**MaNan ff -'L@nd of $weetie$' updated chap 25 on pg 82* - Page 12

Originally posted by: Aakifa_Hussain

Oh god..
Dis ws soo hilarious..
Manan r soo cute..
Cabir is as always amazing..
N dea plz give long updates..
m not enough of dis story..
I knw m being greedy bt m loving dis story..
:)

Originally posted by: Ky21

hey!! just now came across your story..
read it in one go.. and loved it to the core..its amazing..
plss update the next part jaldi jaldi..can't wait...
stay blessed! !! 😊

Originally posted by: reet0143

hahahahaha what a story yaar...it's perfect...

maine aj hi story padi sare chapters pad liye...

damm awesome yaar...

koi bhi story nahi hai aisi ...such a cute lovely funny story...

ii loved their bond,,,,,

specially no rona dhona and all...full on masti and fun...

u r such a superb writer...hats off to u...👏👏

manik itna darta hai bhooto se,,,,,,,,my cutie pie...

i loved the characters ..jaise tumne describe kiye...lively and full of fun...

pictures were just mindblowing

conversation was damm hilarious...huggies , beast sleep...😆😆🤣

haste haste pet mein pain hone lag gayi mere sare chapters padte hue...

i cant get over with this story now...

pls update soon

and pm me please

Reet

Originally posted by: Pooja2899

awesome update.
it was hilarious.
waiting for next part.
continue soon.

Chapter 10

A girl is running on grass laughing wearing white gown,, her hairs are flowing with air,, a boy running behind her we can say catching her laughing

Boy call her tweety stop try to catch her but she run away

Nandini catch me if you can manik laughing boy again start laughing but suddenly he fall in lake.

Manikk got up with jerk shouting what the heckk!! ..he saw his friend abhi and dhruv holding bucket in their hand and he is tottaly drench in water

Manikk greeting his teeths u jerks wping his face ..😡

Abhi jerk ni tera baap hu mai .. kumbhkaran ki aulad saale do balti pani dala tab jaake utha hai tu.. he share his "ohh so dukh bhari daastan"

Dhruv waise abhi tu manikk ko gali de rha hai ya khud ko than manikk and dhruvv laugh and hifi 😆

Abhi gave them confuse look than he recall his statement tera baap hu mai .. kumbhkaran ki aulad',, now he get to kno he gave them sheepish smile accha accha thik hai ho jati hai kabhi kabhi...

Than abhi kick manik's ass aur tu 5 min hai tere pas jaldi ready ho warna agar towel mai bhi hoga toh m waise hi tujhe cabir k ghar leke chala jaunga...manikk rub his ass and punch abhi's arm and dhruv's also who is laughing seeing the scenario and left to washroom

Manikk pov.

.i came inside washroom rubbing by ass I murmur stupid's ..i stood in front of mirror to wash my face than I recall my dream uff! That was awsm but in idiots k karan incomplt reh gya huh!!! I sigh and smile imaginig tweety's smily face ...

I paste some toothpaste in my brush and start brushing .. suddenly I hear some noise from outside I peep from washroom and saw two honey bees are trying to bite abhi and dhruv ...abhi is running saving his life and dhruv is trying to hid under blanket than I saw bubbly is running toward me with a bee beside her ..my eyes widened she quickly enter inside washroom barking and than I saw the bee is is also coming toward us I quickly close the door and saw that bubbly is hiding in my bathtub full horrified ...I took her in my arms and pat her head relax bubbly she sigh...

I again peep outsise and saw my friends are running for their life than abhi saw me he ran toward me and dhruv follow him they both shout oyy darwaza khol ..khl be jaldi ..i open the door they quickly run inside and dhruv close the door quickly ,,,,,,he lean againt the door breathing heavily and abhi is also breathing heavily

I was about to ask them ki wats happening but suddenly abhi and dhruv said greeting their teeth bubbly !!! looking toward bubbly..bubbly gave them sheepish smile and maintain proper distance with them ...they both attack on her I widened my eyes ans she start running here and there ..finnaly she hide behind me and abhi and dhruv start pushing me I said hell confused hang on hang on ,,kya chal kya rha hai yha...

They both look tward me and start narrating the story..

Flashback

Abhi and dhruv they were playing video games suddenly bubbly came with a ball in her mouth..

Abhi caressed her head and said heyy bubbly meri gf banegi she make a puppy face

Dhruv said ni meri banegi ..than bubbly show that ball and signal them to play with her ..they happily agreed she signal them to throw the ball out of window they did and "shitt" it hit honey bees sweet home who are all set to make their head red .. they both gulp their saliva and the show start...

Flashback end

No ones pov..

Manikk was laughing rolling on floor holding his stomach 😆 and bubblly is jumping on his stomach happily abhi and dhruv glaring him as they can kill him any moment😡..manikk saw his friends expreesion and he stop laughing in very nxt moment he is tottaly drenched in water...than ,,than what the water fight begans at last trio look toward bubbly who is laughing but stop when she saw them they all attack on her and she fully got drenched ,,,she huff and they all start laughing..

