MaNan- Lovemaster Chap-3 (13/03)

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Okay so this new story line just came into my mind and I can't stop thinking about it so I'm just going to post the prologue and then update whenever I can. This is going to be a very finite series, and I do not know how many shots it will have, but I will finish this and then continue with the others.
Also, a gift to you guys for Holi and also for an apology. Love you all! <3
Well, as I have proved before, I am a sucker for romance and this may be cliched, but I hope it gets your support.


Prologue

Here I am, the ever boring Nandini Murthy with no love-life whatsoever. They say that I could maybe attract one or two guys with my big black glasses, and the constant frown on my face, but I never did care until one day, my only spinster best friend, Navya, got into a relationship with Cabir Dhawan.

She and I had a pact to die alone if we didn't find anyone until 30 and we were already 28. She was just like me. Worked as a doctor in the same hospital, crushed on the same guy as me, Aryaman Khuranna, the heart throb of our cardiology department and probably the whole hospital and also wore clothes like mine until one day when everything changed; she started to groom herself, actually cared about how she looked and also went out to socialise which finally got her to Cabir, who I'm sure she was going to get married to.

I was still convinced that I didn't need anyone to fulfill me or anyone in my life to accompany me, but when your family starts to pressure you to marry anyone, even starts to set you up on surprise blind dates with the most perverted kind of guys, you know that you have to find the one guy you like and can possibly love in your life, and for me that was and would always be, as I used to think, Aryaman. The guy wasn't only handsome but also the most cute and polite guy, who actually cared about me and tried to help me as much as he could. He looked beyond my frowns and tried to understand the reasons for my loneliness, shared his time with me and was my only friend after Navya. He was also the first guy to call me beautiful and make me feel desired.

But I didn't even know the A to attracting guys. I could tell you about all the existing diseases ever to be written about but boys for me were uncharted territory, and that's the day I got to know about Manik Malhotra or what Navya used to call him, the relationship bible. But when I heard what he likes to call himself I couldn't help but snort, who the hell calls themselves the 'lovemaster'?

So anyway, this is my story of an adventure in love, but things don't always turn out the way you want them to now? *winks*

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Posted: 9 years ago
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INDEX
Chapter 1- Page 1
Chapter 2- Page 2
Chapter 3- Page3
Edited by Cooldude101 - 9 years ago
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Nice...
Wanna know more...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh so manik is a loveguru
Interesting concept
Eager to know that he falla for nandini teaching her about love
Update soon
Plz pm me
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lol...this sounds so cute <3
so Manik as love guru and Nandu will most probably be his shishey ;)
Continue soon :D
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Chapter 1- Introductions Everyone

A new day signifies a new beginning as they say, but my days are just the same for the last 2 years, waking up at 6 am sharp so that I can reach the hospital at 7 am and then keep myself updated about the statuses of my patients, then reporting to my seniors at 10 am. Taking a shower again after meeting my patients and then eating at the canteen, usually I stay with Navya but sometimes if I am lucky enough, Aryaman comes and shares his homemade food with us. Oh! that guy is so nice. Then after my day-dreaming, spending the whole day in the hospital and if I am lucky, not leaving the hospital before 12 midnight, but usually we are left by 9'o clock which makes me immensely bored, so I spend my time reading books and sometimes reading those stupid fashion magazines, looking at which I can only sigh as no one I ever knew would like me as people used to like those models on the covers. Usually, I used to have Navya with me too but now that girl has moved in with Cabir and she is just too busy to come and talk to her 'single' friend.

Is being single in this generation such a big sin? Even my parents who people believe are more cooler than me, want me to have boyfriends so badly, that they set me up with any guy they see. One of the most recent cases was of our old neighbour in Delhi. That guy had grown up with me and was immensely shy and soft spoken for his own good. Whenever he started to talk, I would frown or glare at him, which made him so scared that he actually ran away, after throwing up hot tea on his pants. That though was the most funniest thing to look at but it really made me think about my future. Would I die alone? As a great doctor no doubt, but a virgin?

Girls nowadays, frowned on being called virgin. So what if you aren't experienced at the art of seduction or getting into someone's pants? I greatly valued my gift and purity and I really hoped that I could get that one guy I could share my gift with, before I become a hormone driven person and sleep with anyone in front of me. But I knew it was time to move forward and take a chance for myself, before the people around me deem me unfit to choose someone for myself and get me married to the first person they see. So I decided that the guy I would take my chances on would be Aryaman. The only guy I think who deserves me and will value me. But for that I need to get him to look at me like something beyond just friends to something more.

