MANAN FS...and I fell in love with a Bar tender EPILOGUE Pg~25 - Page 7

Originally posted by: rimsha01

The update was sweet

But u got the relationships wrong which made it quite confusing.

Maami is ur mother's brother's wife.

Nd mama is your mother's brother.

Nd maasi is your mother's sister.

Phuphi is your father's sister.

So if manik's dad is nandini's mama i.e. her mother's real brother then, then nandini's mom is manik's phuphi nd her husband would be manik's phupha.

I hope u understood.

Nd manik cant be her brother in law cause brother in law is the person who is your husband's brother. Nd similarly sister in law is your wife's sister.

Simply superb update

It was really superb awesome...too touching ..words of dada was so beautiful...Loved tis part ...and a special thanks to ur grandpops who helped u and gave u a superb story concept...

VERY EMOTIONAL... BUT THANKS FOR THE UPDATE...

Hey
great one. .
You penned pain amazingly. .
I thought you are only good at pranks and funny one but no you proved me wrong. .
And about your hindi it isnt that bad except gender mistakes. .
If you find any difficulty in penning down hindi sentences. .do let me know. .
I'll help. .

Superb emotional update dear

Just loved it

Dada nd poti's convo was mind blowing

Just amazing


Nd manik's pov was also awsum

I loved ur thought's nd u penned it beautifully

Thank you so much
For such lovely update

Waiting for the next update
Update soon dear

Take care nd God bless you
Get wel soon

okay so it was a bit wierd with the relationships but I like it.
Continue soon ;)

DONO KI EMOTIONAL STATE BOHOT ACHE SA DESCRIBE HUA HA...
PLZ NEXT PART ASAP...PRETTY PLZ

oh god..;! u r beyond awesome...
i m getting inspired from u..
u r absolutely perfect...

this update brought mixture of diffrent feelings for me...;!!
i was laughing...crying...adoring the dada-pothi bond...!!

all those conversations between nandini nd grand pa was too emotional...let me say u i dont cry easily nd its rare that i cry reading a story...but u made me cry...!!

actually i never have expeienced what it feels like to hve ur grandparents with u cause i was so small when they expired..!! though i do remember few moments with them which were a bliss...so after reading this i missed them like hell...

i know i know i bored u with my not-so imp talks...got a bit carried away..sholly .!!

so coming back to the update...u rocked girl...hmm nd those dialogues were awesome...

waiting fr nxt part..
i wont say dont end this so soon nd all but i will be glad to read other stories frm u...so keep writing...nd keep bringing such new ideas...!!

and yeah get well soon...take care..thnx fr pm...

Hey babes

Tysm for the pm yr

I really loved ur story

Marvellous dear
Seriously fro starting i like nandu bold n confident character

N then nandu nn muku ki bonding
Hayyyeee 😊

N mukhbhi ka koochi ko
He he

Then manik as bar tender okkkj

Something very different yr

N then emotional track

Awww poor nandu
Craving for some one love

Never got family love
N then manik Love nandu since 5 yrs
Awww

Actually now next part should definitely be funny okkk

Much needed

Keep it up

Love you
Get well sooon
Vidhi