Manan FF:My perfect partner turned into monster(part-4,page-10)Note on - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Hey jst read ur story... its really interesting. .. plsss continue. . N fnt get disheartened if u dnt get much response... eventually ppl will knw ur story n will appreciate😊 u continue. .. n yes I lik ur title n its reason, it ll b fun to read... plsss PM me if possible. .. TC dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
AWESOME. ...
amazing. ...
super excited for new update. ...pls UPDATE soon...I love dominating and possessive angry manik more than cute and lovey dovey manik pls update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: elsaanna


nice updates...

manik loved her from long time...
😭 he will become monster??why..?
hua bhi to zaida monster maat banana,plz..
continue soon



ok dear,as you say...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: firefly09angel

Awesome update...
manik ko love at first sight ho gya nandu se...
Continue soon...
😊 😊 😊



thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: samanf

Nice and interesting story..

Waiting for more...and plzz give a longer update...
Continue soon..
All da best..



thanks & i will try to give a big updat tomorrow
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
FLASHBACK WAS AWSM...LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT...
BUT SHADI KA BADE MANIK MONSTER JASA BEHAVE KARAGA...LIKIN KYU???
PLZ NEXT PART ASAP
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Awesome...manik is a good friend ..he hid his luv for abhi...

Intersting ...


Yaar waiting for long update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Awesome update
Loved it
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Part-3

nandini opened her laptop & messaged her besties to come on skype.

Priyanka:hey nandu

Aliya:Hi babz

Mukti:whatz up nandz

Nandini:Hello guyz & nothing is up,everything is down in my life

Mukti:what?what are you saying nandz??say clearly

Nandini:Bhai wants me to get married with manik.

All three :whattt?????(loudly)

Nandini:shhh...

Mukti:what shhh nandz????you'll marry manik????

Aliya:Oh my GOD!!!you are going to marry??that's cool,babz I'll design your all dresses ok.I have to go for shopping also.

Priyanka:Guyz atleast let her complete.Nandu tell everything in details

Nandini:As you all know...Dad's health is not good these days. He wants me to get married.He gave the responsibility to bhai & he asked me if i like someone else & i said no.Then manik gave bhai the proposal & he aaccepted.

Priyanka:And what did you say???

Mukti:What else she will say???obviously she too agreed.After all she can't deny her so called BHAI.

Nandini:muku plz...

Mukti:What plz nandz?Abhi keeps dominate you & you never say anything.

Nandini:Bhai just care for me.

Mukti:Yeah,then bear his care.Go & marry to that monster.

Aliya:Mukti,he is not a monster,he is handsome & hot.

Nandini:Then go,you marry him

Aliya:No...I love dhruv

Mukti:Then stop drooling someone else.

Priyanka:But nandu,why did manik gave the proposal???

Nandini:Bhai told that he likes me.

Priyanka:Then nandu you should give it a chance.

Nandini:Are you serious???Bcz of him i lost my friend,bcz of him bhai yelled at me coz he told bhai about our hanging around bunking classes,bcz of him bhai doesn't let me drive coz he provoked bhai against it. And bcz of him i lost a friend in bhai.

Aliya:Yeah i also can't forget.Bcz of bunking classes your bhai yelled at us also.I also don't like manik for that

Mukti:Yeah...he was always after nandz

Priyanka :Then go & tell abhi that you don't want to marry him

Nandini:what do you think i didn't try??I tried but...

Mukti:But he didn't listen.And you agreed.

Aliya:That means babz you will marry him???

Nandini:NO...guyz i don't want to marry him & i can't deny also bhai.He told me to give a good reason which i don't have coz unfortunately manik is perfect but not for me.

Mukti:What if you won't refuse but he will???

Priyanka:Mukti,she told na manik likes her,then why on earth he'll refuse her???

Nandini:And if you're thinking that I'll go to manik & ask me to refuse then it's not happening.Coz he'll tell bhai that also.

Aliya:Yup mukti

Mukti:Listen to me first guyz.I'm saying that what if he'll reject you bcz of your behavior. I mean it's not like he knows you very well & actually love you.So it caan happen.You won't reject him but he will.Tell me when are you going to meet him???

Nandini:No,i'm not gonna meet him.Bhai told me to meet him but i refused

Mukti:Nandz keep your ego aside & tell your bhai that you're ready to meet him.

Nandini:But why????

Mukti:Bcz i'm telling you.

