal Gaya Manik...ke tum kitne selfish mean aur ghatiya insaan ho Manik...bus yeh tha tumhara pyar...bolo

Manik: Nandini enough...aik air shabd nahi...

Nandini: jab dekho mera mun band karwate rehte ho...kyun...sach karwa hai is liye...mr Manik malhotra sach karwa hi hota hai..aur tum...I regret loving you...I hate you Manik I hate u so much...aik baat sun lo...jab tak tum meri baat nahi Mano ge na...main tumhari shakal nahi dekhun gi...tum se baat bhi nahi karun gi...tumhe bohat problem hai na main ladko se baat karun toh...ab dekho...main wo sab karun gi jise tum pasand nahi Karo ge...

Manik: Nandini don't go there..or else...

Nandini: or else...or else what...bolo...she pushed him...

Manik: Nandini stop it...

Nandini: nahi bolo na kya Karo ge...

Manik angrily pinned her hands towards the wall

Manik: bus chup ho jayo...u r not in ur senses.

Nandini: Manik...mujhe pata hai main kya Bol rahi Hun...
Mujhe Divorce de do! I don't want to live with you!

To be continued...



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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
oh no!!!!!! Nandini divorce baat bola...
pata nahi Manik kasa react karaga???
plz next part asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
I feel for Nandini
Kaha gangsters and psychotic husband ke saath phas gayi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37


This is a really dark story. ..

All the loved ones of nandni are don...

Poor soul..suffering so much. ..

Awesome story. ..

Read all chapters in a go...

Please update soon. .

Thanks for sharing this amazing different and really dark story.

Stay blessed dear.



Thanks.




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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Superb
Eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Amazing update...
Nandini wants divorce...
Y can't manik leave all those illegal works???
Newyz...luved d update...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
nice update
nandini ab kya karega.
interesting .

plz pm from next update
continue ASAP

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