MANAN FF~ I WILL MAKE U FALL FR ME~(chapter 12) pg 72 (pm later) - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
PART D


After hiding the thing in his wardrobe he took a long breath of relief but soon his breath again got hitched in his throat listening to what Nandini said...he was numb and was in a dilemma as in what to answer...It was not like manik had not expected this question...he was sure that he had to answer this question but he had not expected to face this question so soon...!!

When all these thoughts were pacing in maniks mind Nandini was getting very impatience to get the answers for her questions...she waited fr few seconds but seeing no response she once again asked her question.."Manik ...answer me...Do u take me as your wife or not..have u accepted this marriage ?"

Manik composing himself turned to see Nandini looking towards him with hopeful eyes...and fr a second he got confused as in why Nandini had hopes with him..??
But chucking the thoughts he concentrated on what to answer her...!!

Manik slowly went near Nandini and catches her hands and made her sit in the bed and he himself sat on the ground in front of her in his knees and said in a calm voice...

M: Nandini..u already know me and even my answer...!! We were always good friends and intact best friends ..u have always supported me and given me peace...!! And for this I will always be grateful to u...u will always be my best friend..u know..(Nandini cut him in middle and once again asked..)

N: manik.I said do u regard me as or wife..??(directly looking in Hus eyes)

M: (looking down..) Nandini..I give u all the rights of being my wife but not the right of lo.love..!!

N: Manik..aall your wealth and money..does not mean anything to me..Don't u love me..??

M:(and this was not expected by manik..he immediately looked at her and still he could see hope and something else in her eyes but he could not recognize what it really was...in a stammering tone he said..) Y .dodoes it maatter Nandini..?? And y did u accept the marriage..cause I know even u r not happy with this marriage..I don't deserve u..what was the thing that forced u to agree with this marriage. Did dad blackmail u or ...

Manik was cut off in middle by Nandini loud voice ..and what she said once again shocked him..before he could register anything he once again heard her saying in much louder voice "Manik I LOVE YOU..YES I REALLY LOVE YOU..""

And with this Nandini started sobbing whereas manik could not believe what he heard...hr instantly stood and said in a doubtful voice "Nandini what r u Ss..saying?"

(Manik turned to go but he was stopped by Nandini ...she catches his hands tightly and this time she said in a stern voice "Manik Do U LOVE ME OR NOT??"


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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
PART E

Manik DO U LOVE ME OR NOT ??

Now this was something manik had no clue what to say...all those previous things that he said he was already prepared for it..but this..he was not prepared at all..but he knew he has to do it..so not looking at her he said in a small voice..
M: NO...

And now Nandini was all shaterred...the one whom she loved from last few months..whom she had considered her life..her breath..her Jaan..her evrything..said that he does not love her like she does...!! Hr never had loved her . ..but what about all those moments they had spent together...what about the love that she had seen in his eyes...?? It'd true that manik never said that he loved her nor had she done..but still she could feel his love when they were together. ..everything was going great till last week..then what happened in this few weeks that everything got complicated ?? Why did manik crate a shell around himself once again when Nandini had broken that shell few months ago..Y manik was creating distance between him and Nandini...all these deep thoughts were pacing at high speed in Nandini mind...but she exactly knew what she has to do..so she wiped all her tears and made him face her NAD looked in his eyes...and as soon as their eyes met they were captivated in each others eyes...though Manks mind was saying him not to look at her but his eyes were not in his will now...they were just looking at her eyes and doing all the silent Talkings...his France was broken by Nandini slight chuckle and he was surprised seeing her laughing and another shock came hearing what she said..

" Manik tum mujhse pyaar karate ho...and who bhi sacchi wali..more than me...Maine tum he pehle hi bataya that that hour lips can lie to me but your eyes never can...and I can still see eternal love for me in your eyes that u cannot deny...

Manik quickly broke the eye lock and said in a cold tone..
"Enough Nandini...I don't know how u fell in love with me..y u fell in love with me..but please don't do all this...u r behaving childish right now..all these love and all is only or imaginations...I have made clear to u that I don't love u .and believe bit or not. Its the truth. ..and noonr one can change this fact.."

Saying this manik moved towards the door when Nandini shouted.

N: Mr manik malhotra. Stop right there..

Nandini moved towards him with a determined expression and confidence NAD stood right in front of him and said in a confident tone..

