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kavyach

@kavyach

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Posted: 9 years ago

#131

Wonderful and emotional update...

U penned it sooo well

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01asdfg

@01asdfg

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Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Awesome update
Beautifully described manans turmoil
Tigers guilt for not saving manik
just loved it
continue soon

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manan_truelove

@manan_truelove

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#133

Wow!!!!!

Firstly congratulations for the new thread

U deserve every bit

And secondly all the very best for ur resulss...

May allah give u the best..

Cmng to the update it was asusal the best..

U really very nicely had written the turminol

Of manan...especially i really liked the heaven

Wala thingss...and the most was when manik said he wants to

Make family and he has lots of pending workss..

Iliked this part the most...and how can i forget

Our tigress nandu..wow!!!was really good...

Over all the update was fab..really liked it..

Hope u update soon...will be eagerly waiting...

Love,

Zeenat

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daddysjaan

@daddysjaan

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#134

too emotional update.. I was literally crying while reading.. nandini in such a vulnerable condition...
tiger's condition was also so painful...here his buddy was struggling btwn life nd death.. nd his sister in so bad condition.. so painful..but finally manik is bck nd he vl teach Mr.MALHOTRA what is power of love..
Mr.MALHOTRA is really cruel.. how can a father be so cruel?? so bad

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@ps_angel

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#135

Omg

Kya updte thaa yrrr

It gt eveythnnn

Nandini ka har rang dikhaaa

Loved d way she fought wd his dad

N den

Their turmoil

Everythn

Tiger ki halat

Sbb kuch

Heaven walaa scene bhi...

Awesmmreree

N all d bst fr ur resulttt

Cntnue soon :) :)

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LUCKYRICKLY

@LUCKYRICKLY

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#136

omg, patter dilwaalo bhi is chaper dek kar royegi, baapre itna rona dona meri bus ki baat nai he, thank god aap ne abhi manik ko jagaya,so next full revange, and all ha. nice

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nanoNikki

@nanoNikki

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#137

Awesome update...u nailed it...every emotion...and all ...continue soon waiting eagerly for next update..take care 😊

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vinojaya

@vinojaya

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#138

Such a emotional update...really superb...take care...keep shining...😊

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Claire_D

@Claire_D

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Posted: 9 years ago

#139

This chapter was one emotional chapter! Everyone's turmoils & guilt brought me to tears. It's like I could feel what one is going through while reading.
Tiger's fright & insecurity of what Mr. Malhotra can do especially after the warning that he gave at Tiger's house. Manik saving his friend. He seen the bullet & saved Tiger, and once the bullet hit him all he could think about was Nandini.
Nandini telling Mr. Malhotra not to harm the person who means the world to her. I liked how Cabir & Jack stood up for her. Tiger consoling Nandini was something what was another highlight. Tiger being strong & answering her queries patiently & telling her that Manik would come back for her.
Finally Manik gains consciousness & he called Nandini first. Her face, was more than enough for Manik to know that she had been through Hell without him. Tasting the soup to make sure Mr. Malhotra didn't do anything.
I loved the Heaven & World Scene also. The way Manik was given an option of what to choose.

Now would like to see Manik giving Nandini the needed Assurance. Also getting Tiger out of the guilt & teaching his father a lesson.
Update soon!

And all the very best for your results! May you get the best of Marks!