Dhruv slowly peep outside and said guyzz mujhe aaj helmet ka importance pata chala

They all sigh abhi said accha guyz mai bubbly ko leke bhagta hu or tum log mere piche aao...all agreed even bubbly also

Manikk abe 1min he took some dreeses and throw that on their face ye lo change karlo..

abhi said abe mujhe nanga hi dekhna that toh izzat se dena 😉

manikk roll his eyes and said very funny they change their dress and the mission start 😃

abhi ready bidu

all said ready captain ... abhi took bubbly in his arm and gulp his saliva and they start running full on SRK style the bees saw them they also start chasing them they hurridly left outside room and manikk close the door...

they came running to hall laughing

dhruv said holding his stomach hahaha that was fun😆

abhi put bubbly on floor yaar hume aisa stunt har din karna chahiye

manikk right guyzz than he inform pogo ,,,,aunty mai cabir k ghar brkfast kar lunga and ha bubbly ko nehla dena by .. she nod smily and they all left in manik's open jifi..

they reach cabir's home abhi and dhruv jump from jifi

(cabir's home)"

than abhi said oyy manikk jaldi chal yaar cabir humlogo ko kha jaega,,🤢🤢

dhruv copy paste enter 🥱🥱

abhi punch him sala aalsi kahika .. he shrug and left inside

manikk are abhi tu ja mujhe ek kaam karna hai than he smirk

abhi gave him whatever look and left inside...

manikk park his jifi and went backside of cabir's house where they have kitchen's window...

he jump inside from kitchen's window quietly,,he saw a lady wearing yeallow kurti and white jeans in her 40's doing something may be preparing brkfast.. he slowly tip toe walk toward her smirking and atlast he shout anu maaa(anamika dhawan cabir's mom)

..

the lady jump on her place.. she turn and saw laughing manikk she run behind him to beat him ruk badmassh... ruk tujhe abhi batati hu..atlast she act like she is out of breath.. manikk stop and come toward her than she start beating him and manikk laugh and cried in pain aau ma ...ouch ouch at last she stop and laugh..😆😆

anamika ni sudhrega na slap him

manikk are ma sudhrunga na jab apple orange tree mai grow honge tab 😉

they chuckle anamika give him a piece of cake ye le tere liye special banaya hai,,,

he eat that in one go yum yum yum than he kneel down in front of her and said anu ma aami tomake bohot bhalo bashi( it means i love u ...cabir's mom is bengoli).. and he stand up anamika laugh..😆

are mera beta bohot nhi khub bhalo bashi he bit his tounge than cabir enter...

cabir kya boss meri hi mom k sath flirting.and mom aapne ye cake abtak mujhe bhi ni diya is bhukkad ko khila diya huhh not fair manikk showed him tounge 😛

anamika hold his ear accha bachoo subah jab mai bana rhi thi toh chupke se kon khaya tha huhh

cabir gave sheepish smile😳😳

anamika enquire accha waise sab aa gye kya or meri rapuzal(nandini) or thumblina (mukti) kha hai do dino se unhee ni dekha maine ...

manikk wo log abtak ni aaye kyaa??😕😕

Cabir said in obvious tone are tujhe pata ni hai kumbhkaran inhi ka beta hai trio laugh and anamika pull their ears khabardar agar meri raajkumariyo k bare mai kuch kha tohh ..they both nod and run from their. anamika chuckle..😆

They all settle in hall ...doing random things

(hall)"

Anamika are navu (navya) aloo(alya) tum log kab aaye ..😊

Navya and alya bas abhi aaye ma and they hug her anamika happily hug them

Than they all are doing masti like singing and dancing😛😉

Suddenly 2 girls peep from door and scrunch their nose they shout humare bina hi mastii huhhh..

Anamika that's ur punishment late aane ka ...they both make puppy face ,,than anamika open her arms and they happily run toward her and hopped in her arm

They shout maaa we missed u.😊😊

Anamika said smily I missed u too my rapunzal and thumblina

Alya said that's no fair making puppy face

Navya even we also missed u than anamika also invite them they happily hug her ..

Than boys also jump on them and they all greet the floor they start laughing.😆😆.

Anamika said getting up chalo mere babies brkfasst karlo or late kiye toh mai lunch ni banana wali

They all chuckle and settle themselves on sofa and some on floor and nandini alya and abhi serve them brk fast and they start having brk fast watching "despicable me" movie😉

Anamika smile fullest watching her babies happy than she look toward nandini waise rapunzal evry ones attention goes toward her

Nandini replied yes fairy mother(she calls anamika fairy mother)cutely blinking her eyes..

Anamika smile tum pakka 12^th class mai hi ho na everyone chuckle and nandini gave confuse look😕

Nandini why mai 12 ki ni lagti with pout

anamika aww at her and replied no sweety u looking like a tiny winy dool in this dress

(nandini's dress)

and nandini smile and peck her cheek thank uu😊

nandini turn toward cabir who is munching his sandwich as if its his last day on planet earth and cabir can we exchange our house m in love with ur house... with hope

He plainly replied no she make sad pout and all chuckle and manikk poke her nose to which she smile... they all enjoy the brkfast and help anamika to wash the utensils or we can say creating more mess.. at last they all went outside cabir's house garden"

Anamika ask them tohh vacation mai kya karrre ho caressing abhi s hair who is sleeping in her lap

Dhruv are ma wo manikk k castle mai jane ka plan hai😊

Navya ha ma mai to bohot excited hu anamika smile

All said mai bhi and manikk just hmmed who is sleeping on nandini's lap and she is cressing his hair and talking to alya..

Alya ma appko kuch chahiye wha se mai shopping ki list bana rhi hu😃😃

Mukti alya or uski shopping ,,waise ma aap bhhi chalo na😊

Anamika are bacche mere orphanagr k bacche mujhe jane nhi denge than mukti back hug her and sighly said kash aap bhi chalte...🥱

Suddenly cabir said guyzz lets go ,, mom ab hum log chalte h,, its kasauli cow boys and fairies time ,, all shout woo in happiness...😛😉😆

They all jump in excitement and left after kisses and hugs to anamika ..but manikk again came and kiss her cheek and left.. anamika just smile wholeheartly ... aand went inside home...humming song..😊😊

(hey guyzz finnaly i updated ..plzz tell howzz it😉 )

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