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Posted: 9 years ago
Di!!
Please update Di.
It's been a long time.
Missing it like hell.
Can't wait anymore.
Please update asap.
It's been over a month.
At least ek choota sa promo tho do.
Aur zyada wait mat karvavo.
Please please please
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Posted: 9 years ago
Jitne desperation update k liye dikha rahy thy utne comments me na dikhai na tou bacho me naraz! 😆

Happy Reading!!😃


Chapter 24 A

Nandini's POV..

I woke up with a lovely sight 'his face' and HE pecked my forehead. How much I was longing for his touch.? Again those bad moments roamed in my head and I my breath became again wild..! Manik noticed my expressions and made me hide my face in his neck..


"Please..! Smile..!"He whispered to me and I burst out in tears again..!


"Shh..!"He shushed me and I felt his lips pressed on my head..! "Am ok..! Relax..! Please...! Jaan please..!"He was literally pleading and I clutched him tightly..


"I lo-love you..!"I stammered between my sobs..


"I know..! I know..! I love you too..!"He spoke lovingly all the time patting my head..! After few moments he broke the hug and fused our lips..! I sobbed between the kiss but replied with equal favor..! He was assuring me through his getures that he was ok but I knew he was not! It must be paining..! I knew! We kept kissing for God knows how long and then broke gasping for air!


"Main theek hoon..! Sach main..!"He said stroking my cheek with his thumb and I held his hand in mine between close to my heart..


"Bhai ny bola tha that you will come back for me..!"I said looking in his eyes and he smiled..


"Aur myny tum say bola tha that your bhai never lies..!"He spoke sweetly and I again hugged him..


"Ohh Manik..! I was so scared..!"I whispered in his ears and he kissed my neck..


"You are my such a strong girl you survived..! Ab tmhy scared hony ki koi zarorat nahi hai..! Am back..! I will fix EVERYTHING!"His tone had something which gave me relief..! I was about to say something when suddenly he hissed..! I broke the hug and look at him..


"What happened?"I got up with a jerk as he pressed his lips..! "Manik boliya na..! Kya hua hai?"I got off the bed and held his hand. He pressed my hand so tightly..! Maybe his wound was paining! How much careless I was to share bed with him..! I made him uncomfortable! Shit shit! "Is it paining a lot ?"I asked hell scared..


Manik's POV..


"Ahhh..!"I almost yelled in pain. It was unbearable..! While Nandini's expressions became worried..! I wanted to control myself but the pain...


"Manik..! Is it paining a lot?"She freaked out all the time caressing my forehead which was sweaty now..! I sealed my lips to suppress the shouts..! "Hold on I will ca-call the doc-doctor..!"She said to me and run out..! Again she had tears in her eyes because of me SHIT! Itne mushkil say I had calmed her down..! Soon the doctor came running with his team and I saw Nandini standing in the ward door hell scared and horrified, eyes filled with tears..! GOD! Please give me strength to heal soon so I can assure her that am fine!


"Mr.Malhotra..! Don't suppress it! Let your hiss out..!"Doctor said to me but I couldn't I know my shouts will hurt her more..!


"Mrs.Malhotra..! We need to change Mr.Malhotra's bandage..! You won't be able to see please go out for few minutes..!"Nurse said to Nandini who was constantly staring at me..!


"Ni..! I won't go..!"She said shaking her head and the injection which Doctor had given me just moments ago worked and my pain subsided in seconds..! I assured her with eyes that I was ok and she blinked her eyelids like a kid to shove the tears..! I know my wounds were very deep! But I wanted to get well soon for her..! Yes I wanted to be fine for her..! Nurse was about to unbutton my shirt when suddenly she came forward..


"Can I he-help?"She spoke stammering a lot and I look at her shocked!
Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 9 years ago
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Chapter 24-B

"Can I he-help?"She spoke stammering a lot and I look at her shocked!


Why was she trying to behave so strong when she was not! Or maybe I was judging her wrong? She was strong..!


"Are you sure Mam?"Nurse asked and she nodded determinedly..


