MANAN FF~ I WILL MAKE U FALL FR ME~(chapter 12) pg 72 (pm later) - Page 50

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome amazing update loveddd it toooi good emotional update can't wait for next update plz con soon thanks for pm😃
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Originally posted by: mananneetu


THANK U SO MUCH DEAR FOR YOUR BEAUTIFUL COMMENTS..
U REALLY TOUCHED MY HEART...
I AM SO GLAD THAT YOU LIKED MY STORY..
AND NO NEED OF APOLOGIES...
I JUST HOPE YOU WILL BE REGULAR ND WONT GET BORED WITH MY STORY...😆
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Originally posted by: mananneetu



thank u fr ur comments..😳😃
glad u r liking it
&if u hvent heard the song i would suggest u to hear it asap because its such a soulful song..u will love it.
will udate soon


umm I would really like to hear ..can you please tell me name of song ?? or if it is from any movie toh the name of movie? ??.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Poor Manan
Sooo much love yet both in pain
Eagerly waiting for the mystery to unfold
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Posted: 9 years ago
CHAPTER 12


Nandini not wanting to disturb manik took the mobile and went in the balcony..!! It was a private number calling ...and then she thought it might be the same person with whom manik was talking last night...thinking about last night her eyes filled with mist but right now she knew it was imp to attend this call...she was about to attend the call but the ringtone stopped...and she couldn't call back since it was a private number...!! she just couldn't believe that she missed this call which was the only way visible fr her to find out all the answers fr thousands of questions playing in her mind...!!

Sighing a breath she was about to go inside but halted in hr place ...as the mobile once again started vibrating..thanking her aayiaapa she attend the call but before she could speak or hear anything the mobile was hastily snatched from her hand by a atrong hand..she turned to look at the owner of those hands and found manik standing behind her with the mobile and nervous filled face..!!

Manik p.o.v


I was seeing a horrible dream...my dad and MY Nandini were going away from me...they were standing in the bank and I was in the middle of the ocean in a boat...I was trying to reach near them but instead of going near them I was just going far and far...there was a moment when I even couldn't see them...there was darkness all around me ...I was slowly being engulfed by the darkness...but then suddenly I felt someone caressing my hair...and instantly I saw few stars glowing ...then I was surrounded by many fireflies which just in a blink pulled me out of my darkness towards the light..the peace..!!

But then after a while I heard something vibrating near me and that touch from my hair was removed...!! No...plz don't leave me..I wanted to shout but don't know what was stopping me...I wanted to open my eyes but again I couldn't..it might be because of my headache which was restricting me to even move from my place.!!

After a while of collecting all my strength I slowly opened my eyes...and then I noticed I was alone in the room..Nandini wasn't there...And I noticed myself in the chair not in the bed with a diary beside me. ..it was then when I remembered last night which once again pricked my heart...I searched for my mobile to see the time but it was no where...I heard little sound from rge balcony...I went there only to see Nandini standing with my mobile...

Instantly nervousness crept inside me..what if Nandini had picked up THAT call...no I can't let it happen..I quickly went near her and hastily snatched the mobile only to see her shocked...questionful..and Hurt face...oh god..just kill me..
I just can't see her like this...I just can't hurt her...but right now I just had to do it..not fr me..but fr her !! Whatever I am doing is fr her. !!

My trance was broken when Nandini tried to snatch the mobile from my hand...!! "Nandini..what r u doing.?? Just leave the mobile..!!" I spoke in a stern voice trying to threaten her from my voice..!! But how could I forget..she is THE NANDINI MURTHY ..ooppss..I mean MRS.NANDINI MANIK MALHOTRA..thinking this I felt a small smile tried coming in my lips but I quickly hid it looking at her glares...and it was then when the reality hit me ...and i came out from my Nandini land..
"Manik..leave the mobile...I know ussi insaan ka call hain yeh..I need to know everything..!!" Yelled Nandini to which manik just gave her a helpless look and muttered " no Nandini..plz.try in understand..jab waqt aayega I will say u everything..!! "

end of p.o.v

But today Nandini had no stop...she didn't went to hear anything..so she kept snatching the mobile housing manik back and back..."plz nandu...trust me.!!" Said manik in a small tone to which Nandini gave him a stern glare.."nahi karti tumhe trust manik..!!" said Nandini in a determined tone..but this time it infuriated manik...he again asked."nahi karti mujhe trust??"
"Haa..nahi karti !!" Said Nandini in a hurtful tone..!!

