RAJA, RANI AUR VOH CHAPTER 1 ON PAGE 8 (19 MARCH) - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome...
Conti soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello prathyusha,
Just read the prologue n character sketch... Awesome
Waiting for the next eagerly...
When you update sabse pehle Issi ki update deena baaki stories se phle..
Thanks for the pm...
Lots of love

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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome
i loved this movie yaar
pls continue
all d best
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
nice cs...
manan married forcefully...
what is their past?
update soon...
take care...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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seems interesting


post next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting waiting for the next one
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Nice cs.
Waiting for the first part.
Update soon.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 1:

One girl was continuously starring at a photo which was kept on her side table and

her eyes were swollen which clearly shows that she cried. Just then her father came

there and saw her daughter shattered state he was also shattered but he has to see

her daughter future.

He slowly went near his daughter and he kept his hand on her head and she looked

at him.

Father: beta thum past ko chodo aur future dekho na

Daughter: papa kya meri jindagi mey kabhi kushi nahi asakta

Father: nandu beta humari life aaj humari humari wish se nahi chaltha lekin ek na

ek din vo humari wish ki jaise bane gi

Yes the girl was nandini and its naman her father.

Naman: beta manik bahot acha ladka hey vo thumey zarur kush rakegi and he is

same like me only kanna

N: lekin papa mey kisi aur se kaise shadi kar sakta hu

Naman: kyu nahi beta???

N: papa thum jantoho na ki mera past mey kya hua tha

Naman: vo past tha beta jo gaya vo gaya vusko yaad karke future mat karab karo

na

N: lekin papa

Naman: beta life ko ek chance do na mere liye

N: theek hey papa only for u

Naman gets happy and he kissed on nandini forehead

Naman: thum iss decision ko kabhi regret nahi karogi nandini I am sure manik will

keep you very happy

Naman leaves from there and inform Malhotra that they were ready for the

marriage.

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A tall handsome guy was continuously cursing god for the fate he has written for

him. His phone was continuously ringing but he was not in a mood to talk to

anyone and he was shattered like anyone in this whole world. He was none other

than manik whose was fully broken because of his past.

Just then his friend cabir entered there and he was the only person who know thee

reason for the complete condition of his friend. He went near manik and kept his

hand on his shoulder and what he found made his heart to break once again.

Manik eyes were deep red in color and his eyes were dried due to continuous

crying and when he found cabir there he without wasting any second hugged him

very tightly and he cried loudly in his arms and cabir also cried seeing his friend

like this but he decided to stay strong for manik and he wiped his tears and broke

the hug.

M: cabir its 2 years

C: manik I know it lekin thum esa kaise weak pad sakta hey

M: vo meri eyes ki samne...

He was not able to complete his whole sentence as he remembered the most

dreadful incident in his life.

C: manik past ko lekar humari future ko karan nahi karskta

M: haa cabir lekin mey iss incident ko kabhi nahi bool pavungi

C: kisne kaha thumko bool ne ko

M: what u want to say??

C: thum thumari parents keliye iss risthey ko haa bol do and when u feel like u

should start a new life then u start

M: mey vus ladki ko hurt nahi karsakta

C: manik u are not hurting her ask her for a time

M: no

C: do one thing go and say to uncle what happened and then will uncle and aunty

be happy??

M: no

C: isiliye thum ko yeh shadi karna padega for ur parents

M: theek hey

Canir hugs him and the Malhotra's also inform murthy's that they were ready for

the marriage and both the families were super happy.





so here is the first chapter
hope u like it
so if response is good i will post next one soon
and raji akka plz msg me need ur help
do tell me how is it
will be waiting for ur reviews
love
prathyusha
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Amazing update
What happened in Manik and nandini's past
Nandini's dad is so supportive
Loved manbir bond
They are ready for the marriage
Update soon
Edited by ky2manan - 9 years ago

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