"Oky..!"She agreed as Doctor too gave his approval and I stared at her face..! She was not looking at me as she unbuttoned my shirt. Her eyes were blood red! But she was not crying! Nurse and Doctor told her how to give dressing the wound! She heard and noticed all the instructions with great patience..!


"Doctor when will you discharge me?"I asked after they were done with their task. I laid down and Nandini sat beside me..


"Mr.Malhotra..! Bullet wounds take time to heal..! You won't get a discharge until I will be satisfied..!"Doctor spoke in a very strict tone and I made a bad face.. "I will send the breakfast and medicines! Get well soon young man..! And Mrs.Malhotra for you..! I want to salute you..! I mean I have seen ladies fainting when they normally face these kind of incidents but you..! Your patience! You even helped us in everything! Your patience and care will help him to heal very soon..!"Doctor appreciated Nandini and I held her hand over my chest..! While she was sitting with a low gaze..!


"Yes doctor! My girl is very strong! She can face and tolerate everything! Please help me heal soon..! I want to be fine for her..!"I said all the time staring at her face and she was staring in her lap..! After greeting us Doctor left..! She look at me and smiled weakly..! She bent down and pressed her lips on my forehead..


"How can you act so strong?"I asked blinking my eyes..


"Manik..! The seven vows which we took together na! Us main myny kasam khai the kay jaisy ap mery saddest moment main mery sath thy bilkul usi trha I will be with you in every moment..! Main bachi zaroor hoon par itne weak nahi kay ap ko pain ho raha ho aur main dar kar bahar chali jaoan..! For you I can fight with everything! And I really owe my words..!"She was speaking all the time staring at my face and I was speechless..! I had nothing to say...! I didn't needed more explanation..! Nopes..!


"Ab dard tou ni ho raha?"She asked caressing my hair and I shook my head like baby. I love to show her tantrums..! "Ap rest karen! I will come after few minutes..! Mjy washroom jana hai..!"She said after a pause and was about to get up when I held her hand more tightly..


"Promise karo that you won't cry..! Mujh say chup kar tou bilkul bhi nahi..! "I said to her as I knew her very well and she looked away...


"I won't..!"She smiled at me finally and I kissed her knuckle..


"Thank you..!"I whispered lovingly. She mouthed an I love you and went out..! The nurse came with breakfast and volunteered to help but I denied as I wanted Nandini to feed me. I asked nurse to look for her and she went out nodding her head. I was texting with Cabir when suddenly the door opened with a jerk and the person who came in left me shocked..


"Manik..!"She shouted and came running towards me..


"Mom..!"I mumbled and she hugged me tightly. My breath! It was lost! After so many years I got her warmth..!


"Kesy ho beta?"She asked me all the time crying and I gently broke the hug..


"Ap k ex-husband ny tou poori try ki the mery Friend ko maarny ki but I saved him..!"I spoke looking away and she sobbed again..


"Manik please..!"She was crying like anything but..


"Ja kar Apny Ex-Husband ko bool dijye that I will take revenge for each tear of my girl! Us kay har aansoo ka badla loon ga main! aik baari is bed par say uth jaoan..! It's the only hurdle between me and his NECK! You may leave now!"I spoke scrunching my lips and look away in disgust! She had tears in her eyes but I don't care! Nandini kay tears kay samny wo sab kuch bhi nahi!


"Oky..! But aik baat jo ma-main tum say poo-poochna chahti hoon! Plea-please I ne-need yo-your sincere answer!"She spoke and I felt my heartbeat rushing! I knew what she wanted to ask..! "Kya tum mj sa-say bil-bilkul bhi pya-pyaar nahi karty?"She asked cupping my cheek and I was forced to look at her..! I can't lie! But I didn't wanted to fall weak infront of her! Atleast not now! I wanted to tell her that I needed her in every step of life! But I won't! Yes I won't!


"You know! I had always thought kay jo bhi ho! Atleast my Mom won't leave me alone but! Thank you for proving me wrong! I don't know why you and Dad hate me so much! But still..! I want you to leave now!"I was shattered even I had the right to spit my anger..


"I don't hate you..! I love you darling..!"Her words and gestures were making me weak..


"Please just leave..!"I shouted and before I could say anything I saw all my buddies coming in..! They were laughing on something and when they saw Mom they stopped on their tracks..