That card with Manik Malhotra's number was still sitting in front of me like any other day in the past week. It was Navya who dropped it here telling me to look beyond patients and studies to something like life partners. Even though I hate to say she was right, but that girl was no more like her old self. She looked so.. umm.. how to say it? so desirable. Just like those other girls, but she wasn't like them, she was Navya. Beautiful inside out. Cabir had made her so happy, making her laugh at the smallest things and made her glow. She was looking as though she had really started living the day she changed herself. Changed her appearance and became an extrovert.

I had wanted to meet Cabir from so long but Ms. Navya wanted me to first date a guy and then go on those clichd double dates, like seriously?

But I had had enough and I was going to become the old me. The girl who everyone called beautiful, before I started my affair with studies. If this journey really made me look different, made me more happy with myself, then I would do anything it takes, even calling that guy, 'Lovemaster'.

So on a faithful Friday night, at 9'o clock in the afternoon, I gathered up my guts and called him.

Tring...Tring...Tring...

"Manik Malhootra here, how can I help you?"

Oh god! This guy has an amazing voice. But how do I tell him? God this is embarrassing.

"Umm.. ah, yes, well this is Nandini, Nandini Murthy, actually Navya told me to call you?"

And there you go, I needed to tell him what I had called him for, god! I hope he understands.

"Navya? Navya, Navya, Navya, oh wait, that girl I talked to? Well then what are you waiting for? come fast!" He purred seductively.

I think he understood. Thank god!

"But right now? Can't we do it tomorrow morning? And anyway I don't know your address."

" Who does things like this in the morning sweetie? I need you now. I'll just text it to you."

'Yeah umm, okay, I'll be there in 30? Okay? bye."

And here the call ended. But the thing I really didn't understand was why would he call me now? and what was that? I need you now? I can just hope that he didn't understand something wrong.

I was wearing a new sundress Navya had got me, saying that I had killer legs and this would look so pretty on me. The dress reached a bit higher than my knees, but I was used to it wearing so many business skirts. The neck portion though, was pretty deep and I was feeling a bit weird with that but it suited me so well, as the maroon colour brought out my white skin. My usually curly waist length hair was a bit damp, so I had to leave it open. Wearing my spectacles to be able to look at myself, I saw myself looking pretty for the first time. Making a mental note to get more dresses like these and wearing them to the hospital for Aryaman, I left for the house of the lovemaster and encouraging myself for the things I had to do.


Edited by Cooldude101 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ahhh finally I managed to come on the first place.
So, a new story.
Seems some one is reallyyy back
That's really good.
Coming to the story.
Calling himself as lovemaster this cracked me up.
Really different manan.
Continue soon.
Will be waiting for next chapters.
Edited by uma88 - 9 years ago
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I know Manik misunderstood her for Ahem! ;D ;D
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Usually the story will be in Nandini's POV, but when I write from Manik's POV, I will mention it, okay?
Chapter 2- Meeting Malhotra

Manik's POV

Today's work at the office was just too boring. I am the owner of the biggest industries in India, but I was mostly on the sidelines. All the major decisions were made by me, signed by me, but it was done on a weekly basis in a boring meeting that basically forced me to sleep in the middle of it.

"Manik...Manik..just wake up. Okay? You don't want the board of directors to see you like this." Rahul, my MD and also one of my most loyalist employee, woke me up. Although, I was very interested in business, these meetings still made me feel sleepy because I already used to be sleep deprived from my 'late night meetings'.

The business meeting ended and I was relieved of my duties for another week, until there was some emergency in the middle of this week, which would make it really difficult for me to enjoy life and also help the million people, okay this is exaggerating, but the tens of people coming to me for relationship advice or to learn the art of making people fall for them. I don't understand how someone can need help in these issues, but I am no one stop them. It kind of gives me happiness to turn ugly girls into girls that guys like me desire, or in fact anyone desires and if they don't find anyone to use their new talents on, I usually turn out the one to be 'lucky'. I anyway don't have any less girls following me, but reaping the benefits of your own sweet work is actually kind of nice.

Many of the girls however find the guys they wanted to impress, and I feel really happy for them, unless, of course they are some seriously hot girls, but I try not to make my intentions so clear so that they don't run away.