Since they were going back steps manik's leg hit the bed and he fell on the bed with Nandini at top of him...and then the magic began...both if them were lost in each others eyes which were trying to speak a lot of things but there was a barrier in both of their eyes that was stopping their emotions to come out...manik's hand slowly reached her waist and pulled her with a jerk to which Nandini kept her hands in his chest..near his heart..!! Manik once again looking at her eyes intensely asked " sachme nahi karti mujhse trust !!?" " na..nahi!!" Stammered Nandini since manik's fingers were doing there work in her waist..!!

Manik slowly bend near her neck and nuzzled his face in her hairs..enhalinb the scent of her hair..the only place where he coukd get peace ..!! "Bolo Jaan.." said manik huskily giving few kisses in her neck...and Nandini was numb ...she just couldn't speak anything...that mobile was a forgotten thing...in fact the whole world was a forgotten thing by now...all those barriers which were stopping them was also a forgotten businesses... what mattered then was THEM..their proximity which were bringing a big flow of different feelings...inside them..!!

But suddenly the door flung open and they heard someone saying"oopps..I didn't see anything...I am sorry..I know bad timing..u guys carry on..I am outside.!!" Which broke their trance and they quickly stood up all embarrassed and shocked with their own actions.!!

"Nahi Cabir...aisa kuch nahi hain...u dont need to go anywhere..!!"said manik ..listening to which cab it turned around to face them and said."u sure na..main apne aankhen khol lu!?" Asked cabir teasingly to which manik thought " iska kuch nahi hosakta.!!" But before cabir could open his eyes he was attacked by a huge force...I meant Nandini just ran and hugged him tightly with such ha force that cabir was disbalanced fr a while but he quickly handled himself and hugged her back.." wooh..it seems meri behena ne mujhe bahut miss kiya..!!" To which Nandini just hummed..


Manik was busy admiring the brother-sister duo when he saw aomeone entering the room looking at which his face became red with anger...then he tightly fisted his palms into a ball when he saw Nandini hugging that guy...!!!

To be continue...
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Hey guys..how r u all doing.??
Yeah I know I am late...but kya karu I became sick ..so I couldn't update..!! And yeh update bhi I have written in a hurry...so u guys might not like it..!!
But jaisa bhi lage do comment..jutte tamatar Jo bhi phekne hain ...aaplog phek sakte ho..I really dont mind..!!
And thank u's to all those who have commented and liked..!!
Next update when I get 45+ likes since I have got it in last update...so I am.hoping for the same..!!
Keep smiling and spread love.
Lots of love
Neetu...



Edited by mananneetu - 9 years ago
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Edited by s2sultan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago








It's just awesome ...
loved it ...
I am really really curious to know why and what manik is hiding ...
cabir kabhi nai sundarne wala. ..
aww ... cabini were soo cute ...
and now who is that person jise dekh kar manik inna gusse mai aagaya? ??
continue soon


love you ..
ekta ...
Edited by manan_eku - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow wat a sexy update...
Manan nd der romance...
Der naughtiness...
Bt yaar cabir ne kya entry maari hahahahhahahahah

Bt 2nd entry kiski thi lets jst w8 for ur nxt update
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Posted: 9 years ago
again cabirrr 😆😆😆😆😆😆
romance ka dushman
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
so much suspense
manik was hiding everything 4 her safety
at the end seeing whom manik got angry?
cont soon

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