"You guys come..! Am just leaving..!"Mom said getting up and wiped her tears. I wanted to stop her but I couldn't and she walked out..!


"Kesa hai?"Cabir and Jack both asked together as they sat on my either sides..! While I nodded...!


"Where is Nandini? We had brought food and clothes for her..!"Alya said and Mukti picked up the breakfast tray to fed me..


"Washroom tak gai hai..! But abhi tak wapas nahi I..!"I too was worried now..! Then I look at Tiger who was quietly sitting on the couch staring at me..! "Tum sab jaoa and find Nandini..! Tiger say baat karni hai mjy..!"I said to all of them and they all left except Mukti and Tiger..! Mukti was feeding me and I stopped her..


"Kab tak chaly ga ya sab?"I asked to Tiger and he looked away..


"I am sorry Manik..! Aik baari phir say me tjy protect ni kar paya..!"He whispered sadly and I shook my head..


"Why sorry? Q soch raha hai tu aisy..! Buddy..! Tum sab say ziada important kuch nahi hai mery liye..!"I said putting my hand on his shoulder..


"Kal raat say main isy samjha rahi hoon..! But his guilt is killing him Manik..!"Mukti was hell worried..


"Buddy..! Dekh..! Jo bhi hua! The thing is I am ok..! You are ok..! Everything is good and fine now..! Tu tou strenght hai meri..! Tu weak par jye ga tou me Nandini ko kesy sambhaloon ga? Haan? In duffers ko kesy sambhaloon ga?"I asked playfully and he finally smiled..!


"Thank you for coming back Manik..!"He spoke emotionally and I hugged him tightly..!


"Tjy dard tou nahi ho raha ziada?"I asked still hugging him.


"Nahi..! Gooli choo k guzri the bus!"He said casually and I broke the hug..! I cupped his cheeks and smiled..


"Main tum sab me say kise ko kuch nahi hony doon ga I promise..!"I said smiling at him and suddenly the door banged open..!


"Mukti..! Come fast..!"Alya shouted worriedly and we all look at her confused..



"What happened?"I asked confused..



"Nothing..! Girls talk..!"Alya faked the smile and run out with Mutki..!


"What happened to them? Kya hua sab ko?"I asked worriedly and Tiger got up.


"Aa jayen gay..! Tu medicine lay..!"He said handing me over the medicine and I gulped it down..


"Please..! Nandini ko bula na..! Mjy fikar ho rahi hai us ki..!"I was not getting good vibes..!


"Acha acha! Main dekhta hoon..! Tu relax kar..!"He said to me and my heart beat was wild..
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Chapter 24-C

Nandini's POV..

I stumbled towards washroom and entered it. I wanted to cry but I had promised Manik not to. I washed my face but the head was dizzy. Maybe it's because more then 24 hours since I had my last meal. I felt like falling here and there. I kept standing with the washbasin trying to gather myself but it was difficult. I came out of the washroom taking the support of the wall and walked slowly back to Manik's ward. Blurry everything and suddenly I lost everything..! Full blank..! I wanted to held something when suddenly someone hold me..!


"Nandu?"I heard Jack's panic voice and then done!
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Writer's POV..

Fab3 and Alya were finding Nandini in every corridor of the hospital when a nurse told her where she was. They reached that area and saw Nandini coming leaning with the wall. All rushed to get her and suddenly they saw her falling. Jack run towards her and held her before she could touch the floor.


"Nandu?"He patted her cheeks but she was fainted..


"Crap..! She is fainted guys..!"Jack shouted again and all were worried. He picked her up and run to get the doctor.


"Alya..! Call Mutki! Maybe Nandini need you both, don't tell Manik..!"Max said to Alya running behind Jack and she run to get Mukti..
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"Due to low sugar levels and low blood pressures she fainted! Since when she had her last meal?"Doctor said to all buddies..


"I think it's been more then 24 hours..!"Cabir said sheepishly and Doctor shook his head..


"This all stress and depression! Anyways let her take rest properly..! And please take care of her meal..!"Doctor spoke again and all nodded...


