#8//The Ex's At War//Ch24 Pg 126 & LINK FOR THREAD #9 ON PG 1

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shonUle

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Posted: 9 years ago

#551

Hey manini baby itani intelligent. Nandu kya khilati hai ? Itane super ideas ate kaha se hai ??????hahahaha awesome... m i really like it...

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eoincash

@eoincash

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Posted: 9 years ago

#552

so cute update

Finally they R back

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Ishi_baruah

@Ishi_baruah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#553

SO SO SORRY ..
A heart full of apologies..

I didn't comment on ur earlier updates..
HS final was going on.
studies sucks.

but love to read ur stories ... ur updates..everything written by u..

OK so much happened in the stories ..

soon many twist nd turns ..
a big surprise I got ... actually not 1 but two

1st toh ur new story nd 2nd our impulsive souls are back together..

am so happy... so do others.

manini was stuck...
both were so tensed.
manik was angry.
nandini tried to suicide.
from mitin to rewa ...

all the turns , all the characters , every emotions are presented superbly.

nd yes nandini suicide track was indeed needed in that situation .. in that state of mind.

I just love ur writing nd creativity.
how do u think ?

tomar brain e ki ache ... eto kemne bhabte paro???
but jeta koro tamam koro..
nd keep doing DAT.

finally finally manan are back ... and there makeout session... hehehe...,,. omg manini embarrassed the hell out of them.

keep writing

update soon or give a promo at least.

hamesha chamkao ur batissii.

love
isika

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manan_0711

@manan_0711

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Posted: 9 years ago

#554

Ty for d pm...

OMG dat was such a cuteee update...

Loved d update to d core...

Awww manik was so super cute...

Loved nandu n manini moments to d core...

Hahahahaa dat was a hilarious scene in front of d nurse...

Awww hehe manik was behaving lyk a kid...sooo cuteee...

Loved manan moments to d core...

Aww poor nandu...manik can never have enough of teasing her...

Awww manini was too gud... hehe...she threw nandu's clothes...gud job...

It was an hilarious but cutest update...

Plz continue soon...

ll' b waiting for d update...

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srividhya68

@srividhya68

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Posted: 9 years ago

#555

awesome upt
loved it
the way manini comes with different idea to keep manan together is superb
cont soon

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OhMeriJaan

@OhMeriJaan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#556

I will never get tired of saying this that I totally heart Manini and by god you are one hell of an awesome writer! The way you have created Manini's character and penned her down, its beyond amazing! I f today we LOVE Manini then the entire credit goes to you! Gosh u have srsly created one hell of an adorably awesomatic character that will be my forever fav, after Manan or infact close enough to them! ❤️

And this chapter was AMAZING to say the least! We get to see another baby along side Manini and awww man Manik be too cute! The way he be snuggling into her, aww-dorable visual that be! (Ahem ahem😆)

And then again, MANINI!! Every visual of hers is absolutely amazing, cute, adorable and all adjectives nice! :D The way she wld be standing with her hands on her hips, and then drinking the milk lazily right wen Nandu barged in, and then stuffing her mouth with "colflkshh"! Oh god these visuals all be LOVE ❤️ 😆

And what a kamina is Manik! Hahahaha is ready to kiss Nandu anywhere, anytime! 😆 And Manini embarrassing her parents counting the "ooouuss"! OMG 🤣 🤣 ANd what a way for Nandu to get back at Manik! Lol for one sec I felt maybe it was for real that Nandu was going away😆 But but but what a jhatka to Manik! And finally she telling him about his anger was so nice! ❤️

Oh but what a jhatka did Manini give her mom! 🤣 🤣 I rlly cant wait to know what Nandu will do now😆😆 She has one deadly combo as her husband and daughter, I must say😆 And finally Manini flashing her tiny pearls be awww ❤️ ❤️

Thanks a lot for the pm! And this wonderful update! I am srsly reading this on loop! Haha! And now, like always, am super duper excited for the next update! Yayiiee😃😛

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za90

@za90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#557

Amazing
Manik nandini and manini together
Their cute moments
And maninis love cake. .
That was hilarious

And last cabira with his own mark
Totally awesome

Excited for next part
Post soon

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Sudha14

@Sudha14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#558

That was one hell of a cute update. Loved it so much!

This reminded me why had I missed Manini so much..she is the heart of this story.

Loved the starting scene to the core..manik snuggling into nandini like a baby ❤️ ADORABLE!!! He did miss her a lot. But shei jonno manik je PDA start korse...ta r ki bolbo. Nurse toh nurse, nijer mey je shamnei, tar o kono kheyal nai!

Like most other kids, manini only caught those words which she shouldn't have..😆 Cake love 😆 😳

N counting her daddy's oouuus in front of others was the icing on the cake!!! 🤣 Uff..manik must be having the time of his life..he gets to shamelessly show off the love bites, tell the world that that they r back together n embarrass nandini at the same time 😆

Ki perfect husband and mey paise nandini!! 😆 😛

Nandini toh embarrassment e shesh!! But bhaloi revenge nise 😛

Baap Beti mone korse nandini bhujhi shotti shotti chole jacche!!

Ahare bechari manini bhoe tantrum chere "colflkshh" o khey nise! 😆 Can she seriously get any any cuter than this?

But nandini telling manik about his anger was sooo nice!!

Maninir toh dekhi pura "mentos khao, dimaag ki batti jalao" type idea ashche to stop her mommy dearest from leaving! Nandinir shob kapor fele dise??!! 😆 👏 Well done!!

Thank u so much for the pm.

Keep writing, keep rocking!

Love u.

Stay blessed.

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manandeeplove

@manandeeplove

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Posted: 9 years ago

#559

welcome back manini baby... 😃
muaahhh 😳
she is back with d bang embarrassing her parents with her innocent antics again😆

love her to d moon d back

lau cake😆
counting manik's ooouuu 🤣

showing tantrums to drink milk
bt in room when nandu barged in...
she just drank it in one go along with eating cornflakes...
n last part was epic...
she threw all d clothes to support her dearest daddy 🤣
she is cutest 😳

coming to manan...
impulsives has their way of reunion yet again...
nandini admiring her first big baby was cute scene...
then going to her little one ❤️

manik's hurry + worry for both his babies when he didnt see any of them by his side after waking up...
manik's way of showing every1 ki they r together now was totally complementing his MANIK MALHOTRA STYLE 😆
Mr Malhotra didnt care abt nurse's presence..
nurse ko chodo...nt even manini 😆

poor nandini...
father daughter duo always make her want to hide her face 😆
loved it

last part where nandini asked manik to learn to control over his anger was very sweet moment...
his temper ruined d things to d worst...

nandini's prank on manik was achievement for her...
bt cuttopie came to rescue her daddy n turned d tables around in a blink
🤣
loved it d most...

cont soon
waiting

Edited by manandeeplove - 9 years ago