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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: gtilwani45

Olleee. Gussa mat kro naa. may be for exams shayad ye ho raha h. but I know sb response dege. because u have very amazing writing skills girl... but me to dugi.. so back to update. . Update was mere man ko relax krne vali. so nandu is missing manik. thank god . use feel hua . she is guilty for her words.. or uska wolf bhi us se bat nhi ke raha. haww.. n thanks to mukti. us ki wajah se nandini ko akal aayi. to manik ka bhi past h pr kya h past. or manik kaisa hoga phlee. manik kha h..missing him.. Nandu ki tarah.. me bhi missy kr rahi hu.. soo hope nandu first step le Manik ki taraf.. waiting for next update eagerly impatiently. update denaa plshhh.. Waiting. ... thanks for pm... Love Geet

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: archu_asok

Awesome update. Loved it. Nandini's pov was well penned. It was amazing.hmm She was feeling guilt.mukti's intro was mindblowing. Loved mukthi and nandini's part. Her words about manik says he has a bitter past.wow nandini is missing manik.her wolf is not talking with her. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.thanks for pm.this story is getting interesting. Love to read more.keep up the good work.

Keep writing
Stay blessed😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: radhikar3

Awesome update as usual

So nandu is missing manik
Interesting 😲😲
Excited to know about manik's past
Thanks for update
Waiting for next update eagerly 👏

Updating dear
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: piyu008

Nandu should have behaved more matured. .but anyway she is 18..can't blame her..

I don't one thing. .why nandu behaves as if this mate thing does efect her a bit..yes she is missing him..regretting what she did..

But still even last second chapter. . It was clear that Manik feels more for her..

At one point it felt to me as if ..only manik has d efect of this mate thingy. .nandu doesn't. .
This sorta reminds me s2 me nandu ka behaviour. .Niti n cvs were the reason behind it but still..sorry for talking about s2..its just my pov..

I am just curious behind nandu's behaviour towards manik..why she doesn't feel d same intensity. ?

N exams are around d corner na that's why comments are less..even I have exams on going. .
So wait till march mid..readers will be back..
Don't get upset. .
Stay blessed. .
Keep smiling. .

N we love your story
Updated soonish😃

Thank you and updating...u will get to know
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Vandyandy

Thks for the PM Diya

Superb update
Manik is being so gentle n sober to Nandu.
And Nandu is taking him for granted
Understood he blackmailed her , but atleast he hasn't forced himself on her.

Now that she is staying alone far away from him, she think
Wow !!!! Mukti is Manik's Behna

Hehehe !!!! Nandu was shocked to see mukti's closeness.
Awww!!!!! Nandu was so Red on hearing if Manik MARKED her.

She too is confused why Manik has not yet done it .
But it's good since she is alone she will get to understand what she has to do .
As she always take or say without thinking.

Wow!!!! SHE IS ALREADY MISSING HIM. GOOD

WAITING FOR THE NX.

Thank you and updating...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: pujadas187

Sorry fr nt commenting on last posts due to exm...

Nice update... Nandu is regretting fr beheaving rude did manik...missing him like hell...
Manik has a worst past...
What is it??..

Wait for the update...u will get to know
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: manancraze

Like finally... Finally... Moon goddess give our dear nandu some brain...😆.

Loved nandu's POV...she is really missing manik...😒
But I wonder what kind of "JAKHAM" mukti is talking about....
Manik 7 din se lapata...😲...kaha hain woh...!!!

Anyway loved the update...
Cont soon.
Take care...😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: megha94kumari

when u r going to update

Today 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello guys am back...well do you guys missed me or not...well I missed you guys a lot...here is ur update...ENJOY😛









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PART - 6 (B)





Manik was sitting in his office working in his laptop...but he couldn't concentrate in his work...he shut the laptop with a thud...


Manik Pov :

What the hell...what the hell is happening...why can't I concentrate ...God dammit...why? why? why? ...kyu hota ha... mere saath hi kyu? How? How can she said that ?Reject us? ...is that...is that easy for her? Did my closeness doesn't effect her...did she doesn't feel tingles when I touch her...her only voice makes my Wolf go mad...I didn't speak to her...I didn't see...it's being 7 days...7 freak*** days God dammit!!!!..she is so close to me...but still she is away...she wants to go away...my Wolf doesn't talk to me...he doesn't like all this...but I can feel his pain...Staying away from mate makes us go crazy...I need to do something...I need to go...go away for here...so she can live her life like the way she wants...I knew after that I will be destroyed...but it's worth it...bcz it makes our mate happy...



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Nandani was running in the corridor...

Nandani Pov :

I was runing ...I just want one thing to meet manik only ...suddenly I felt someone is calling me ...


Cabir : luna...luna...please stop...


I stop and looked at cabir...I still remember he is the beta (second in command )in the pack...but why he is running...and not breathing...wait did I say not breathing...I looked at cabir and said

Nandani smirkingly said :u knew...u can breathe...