"Urrmm! Doctor! May I ask something?"Alya started hesitantly and lady doctor nodded..! "Is she pregnant?"She blurted out and all shoot a glance at her while Doctor looked confused..


"What made you say that?"Doctor asked and she bite her lower lip..


"Was just wondering as she fainted!"She said sheepishly and Max glared her to stop speaking rubbish...! No one can afford getting this little girl pregnant YET...


"No no..! She is not! Just need a little rest and let this drip get finished..!"Doctor too felt a little embarrassed and left out..


"Pagal ho gai hai tu Alya? Kya boly ja ri hai?"Jack whispered-yelled at her and she gulped the lump nervously..


"It's ok Jack..! But don't let Manik know about her yet..!"Cabir cleared the air and suddenly Tiger came in..


"Nandini..!"He almost screamed in fear when he saw his baby sister lying unconscious with a drip attached to her body before he reach her Cabir held him..


"Relax! She is fine! Just fainted cuz the lack of food and depression!"He calmed him down and Tiger shook his head.


"Manik..! He will kill us..!"He muttered under his teeth and all look at each other how to tell Manik...! Toughest couple of all!


"God! When will this bad time over?"Mukti spoke rubbing her face in her palms and Jack slowly took her in his embrace..


"Everything will be ok sis! Just trust me!"He whispered kissing the top of her head and she clutched his blazer tightly sobbing in his chest..


"I can't see this beautiful couple in pain! Why always they have to suffer? Why God plays so unfair with them all the time?"Alya ask to Max and nobody had an answer...! Maybe destiny loves to take lovers E-X-A-M! Before anyone could comment over they heard Manik's shout..


"What the hell? I am not paralyzed that I can't walk..!"They heard Manik's yells and run out worriedly..


"Buddy!"Cabir shouted as he saw Manik struggling to walk in the corridor with lots of nurses around to stop him from doing so...! Manik look at Cabir and sighed...


"Guys! Where is my girl? Nandini kahan hai? I was calling you all from so long! Kya hua hai?"He complaint and tried to walk again! Only Manik Malhotra could stand on his feet so early after an injury like this! All run to get him..!


"Sir please your stitches..!"Nurse pleaded again to get him back...


"Shut up! Go away! I can walk!"He roared and stumbled towards his friends before they get him...


"Yaar tu kya kar raha hai? Let's take rest!"Jack said as he gave him support..


"Topic mat badlo! Meri Nandini kahan hai?"Manik said glaring at all of them..


"Aray she is taking bath! Tu chal wapas! Look you are stressing your wounds!" Tiger said softly and Manik made a bad face before walking back to his room.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh Mao..
1 thng! love u soo mch yaar..
M dancing.. Yayiee..!
Thanx alot for updating dea..
okay.. Readng d chap nw..
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Chapter 24-D

Manik's POV..

"Come on! Call her! Please! Wo theek tou hai na??" My anxiety was increasing every second as I stared all my buddies faces.


"Has something bad happened to her?" Suddenly I shouted worriedly..


"Ok suspense up! We can't hide! Manik Nandini is fainted and she is unconscious so she is sleeping!" Jack spilled the beans in a very straight forward ignoring the glares he got from others while I almost had a heart attack..


"What!?? And you all were hiding this??? Where is she? Is she ok? Mjy lay chalo us k pass!!" I was going insane with worry. My fragile doll was suffering so much! I had promised to her Maa that I will take care of her but I failed. Oh God. I panicked so much for her that after half an hour hospital management arranged a second bed in my ward and shifted Nandini on it. She was still sleeping. Oh my darling. So pale..! So broken..! I wish I could reverse the time where we were happy and she was smiling for me.


Almost two hours passed with me staring at her face and she was sleeping. I wounds were literally paining and the heavy medicines I had were pushing me in slumber but I forced to open my eyes.


"Manik! I think you should sleep! See Nandini will be angry if she will come to know that you didn't rested properly!" Cabir said caressing my hair and I sighed. How much I wanted to have her in my arms but these wounds and bloody bandages had restricted me away off her. Finally I too closed my eyes and within seconds slumber over took me.

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I woke up when something wet fell on my cheek and HER sweet whisperings..