N: Manik jitni bhi try karlo but I don't believe all these craps...cause I know mera dial kabhi wrong nahi hosakta...and I m not saying that u do live me but my heart is saying so..
And even if u never loved me..I will make sure that now u will..
I WILL MAKE U FALL FOR ME...I will make sure that u yourself will confess your feelings for me...and yes u will even apologize me for saying that my love is childish .Our love is childish...Jo much bhi tum mujhse hide karrahe ho from last week..all those things tum khud mere pass aake bologe. !! Main iss marriage ko woh identity dilakar rahungi Jise tum deny Mar rage ho..!!

Manik without speaking a word opened the door and went outside ..he closed the door and leaned against it and spoke in a slow defeated voice "SORRY NaNdini" and then few tears made their way out from his eyes ...!!!
All this was being seen by a pair of eyes whose owner was now standing behind the pillar secretly looking at manik ...!!!



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Edited by mananneetu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
~~NOTE~~

Hi everyone..!!
First of all thanks a ton to all of my readers who liked and commented...it really means a lot to me..but I m really sorry I could not reply to everyone..lack of time..😕
So once again thank u so much.to each and everyone of u.!!

Just because of all of your comments I m here with an update so soon..I hope u guys liked it..!!

Okay so some of readers want to know the central idea of the story..so this story in short is all about how Manik and Nandini becomes Manan..how there souls are connected..how they will confess..how will their life be when few secrets of life opens up..Can they together fight with all the problems..??

This story is surely filled with lots of secrets but those secrets will take time to open..its kind of complicated love story ...so what I wanna say to all my readers is that just don't think about secrets and mysteries...just have believe on me and enjoy my updates...If u guys r waiting fr the secrets to reveal soon then I m really sorry guys u have to Keep a lot of patience for that. !!😛

Right now my concern is Manan..so u guys will only read about them for few updates..like 6-7 updates..these updates will be the background of the story..the story will get spicier only after those few updates. !! I hope u guys can keep patience with me..and support me.!! 😊

And now the next update will only be after a week..till then keep reading..keep liking and commenting..!!

And I would love to get feedbacks from everyone..whether its bad or good or its a suggestion..anything .just feel free to share or just pm me..!!⭐️

Bye
Take care
Lots of love
Keep laughing..keep living ..
Neetu. 😳
Edited by mananneetu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Wow awesome update...
Nandu loves him...
Manik was soo shocked...
I think manik also loves him but something might hv happened...
And the person who is watching is bira...
Luved it..
Update soon...
mananneetu thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: reet0143

THANKS FOR THE PM BABY DOLL...

YOUR WELCOME DEAR..!!

the update was marvellous...
Thank u ...😊
manik and nandu ki first night but how it be completed without the disturbance of cabir although its was not like a normal first night but cabir being cabir vo manik ko tease karna kaise chod sakta hai
CAbir toh bahut imp hain..and in my story a very very imp person..kaise baad mein pasta chalega..😉

um iske Bina hi..?? Itni jaldi bacche chahiye tum dono ko..,,,,🤣...loved this line...
He he..thanks..

aww cabir feeling bad for nandu...even i am feeling same for manik and nandu...

manbir part was awesome.,...

manik bechara fas gaya ...ab nandini ke ques ka ans bhi nahi de sakta...

ab nandini ne aisa kya bola k manik ke froze ho gaya...😲😲

jo bhi ho its gonna be fun reading this...

loved it

u nailed it again...congooo...👏👏

and i liked your surprise ...tumne bola tha weekends pe hi update kar paungi but u posted early...yipeee,,,,,,🥳

One more surprise for u today..😳

thanks doll...lots of love kisses and hugs to u for this,,,,,,,🤗🤗

Lots of love hugs and kisses to u too...!!

ab bhi try karna jaldi update karne ki...

waiting

UPDATED..😛
Reet

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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Pari_mananholic

Wow awesome update...

Nandu loves him...
Manik was soo shocked...
I think manik also loves him but something might hv happened...
And the person who is watching is bira...
Luved it..
Update soon...


Thank u so much for commenting..
And the person is cabir or someone else u will get to know soon..!!!
rajirock123 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Hey dear nice updates
But manik is behaving different
Wat ever u want write
But manan scenes we want to read
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Hey dear
just read all parts
intersting concept
continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Wowooo awesome superb amazing update loveddd it plz cont soon thanks for pm😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Waaoo amazing update.
So both are in love but manik is not accepting.
But Nandu will make him to fall for her.
Next part soon plz.

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