#8//The Ex's At War//Ch24 Pg 126 & LINK FOR THREAD #9 ON PG 1

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Vandyandy

@Vandyandy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#451

Thks for the PM Sumana

Abh tumne humari BATTISEE CHAMKAYE 😃

Toh HUMARA bhi Farak banta hai tumari BATTISEE chamkayen😃

AWESOME LOVELY UPDATE MUHAAA

MANIK WAS AT PEACE AT HIS FAVOURITE PLACE, HOLDING NANDU BY HER TUMMY .

AS HE IS HER FIRST BABY SHE LOVED IT THAT WAY.

AWWW !!!!!!! MANINI BACK IN ACTION .

SO CUTE NAKAHRAS SHE IS GIVING TO THE POOR NURSE.

OOOPPPSSS !!!!!! NANDU NAHI HAI, KAHA GAYE , MANIK WAS SO IRRITATED NOT FINDING NANDU CLOSE TO HIM. 😆

CAKE LOVE BEST WORD MANINI COULD MAKE IT . HEHEHEH

LOVE BITES , NONO NONO .. NAAH !!!! OOOUUU ...

MANINI SHE IS THE BEST PART OF MANAN'S LIFE .

HEHEHEHE NO ONE LEAVING NANDU TO FEEL EMBARASS .

BOTHELL AWWW !!!! NANDU KO AUR BHI SHARAM AAGAYE..

BUT A TRUE FRIEND SO HAPPY FOE THEM..

HAAWWW!!!!! MANIK PHIR SE APNE ANGRY MODE MAIN..

THANK GOD NANDU NE SAMBHAL LEYA .

SHE MANAGED TO CALM HIM DOWN..

HMMM !!!!! NANDU BE READY FOR THE HARD PUINSHMENT MANIK WILL BE GIVING U LATER IN THE NIGHT .. 😳

DADDY PRINCESS HAVING THE LAUGH AFTER MANINI THREW HER CLOTHES OUT .. SHIT...

SUMANA TOO GOOD

LOVE U. MUHAAA

SO HAPPY

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Boomchelesa

@Boomchelesa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#452

Hahaha... After a long ...itna relaxed epi mila...!!! Amaazing it was..!!

Specially cake lau... Manini counted 5 cake lau in front of guests...haha... I couldnt beleive tht...& was rolling..!! Haha
These were the BEST SCENE of todays update..!!!

And seriously manik need to control his angrr... AND AND manini threw the clothesss..!!! Beauty with brains...! Bilkul Manik ki bet hai..!!

And cabirs dialog...its raining clothes..!! Haha..!! Full on masti wala epi..!! WAITING TO READ MORE AND MORE...!! Cant get enough you..!! Laauuu you..!!

God bless u

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a.pari68

@a.pari68

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Posted: 9 years ago

#453

Superb yaar

Manini is awesome

Nandu ka plan pada us pr bhari

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sugarypie

@sugarypie

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#454

Can the update be more cuter than this !!
It was too sweet..happy to see them happy.
U have penned it in such a way that they are real life characters living right in front of us .

Manan and manini are alwys LOVE.
It's always bliss to read their story .
As usual a big salute to ur writing !
Waiting for more nd more of them !
Stay blessed ! Stay happy !

Edited by sugarypie - 9 years ago

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babita_14388

@babita_14388

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Posted: 9 years ago

#455

awesome... beautiful... superb update... u made my Sunday... wht a beautifully penned... love to read it again and again... thanks for pm... god bless you

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Shruti28

@Shruti28

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#456

The way Manik was snuggling into Nandini 😳 That "I want 5 lau cakes " and Harshad's cousin laughing 😆😆😆 And the best thing was Manini throwing clothes and Cabir singing that song 😆

But you could have dealt with Manik's anger in more detail..!! It seemed as if he gave in too easily 😕

Anyways, in the end loved the update..!! It was tooo goood 👏👏

P.S. Manik was wayyy tooo cccuuuttteee in this part 😳

Edited by Shruti28 - 9 years ago