#2 The Devil (i m back)pg -125 1/7/16

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Sunshine2604

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Posted: 9 years ago

#571

Firstly I'm so sorry that I'm commenting this late.
I have my own reasons nevertheless.
Thanks for the pm
Coming to the story, it's nice to see the plot unfolding.
Hope you continue soon.

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ankitabansal08

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Posted: 9 years ago

#572

update ws too good..

continue soon

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archu_asok

@archu_asok

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Posted: 9 years ago

#573

Awesome update. Was so emotional. Nandini's scared state was well penned. Hats off.nandini was badly hurt. Manik's reaction after seeing nandini in that state was well written. U nailed it. Manik was crying for his life nandini. Totally an mindblowing update Manan's emotional state was well penned. Eagerly waiting for next update .Continue soon.thanks for pm.this story is getting interesting. Love to read more. Who was that one who attacked nandini.

Keep writing

Stay blessed😊

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Namrata

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Posted: 9 years ago

#574

Omg...

Hope so nandu will be fyn..

awesome update...

Thanks for pm...

Waiting for next one...

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Raksha.Sareen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#575

Shocking update!

Nandini..being kidnapped..thankgod she gt saved...

Bt nxt..wat happnd was more scarng!

I hope..nandini..wil be ok..

Well written..!

amazing..!

Thanks for the pm..n fast update!

Continue soon..!

Stay blessed!

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lovlytuli

@lovlytuli

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Posted: 9 years ago

#576

so painful part...

very sad fr nandini...

hope all will fine...

tysm fr the pm...

waiting fr the next part...

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avneetmalhotra

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Posted: 9 years ago

#577

Omg manik was so scared nandu ko ESE dekhkr n that true that god is punishing him fr his deeds

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radhikar3

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Posted: 9 years ago

#578

Ky ho raha hai yeh

Manik ke wajahse nandu ko suffer karba pada

N who was that guy 😡😡

Amazing update

Loved it

Thanks for update

Waiting for next update eagerly⭐️👏

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zarakhanarlover

@zarakhanarlover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#579

Both the part were amazing.
Lovely

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sohai ambro

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Posted: 9 years ago

#580

Thnx for d pm
Truly said karma always chases u back !!!
Bt in sb me bechari nandini had to suffer
I hope she overcomes dis phase f her life n cn go back to her heaven her manik

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