I was always the Mumma's boy, but the number of affairs my father used to have while he was married, used to disgust me which kind of made me sure that I couldn't ever be faithful to only one girl my entire life. There is no one who is innocent and loving or someone who I think I should protect from the harsh realities of broken relationships and transient phases. There is no girl who will ever be so desirable for me that I'll forget the others and do anything in my power to make her mine. But that doesn't matter, because I'm a satisfied 30 year old guy, enjoying life and playing with other's as well. Looking at the way everyone started to worship me in this 'love' field I couldn't help my cocky self, from calling myself the 'Lovemaster'.

I reached home, and decided to take a long dive in the lap pool in the lawn. It was late, but it really didn't matter to me. Taking five laps, I was going to go for my 6th when suddenly my phone rang. I was sure this was something business related, or the girl from the bar yesterday who had promised to send me a girl today, what I didn't expect was such a sweet and melodious voice replying back to me.

"Manik Malhotra here, how can I help you?"

"Umm.. ah, yes, well this is Nandini, Nandini Murthy, actually Navya told me to call you?"

Nandini, good name, but I wasn't looking for names anyway. Wait, was the name she said, Navya?

"Navya? Navya, Navya, Navya, oh wait, that girl I talked to? Well then what are you waiting for? come fast!" Oh, that was the girl at the bar yesterday, I thought she would call, but this girl calling was better. Her voice had kind of created a havoc to my senses.

"But right now? Can't we do it tomorrow morning? And anyway I don't know your address."

Okay, wait, what? She wants to do it in the morning? Well we can do that, but starting right now would be better.

" Who does things like this in the morning sweetie? I need you now. I'll just text it to you."

'Yeah umm, okay, I'll be there in 30? Okay? bye."

Yeah well, she'll be here soon.

So I got out and wore my tracks. My hair was damp with the water but I sure as hell looked good. Girls don't just lust over me for nothing. I decided on not wearing a tee and headed down to eat fruits before we both ended up on the bed. But that voice still captivated me, it didn't sound seductive at all which kind of confused me and it had a really innocent tone, which made me feel that she had no idea about what we were going to do. But she said Navya, right? And anyway, she would be lucky to have me.

After a lot of thinking and dreaming, I heard the bell go off, and I saw the watch which showed exactly, 30 minutes. Wow, excited aren't we?

I opened the door, to watch the back of a really petite and short girl, with an amazing ass and some seriously beautiful silky hair. My had started to itch to grab those brownish heavenly silk threads and kiss the mouth of this girl named Nandini, but as she turned around, I felt the wind knocked out of me for a minute. She seemed equally surprised too, as a gasp was released from her mouth, but those made her oh-so beautiful and pouty lips look so more inviting. I then noticed the spectacles on her nose, which seemed to be used for professional business but right now, they made her seem so much more sexy. She had a really curvaceous body, and those legs looked too good to be just standing outside my door. But the frown on her face, which made me notice the thick and not so pretty eyebrows and the fidgeting fingers, made me suspicious of the reason she was here. The girls are usually well-groomed when they come here and Navya knew this, but what this girl had was natural, godly beauty, something which they didn't have.

But at that point of time, I was too high on my hormones to care whether she was actually sent by Navya or not, because that girl was one hell of a beauty who wasn't leaving until making me satisfied. Before I could grab her ass and haul her up to my mouth, I heard her speak, "Mr. Malhotra, Hi! umm. I am Nandini, actually Navya, you know a girl you helped set up with someone, told me to umm, well contact you, as you see I have no ideas about how to deal with a guy or how do I say this, ..." she murmured "god, this is embarrassing" under her breath and then continued, " I am actually trying to impress this guy and the thing is I'm not exactly desirable as people tell me, so I just needed your help." And after speaking in that voice I had been thinking about moaning my name, while she was under me, and breaking up all my dreams, she had come here to actually talk to me to set up with some other godfreaking guy?

I was still pretty shaken up with my desires to take her outside me door on the floor, but I couldn't after looking at that furiously blushing face and the lowering of her eyes as she couldn't see me without my shirt. As much as I wanted to tease her and get my way with her, her innocence stopped me.

"Meet me at 10 am sharp tomorrow morning, at Phoenix Mall, in the food court." I hissed before shutting the door on her heartbreakingly beautiful face. God, I wasn't affected this bad ever before, why is this happening now?

I ran up to my room to get ready to go to the bar, but before that I looked out of my window to see that girl, wait umm...yeah Nandini, sitting in her Honda and driving away. How could someone NOT find her desirable?


Edited by Cooldude101 - 9 years ago
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Hey interesting concept
Plz pm me too next time
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