Priyanka:Mukti what's cooking in your head???listen we can handle the situation very calmly.

Mukti:Yeah,then calmly nandz will get married to manik.

Aliya:Yeah priyanka,then my babz life will be hell.

Nandini:No noo nooo,muku i'll tell bhai.

Mukti:Good,inform us the time & place.Ok???

Nandini:Ok...

Priyanka:Tell us the plan atleast...

Mukti:That you all will get to know soon.


Shopping mall:

Cabir:Manik,we are here for last 2hours & you're rejecting all dresses.I never get that bored in mom's shopping also

Manik:So who said you to come???I was refusing you,it's you who came forcefully.I was saying you not to come

Cabir:Coz i wanted to see for which work you were cancelling your meetings. Abhi said that nandini will meet you tomorrow & you rushed out from office canceling all meetings.So it is something to see.

Manik didn't pay any heed to his talk.He was searching a dress for nandini which he will give her to wear tomorrow.But he was rejecting all dresses.

Manik:There is no beautiful dress in this huge mall

Cabir:Every dresses are beautiful,don't know what happens to your eyes???

Manik:Nothing happen to my eyes.I know there are many beautiful dresses.But all dresses are inelegant infront of nandini's beauty.I want a dress which will match her beauty,her innocence & her smile.
He said all these imaging about her.Suddenly his eyes fell on a white dress.He went to it & looked at it properly.The dress was actually beautiful.

http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-F4dYaqUV-cI/VhvCLxRmPlI/AAACEY/VaRjwmJXsT0/s1600/%255B001062%255D.jpg

Manik:Perfect...i want this dress.

Cabir:Finally,you like a dress.BTW it's really nice.But why were you searching white dress???Your favourite is red right???

Manik:Yeah but white is her favourite.And i also love this colour coz i saw nandini in white when i saw her first time

Cabir:Ok,now can we buy this quickly & eat something??? I'm starving.

Manik:Why you always think about food only???

Cabir:Coz i love food like you love nandini.

Manik :Forget it.Excuse me,pack this dress.

Shop assistant:Sorry sir but the dress has already bought by someone else.

Manik:What the hell!!!I want this dress,I'll pay you double.

Shop assistant: Sorry sir,we can't do anything.

Cabir:Manik its ok,we will buy another.

Manik:No cabir,i want this only.

Shop assistant: You have to ask the buyer of this dress.

Manik:Where is he???

Shop assistant:Sir there

Cabir:I'll go & handle,otherwise you'll order her.

Cabir goes to the lady.

Cabir:Excuse me.

The lady turned & she was priyanka.Manik has seen her with nandini but cabir never saw her.When she turned cabir was lost in her beauty for some moments.But her talk brought him back.

Priyanka:Yes...

Cabir:Actually the white dress you bought,my friend liked it for his fiance.So can you plz give it to us???

Priyanka:But...

Cabir:Plz,he liked it after two hours of searching. It's his 1st meeting with his fiance.

Priyanka:Ok...you take it.I'll buy another.

Cabir:That's really very sweet of you.
BTW I'm cabir dhawan.What's your name???

Priyanka:I'm priyanka arora.

Cabir:Nice name.

Priyanka:Thanks.I've to go so...bye

Cabir:Bye...

She was gone but cabir was lost in her.Manik came but he didn't saw priyanka.

Manik:What happen???she agreed???

Cabir:Hmm...yeah.She was really sweet.She agreed.

Manik:Ok then,come.

Nandini's home:-

Abhi:Choti...take this dress.Manik has given it for you to wear tomorrow.

Nandini:Ok bhai.

Nandini took out the dress and saw it.She really liked it.

just then mukti' call came.
Mukti:Nandz,ready for tomorrow???
Nandini:Yup,manik has send a dress for tomorrow.
Mukti:You won't wear it tomorrow.
Nandini:What???but what will i say to bhai???he will ask me.
Mukti:Make some excuses but you won't wear it definitely.You'll tell manik that you didn't like it.
Nandini:Ok

Next day manik was waiting for nandini.Then she come in another dress.He was lost in her but then he notice that she was wearing another white dress.He felt a little bit angry but hide it.Nandini came near him.


Hello guyz,thanks for the response.Next will be manan talk & some twists.Let's see what happen next.Now hit the like button & comment.
For pm plz buddy me.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Superbbb update
So cute manik nandu se milne ke liye use dress bhi gft krdi wowww...lovd it...continue soon

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