MANAN FS...and I fell in love with a Bar tender EPILOGUE Pg~25 - Page 10

Originally posted by: ChocolatePie14

BY THE WHAT'S YOUR NAME???? I AM BECOMING A HUGE FAN OF YOURS, I SWEAR!!!! LOVED THE UPDATE... THANKS FOR THE UPDATE... LOVE YOU...

Originally posted by: reet0143

read all the parts in one go...

story is superb...

so basically they are from same family...as i am from punjab to idhar they considered as bro sis...but different states different culture .so no prob...

loved the concept...

they are madly in love with each other but manik itne years se aaj express nahi kar paya

i really liked the fight between mind and heart...

finally manik ne apni feelings bata di...

song was superb...

and nandu's confession...

the kiss was intense

manik blurted out the truth,,,,,,,,,

no more seperation pls...please god of war let them be in peace...

excited for the next

update soon

Originally posted by: purswani50

hey! !...

update was superb n mind blowing like always...

finally manik ne apne heart ki suni...

song selection was perfect...

nandini's mind n heart was Awsm ... 😆 hehehe last mei heart hi jit gya...

like finally ... most awaited confession ho gya... n kissi bhi ho gyi...

but what about d truth...?????...


update soon...
Thanks for d pm...

Originally posted by: Vidhiarora1

Amazing story beautifully penned each and every emotions of true love yr muaaahhh lol babes

Keep it up

Hayyeee Finally manik confessed Yeahhh

N kiss
Omg hayeee 😳

Plzzz pm me next part pretty pretty please
Vidhu

Originally posted by: UggliBuggli

really???thts a huge compliments for me..u deserves every bit of it.sacchi.u r a awesome writer...i loved your every short...those comments came from my heart..u make me laugh like a maniac..i forgot every damn sad things in my life...thanks...keep writing plz...u have no idea,how much i love your short...Stay blessed..neelima..thts your name...nice name by the way...

Firstly thank you so much for commenting on every shot of mine!😊

Your comment make my lips touch ears!😃
There is so much intensity in your comment than in my story!😉
Really thanks a ton! ⭐️⭐️

Originally posted by: elsaanna

Originally posted by: Drashtiii

Hey pranky

Holla!!😊
about update?!!
Hmm. .
Chalo atleast manik took a step towards his love. .

Haina Finally!😃

After reading dis i got a feel that there should be some technology through we can read others feelings but just about us. .

Wont that be great?

That would be crazy!
Dont worry we will work on it when i come to your place for lunch!😆😆😆

Oh god manik even blurted the truth. .pagal. .

Mujhe bhi gussa aya! 😡

But that was needed!

What would be her reaction. .

Guess?!😃
Update soon. .