"I am strong for you! Very strong! I know you will be ok! I love you! I love you so much Manik! Please jaldi theek ho jyen! My heart aches when I see you like this! I want my Manik back! I want you so much!" She whispered all the time her lips lingering on my forehead her words touched my soul.I opened my eyes lazily and got to see the most beautiful face bent over me but crying once again. She noticed me awake and smiled in her tears.


"How are you feeling?" She chocked lightly in her words and I smiled back holding her hand in mine. With other I wiped her tears shaking my head in a no not to cry and palmed her cheek she snuggled in my palm breaking in sobs again. I immediately got up and held her close to my chest again.


"Hey! Baby! Shhh! I told you not to cry na? Am ok! And why are you up? You also need rest! Apni tbyt khrb kar lo ge tou mera khyl kesy rakho ge?" I tried to cheerup her mood trying to calm her shaking body..


"I love youu! I can't live without you! Please I beg you don't leave me!!!" That's all she was ranting. "I will be a good girl! I won't bug you! Bilkul tang ni karoon ge ap ko! Please Manik..!" She clutched the back of my shirt in a death grip and I pulled her more closer. Her each word.


"Nandu!!! Shhh! Chup! Listen you don't bug me ok! I know you love me baba! Please you are hurting me by saying all this jaan!" I spoke stroking her hair and she look at me with swollen eyes pouting like a baby. Awww!


"You had promised me that you won't cry tou ab?" I asked raising my eyebrow in a funny manner and she finally smiled.


"You raise your eyebrow like my school principal! He was a funny man!" She giggled wiping her tears and like finally...! Finally I distracted her.


"Ohh! Funny and all haan? Mrs Malhotra do I need to tell you that how much funny I am?" I said huskily and pushed her hair off her neck only to dig her neck. She arched it to give me more access and ruffled my hair. I love you so much...


"Sorry I fell unconscious!" Suddenly she whispered and I pulled back.


"Acha yaad krya! Give me my cell! I will call Cabir to bring your favorite food!" I said grabbing my phone and dialed for him while Nandini was staring at me. After I hung up she leaned forward and pecked my lips softly while my fingers traveled in her hair to deepen the kiss.


"I missed you!" She whispered innocently after we broke and rested our foreheads. "I missed your care! Please don't leave me again like this!" She was whispering and I kissed her knuckles..


"I won't ever!" I whispered back and she smiled lightly resting her head on my shoulder.

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Nandini's POV..

"Manik!!!" I almost yelled and pulled his ear.


"Ouch ouchhh!!" He shouted in pain..


"Shhh! And eat your medicines or else I won't leave your ear!" I said angrily and he nodded immediately like a kid with that he gulped the medicines hastily. Cabir bhai was laughing like an idiot and rolling on the couch he fell down. Manik picked up his pillow and threw on him.


"Oh God! You guys are so cute! Manik no! Like seriously tu sirf Nandini k he control me aa skta hai!" He exclaimed still rolling on the floor and I wiped some imaginary dust from my shoulder to show off.


"Yeah yeah! That is actually very funny!" Manik said with a grumpy face causing us to broke into laughter again. I was about to said something when suddenly two tiny arms wrapped around my knees and I gasped.


"Maushii! Am here!"His toddler voice and my lovely baby was here..

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Ok! After so long right? Chalo dair aye darust aye! Thank You to Juhi my giving me permission to copy one of the scene from hers FF-Life With Nandini..! I know update is full of mistakes but bear with it! And yes whose the baby ? Any guesses ? Any person you have been missing in this story hmm? Keep guessing till next time! TMAHS is coming tomorrow hopefully with loads of twists and turns! Fasten your seat belts :)
Love, Mawara
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally u back with your update
Missed it so much
Awesome update
Loved it
Good one
Cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice update .continue soon. Isko ff banado plz. Mujha a story bohot khubsura lagtahe.plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yess... Again you are back with a Bang. I missed u sooo much sachi itna sara 🤗 Again an amazing update Luv u yaar tysm for d update jaldi jaldi nxt update pls😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow after such a long time
Awesome update
Well u covered almost every emotion in this update
Be it emotional romantic or funny
Every part was amazing
And who is this toddler who came at the end

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