Cabir confusingly said :hain...


Nandani :OK...see take oxygen and release carbon dioxide...just like breathe in...breathe out...u see😉


Cabir looked at nandani for a second...and then take breathe...both of them burst into laughter...


Cabir smilingly said :thanks for that luna...but aap yaha itni raat ko...


God why can't they understand I don't like myself call luna...I pointed a finger towards him


Nandani : first of all don't call me luna ...and second am on mission...


I said grinningly while cabir makes a confused face...


Cabir confusingly said : which mission luna?


Nandani : to kick ur Alpha's ass 😉


I said it but I can see the amusement on cabir's face...bloody heck...am late...shit!!!...I again started walking but cabir again stops me...this guy naa...I will kill him for sure ...


Nandani angrily said : what?


Cabir smirkingly said : well do u need any help in ur missionnn...😉


I looked at him...he stretched the word mission teasingly...okay...I understand...but I Scriously needs his help to find manik...


Nandani :well yes take me to ur Alpha please...

I said as politely as I can...bcz this time if i loose my temper...I will loose my mate too...I already took a lot time...he already suffer a lot bcz of me...now it's my turn to make everything fine...

Cabir smirkingly said :ur wish is my command luna 😉


I so wanted to wipe that smirk ...but no nandani u have to control...this jerk...control nandani...control...I took a deep breath and followed cabir aka B.C. (beta cabir in nandani's language bas***d cockie )...soon we stops in front of the door...I can smell him here and I know he too get to know am here...I just hope now everything went well...


Cabir smirkingly said : here u go luna...alpha is in this room...


I nodded my head and give my real smile to him...well I guess this was the first time I smiled (a real one )


Nandani smilingly said : thank you cabir


Cabir smirkingly said :it's okay lu...I mean nandani...it's my duty...and yes all the best 😉





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MANIK'S OFFICE -


I entered in manik'smirkingly office ...WOW that was amazing in must say his office is bigger than my dad office...










I looked around and saw him looking outside of the window...I took a deep breath and started walking towards him...I stops in front of him ...but still he didn't looked at me...nor say anything ...god it hurts...hurt so much...now i can feel how he must be feeling when I usually ignored him like that...I fight with my tears for not coming...but it's like they were not in my control...I quickly wiped it...


Nandani :Ma.ni.k...

I was stammering ...and I know why was i ...I was not able to speak...finally he looked at me ... Oh god! ...what he do to himself...he have dark circles ...his face was no more glowing...his eyes...his ever chocolaty eyes whom I always drowned there is no spark over there ...Oh goddess...what i did...he turned his face and sat on his chair...he was expressionless ...as if nothing happens...

Manik :do u need anything?

He said so plainly ...goddess...How can he be hide his pain so easily...how can anyone do that?


Nandani nervously said :umm ...yes...I need something...


Manik :OK...I will call cabir...he is my beta...whatever u need he will give it to you...


Nandani loudly said :No


Manik raised his eye brows...shit! Why I said so loudly...


Nandani : umm ...actually whatever I want only u can give me...no one else...


I don't knew how am i going to say ...c'mon nandani u can do it...I can feel he was looking at me...

Manik : what u want?


He was still not looking at me ...his eyes were over his laptop...but still I can feel he was listening me...I took a deep breath and said


Nandani :forgiveness...


Manik shockingly said : what?


Nandani : yes manik...am really very sorry...am sorry for my rude behaviour...am sorry for my ignorance towards u ...am sorry for not trusting u ...am sorry for every single thing which hurts u ... believe me I was not happy...by doing all this...it's just my mind was stuck over the past...a lot of things happened in past manik...I was waiting for my mate ...and...I got u ...then I had to leave my family unwillingly...I still feel like okay...but...
then I got to know about ur physical relationship...believe me am not blaming u...it's just circumstances are quite like this ...these makes me thought that u don't love me...u doesn't want me to be ur mate that's why I said all this...but when u confess...u confessed ur love...I realised that moment that I...I too ...like u...I want to say that very night but u didn't came...u ..u just vanished...I knew whatever I said was wrong...please forgive me...I want to give us a chance...I want our relationship work...please forgive me...



I was waiting for him to say something...my eyes were filled with tears...but he didn't said anything...nor even looked at me...God why I hurt him so much...why? why? why? I turned around...but stop immediately as soon as I hear him


Manik :ruko



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So how's it...I hope you guys like it...I updated today...bcz I got the response...but now if you guys want me to update asap ...u all have to comment...
Bcz manik reply is still waiting ...
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KEEP SHINING FOR UR LOVE ONE'S !!!
LOVE YOU ALL
DIYA❤️
Edited by diyaNarwal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Make Manan patchup soon. Loved the update. Post a bigger one next time. Take care.

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