Manan FF:My perfect partner turned into monster(part-4,page-10)Note on

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Bhai,I don't want to marry manik,"nandini angrily said that.
"But why??what's wrong with him???"said Abhi.
"I don't know,l just don't like him"nandini said looking away.She was not finding any good reason.She don't like him from childhood.He was a perfect guy,every girl want him.Intact her friends have always a crush on him.But she was always irrited bcz of this.
"That's not a proper reason choti,he is a good guy nandini & he'll keep you haapy"abhi said calmly.
"Ofcourse he is a good guy,after all he is your best friend.And he'll always be a good guy for you no matter how much bad he is for me''nandini said sarcastically.That was it for Abhi."Enough nandini.You really think that I want you to marry him just for my benifits,"this time abhi gets angry coz he calls her chotu nandini only when he gets angry.Nandini gets afraid.She felt her eyes having tears.Seeing this abhi calmed himself.He makes her sit on the bed & he sat beside her."Dad has given me the responsibility of your marriage.You know these days his health is not good.He wants a good guy for you.He trusted me for this.I also asked you if you like some one else & you said no.Then manik gave me the proposal." Abhi paused for sometime then again stated,"Infact he has always liked you & I knew that though he never told me.But he has always maintained a distance bcz of his friendship.He will keep you happy choti & I trust him."After saying all these abhi left from there.


Hey guyz...I'm a new writer.Well...i'm not a writer actually but this story was always in my mind so i wrote this.Hope you all will like this & support me.My exam is going on & It will end on march.But I will try to update only if i get a good response...

Be happy always.
SAFARNAMA




INDEX:
part1- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4576567&TPN=2
part2- www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4576567&TPN=4
part3- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4576567&TPN=7&#p131677888
part4- www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4576567&TPN=10
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice start
nandu dont want marry manik
looking interest
continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting concept...
A good start...
Waiting for next...
😊 😊 😊
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Hey its good..update...will read it
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Awesome
loved the concept
I always wanted to read this type of story
eagerly waiting for the update
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INTERESTING STARTING...
SO MANIK ALREADY FELL 4 NANDINI...
IT'S TIME NANDINI TOO FELL 4 MANIK
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Character Sketch:

MANIK MALHOTRA :26years old business tycon.Love nandini very much but didn't told her ever bcz he was his friend's sister.Possessive & angry man.His parents live in London & come every month to see him.He loves his friends abhi dhruv & cabir very much but his best buddy is cabir

NANDINI DEWAAN:22years old doctor.Loves her bhai very much but hates manik from childhood.Bcz she always felt that abhi trust him more than her & also shares everything with him.That's why she always feels a jealousy of him.She has three besties Aliya,priyanka & mukti.She is a sweet,innocent & talkative girl.

ABHIMANYU DEEWAN:Nandini's bhai,very protective about her from childhood.He loves his family & sister very much & always expect that she will not disobey his words.He is very calm person.Never made any gf bcz he always thought that love is a waste of time.He joined his father's business also partner in manik's business.

CABIR DHAWAN:Manik's best friend.Knows him in n out.He is a RJ & also partner in manik's business.He is a cool,flirty & a carefree guy.

DHRUV SINGHANIA:Manik,cabir & abhi's friend.Shy & cute boy.He is a fashion designer.

ALIYA SAXENA:Nandini's friend,she is like a model.Always care about her friends.She is a fashion designer

MUKTI VARDAN:She is a daring girl.She always encourages her friends in everything.She lives her life in her own way.She doesn't like abhi bcz she thinks that he is over protective & control nandus life.

PRIYANKA ARORA:Sweet & shy girl.Always think possitive.She always hide her feelings.Loves her friends very much
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OFFSS!!! PROBLEM HOE GAYI...
NANDINI MANIK HATE KARTA HA...
MUKTI ABHI KO LIKE NAHI KARTA...
NEXT PART PLZ ASAP
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The concept is pretty nicee. Please continue it soon.
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Part-1

Nandini closed the door & began thinking."He has always liked me??Uff nandu what are you thinking???I don't want to melt like this.I don't like him.He is the one who told bhai about Aryaman."With this she remember her past.Aryaman was a close friend of nandu.But he proposed her.She didn't told Abhi coz she didn't wanted to make an issue.But manik told abhi about this,he always get every information about her.Abhi got angry bcz for the 1st time nandu hide something from him.She always share everything with him.So that's hurt him & he thought that she wanted to date Aryaman but later she assured him she didn't wanted to date with him.Abhi told her not to keep any friendship with Aryaman. Abhi is very protective about her.He didn't talked to her for one week.His trust got weak on her."I lost a friend too.From that day i really hate him.But he trust him very much & i can't hurt bhai." Thinking all these she goes to Abhi & told him,"Bhai I'm ready."
With this Abhi hugged her.After all she can't deny her bhai.


Manik's POV:
Yes yes yes,finally finally nandu is gonna be mine.Finally she will be mine legally. I had waited for this day for so long.8 years,for 8years i had waited for us to be united.
He was waiting for this for so long.He still remember the day when he fall for her for the first time.When he was 18 years old & nandini was only 14.


Hello guyz...thanks for the response.Though it is less but i'm happy with it bcz i'm not a writer after all.Next will be FLASHBACK. If you all want next update then hit the like button & comment.I want 50+ like then I'll update only.

Love SAFARNAMA


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