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piyu008

@piyu008

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

oh poor nandu..

I hope Manik gets his memory back jaldi se...

atleast he accepts her n babies ..that good for now..

loved d update...it was amazing

update soonish😳

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Vidhiarora1

@Vidhiarora1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

Wowweee

Amazing part

Sooo damn different concept yr really impressed

Manan first meet
Sometimes Flashback
N sometimes present

Everything superbly planned

Hats off

Manik k parents ka sach m positive role hi h
na
N alya ka kya
Positive or negative

So many questions
Let's c

Love u loads
Vidhi

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tasmin_ts

@tasmin_ts

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Posted: 9 years ago

#123

Awesome loved it...truly it's amezing...new idea of urs 👏👏 well done...

nandu is a fighter...she will manage everything calmly hope so...

manik isn't that bad he will cope up with nandini very soon now will take care of her n his babies...they kicked when manik is around...like father like son...😆

Do continue

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Princeraj1425

@Princeraj1425

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#124

Nice update.

Glad that manik has Atleast accepted that he has lost his memory. Now may b he will try to remember all those things.

Last part was cute. Manik touching her belly to feel his kids.

Continue soon.
Stay blessed.

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ky2manan

@ky2manan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#125

I as loving your story
It in so beautiful
Nandini is so broken
She is remembering her past with him
He came and kept his hand on her belly
The babies kicked just for their father
The way you showed Manik's relationship with the unborn babies is so beautiful
Manik's father told him everything but he doesn't remember
Update soon

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sri_valli

@sri_valli

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#126

Read two parts in one go dear...very emotional story...manik lost his memory and nandini is the one who is suffering the most...the way u revealing the past was too gud...their babies kicked when they found their fathers touch...that's awesome... Waiting for further updates dear...

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siyaaaali

@siyaaaali

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#127

beautiful uodate...

loved their first meeting...

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sohai ambro

@sohai121

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#128

Thnx for pm
So dere first meeting was like dis
Its pretty amazing
Its so bad dat manik lost his memory bt anyways d theme f d stry z dis
Den u shd carry on its pretty interesting
I feel pity on nandini situation
How much she z gong thrgh

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SehrMemon

@sehrmemon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#129

PROMO

"Talk to me" I shook my head "No" I yelled. "GET OUT NOW I'm...losing control" She squealed, "Oh" she said and ran over to the door but she didn't get to open it when I ran to her in lighten speed and grabbed her. I pushed her against the wall and moved her head aside and bit down on her neck.

"yes that's them manik from 1950's talking who didn't care about anything but his life and his wife whatever she said he use to listen" Manik shot up from his seat "Be quite about Alya you always speak wrongly of her? I love her just as you loved mother and why can't you see that I am happy with her?"

"think about it you have 10 days to decide or else we are coming for her and you won't be able to stop us blood will be shredded and people will die too decision is yours and nandini you will lose your manik and the father of these babies" said Harshad with fake pity on his face and Dhruv smirked

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Sabakhan11

@Sabakhan11

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#130

it is a different story and the start is really fascinating

manik forgot about nandini

he doesn't remember who she is

and top it all there first meet it was so perfect

she knows manik is a vampire and they exist i really want to know how

update soon

promo seem confusing

but harshad and dhruv are there too and dhruv is evil quite fun

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