#8//The Ex's At War//Ch24 Pg 126 & LINK FOR THREAD #9 ON PG 1

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kriti094

@kriti094

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1011

Totally seems like ache din gaye

Although this update was fabulous

But since Manan are together, I m sure they will be able to deal with it

The family moments were super cute in this update

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archu_asok

@archu_asok

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#1012

Awesome update. Loved it. Manan's moments were beautiful.pendent part was phenomenal. Pic was amazing. U nailed it yar.keep up the good work. Manan's manofy session for manini was blissful. Loving malhotras family moments alot.their attire pics were superb.omg poor rose manini rocked.cabir and nandini's convo was fabulous. Eagerly waiting for next update.continue soon.thanks for pm.love to read more

Keep writing

Stay blessed😊

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prathyushaeluri

@prathyushaeluri

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#1013

Superb update

Loved it to d core

And manik has reason for his behavior with nandini

He is totally messed up

And now what is rewa upto

Continue soon

Waiting

Thanks for d pm

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itssamy

@itssamy

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#1014

omg.. ab kya one wala hai :(

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manan_0711

@manan_0711

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#1015

Ty for d pm...

It was an awwwsmmm update...

Loved d update to d core...

Awww loved manan moments to d core...

Yaar seeing nanbir convo...am kinda tensed wat ll' rewa do nw...

I have full faith in you...dat whatever u ll' write..it's gonna be amazing...

Plz continue soon...

ll' b waiting for d update...

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thakkarisha2810

@thakkarisha2810

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#1016

oohh hoo full week tension mein jayega... by just a note tht ache din gaye... freakkk m scareddd... i knw thoda twist hona chaiye bt mat karoo aisaaa...rewa ki toh😡 ... m not getting PM🥱

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kritika99

@kritika99

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#1017

that pendant part was the best...and manik is a hopeless romantic which can be triggered anywhere and anytime...haha...

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OhMeriJaan

@OhMeriJaan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#1018

I can never get enough of reading this story!! I actually read every update twice before I reply only😆 And this was bliss to read them being so much in love with each other!! Just to read about them cuddling into each other! Hayee I love love love it! ❤️

I absolutely LOVED the pendant idea!! It was beautiful!! And MaNan spending the lonely time along with reflecting on what happened! Awesome! And Manik with his adorable conditions! Haha!!😆

Manini baby as usual is love!! The way u pen her character down just makes her even more lovable and adorable! That puffy face, soggy eyes and her smile! I can so imagine all these and I go aww!

Woah W*FFF 🤣 Did Manini just refer to Rose's bum as pillow? Dude that cracked me up big time! OMG 🤣 🤣 Manini is one amazing kid!! Gosh how I wanna cuddle her and pull her cheeks for being so cute😆

Oh and I could so imagine Manini being a cute lil doll all decked up!! I totally love this about ur writing that your words make us imagine everything so well!! ❤️ And those romantic moments were too good to read! Now with you saying that "acche din gaye" I guess I need to read this in loop😆

Oh it was such an adorable moment when the three of them were inside that "apple shaped" heart made by Manini!😆

And the final revelations. Ahmm once again m asking u. Can I please do the honours of killing Rewa? :P I am sure there r more ppl to fund Manik for his projects!! Rewa can just go to hell😡😆 Well inspite of u saying "acche din gaye" I am sorta guessing MaNan wont go the old way again. Coz m sure they themselves cant remain away from each other now? :D A few odd frictions would be there I guess and that is fine! I am sure it will get them even more closer! But just do me a favour and get Manik to give one tight slap to Rewa before kicking her out! :😃😆

Thanks a ton for this lovely update!! Shall look forward to the next update!😃😃

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ankitalodha

@ankitalodha

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#1019

Plz dnt separate manan due to that rewa..not again separation..they should be altogether as always..

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Sm0405

@Sm0405

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#1020

Seriously ... Gaye acche din ... Waise ye Rewa situation me present na hoke bhi sabko kitna restless kar rhi hai ... Aafat ki pudiya hai ye toh ... God knows what going on in her bitchy mind ... U know I was imaging Manini making tht heart on the floor nd say tht house thing to Manik ... She is such a cutie pie seriously nd then tht pillow thing ... It cracked me hard imagining the expressions of embarrassment on both Nandini n Rose's faces ... Ha ha ha ha ha ha ... U know this is one of the most imp reasons I love ur writing ... It jst helps me big time to imagine everything crystal clear ... Nd feel the emotions as well ... I loved the pendent wala part ... so lovely it was ... Hmm now waiting fr the further twists ...

Thank u sooo much fr the pm n update ...

Edited by Sm0405 - 9 years ago