Manan- a cute love story INDEX ON PG-1 &CH-8 to 13ON PG 11&12( - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

ek bada wala chapter aap sab ke liye.. happy reading..!!!

CHAPTER-7

FOOD COURT

Cabir- ab ye ladkiya kaha reh gaya bhai..!!

Manik- mujhe nahi lagtha ki wo log aaj aayega..##

JUST THEN THE GIRLS ENTERED WITH LOT OF SHOPPING BAGS..

Dhruv- lo aagayae..

Mukti- what's up guys...?

Cabir- glad that you all returned so soon..

Manik- mujhe toh laga aaj tum log nahi aane walae hai..

Alya- (sarcastically) haha.. very funny..!

Dhruv- pura mall khareed ke araheho kya..?

Alya shouts- baby..!!(made an angry pout)

Dhruv- mazak kar raha hu baba..!

Manik- ?(pointing to nandu) tuJhe kya huwa..? kuch bolthi kyu nahi ho..!!

Nandu-(glares) none of your business..##

cabir- shanth.. shanth.. chalo bahuth bhook lagi hai.. kuch khathe hai..!

Mukthi- yeah.. come..

everyone settled.. dhruv alya and nandu on one side.. cabir mukthi and manik opposite to them..

they were talking about random things.. nandini completely ignored manik throughout the conversation.. he got pissed off.. suddenly nandu gets a call from navya..

Nandu- hai navya..

navya- tum ho kaha...? college kyu nahi aayi..

nandu- wo main shopping ke liye aayi hu..

navya- mujhe bhulaye bina akhele akhele chala gaya..!!

nandu- wo mujhe laga tum college me hogi.. is liye mukthi alya ke saath aaya tha..!

Navya- acha... tikhe..! mein apna scooty nahi laaya aaj.. tu mujhe pick kar loge..?

Nandu- haa.. mein abhi athi hun.. tum kaha ho..?

Navya- abhi college se nikhali hu..

Nandu- tikhe..! tum wahi wait karna... mein athi hu..

Navya.. okay.. Bye..

nandu returns to them..

Nandu- guys..! mujhe jaana hoga..

Manik- kyu..?

Nandu turns to cabir and answers him..

Nandu- mujhe navya ko college se pick karni hai.. wo aaj apna scooty nahi laaya tha.. is liye..

Manik- question meine pucha tha.. tum use kyu bol rahi ho..

Nandu(glares)- tumse matlab..

Manik- acha..! tum toh mere car me aayi hona.. toh navya ko kaise pick kar loge (asked raising his eyebrows)

Cabir- koi bath nahi.. mere car le jaa..

Manik(shouts)- cabirrr...!

Nandu- thanks cabir..!!

CAbir- anytime sistaa...!

Manik- no need. come with me.. i'll drop both of you..

Nandu(shouts)- mujhe tumhari help nahi chahiye.. suna tumne..

Manik- ye baar baar jagada kyu karthi ho tum mujhse..

Nandu- i dont feel to explain you..!!

Cabir- meri girl friend ke liye ye dhono kyu jagad raha hai.. mujhe kuch samaj me nahi aa raha hai..

Mukthi- ha yaar.. same feeling..

Cabir- shut up..!! i will get navya from college.. you guys carry on.. bye..

Nandu- cabir..!!!

manik takes her bag from the table and leaves..

Nandu- maanikkk..!

Manik- chillao math aur aw mere sath..

nandu follows him..

Alya- i wonder how much they fight..!!

Dhruv- i think hume bhi nikhalna chahiye...

Mukthi- yeah.. lets go..

they paid the bill and left..

MANIK'S CAR

MANIK was driving and nandu sat silently looking outside the car windows...

Manik- ab kuch bologi ya ghar tak aise hi chup betogae..?

NAndu- mujhe tum se koi bath nahi karni hai..!

Manik- ab maine kya kiya..?

Nandu-(made a baby face and complained) mere sath shopping karne kyu nahi aye the..?

Manik-(laughs) wo... toh iss wajah se naaraz ho tum...!

nandu- (shouts) yesss..

Manik- okay.. let it be na.. karliya na shopping.. ab kyu gussa..

nandu- dont talk to me..

Manik- ab ye volcano shanth hone liye mujhe kya karna padega..!!

Nandu- khud hi sochlo..

Manik- tikhe.. ek ice cream chalega..

Nandu- nahi..!

manik- okay... what about gol gappe..!!

Nandu- (shouts) yummie..!

Manik- toh.. volcano shaanth ho gaya..!

nandu- thoda sa..

they ate gol gappe with competetion.. as usual nandu won it..

again they resume their journey to home..

Nandu- manik! navya abhi aur arya ko bhi le jathe hai na hamare sath farm house..!!

Manik- ek minute...! arya..!!!( asks with questioning look)

Nandu- arey wo aryaman.. mein use arya bhulathi hu.. ushe acha lagtha hai..

Manik- aryaman nahi bhol sakthi ho kya..!!

Nandu- tumhe kya huwa mein ushe jo bhi bhulaw..!

Manik-(irritated) just leave it..!

Nandu- hmm.. ek kaam karthe hai.. hum cabir bhai aur mukthi ko surprise dethe hai..!! okay..??

Manik- idea bhura nahi hai..

Nandu- Nandini murthy ideas humesha best hi hotha hai..!!

Manik- hogaya tera.. ab chalo.. utharo car se... ghar aagaya hai..

Nandu- tum andhar nahi awogae ..?

Manik- hmm,, nahi.. tumhari wajah se mein unlogo se bina kuch kahe waha se nikhal chuka hu.. abhi unse milke atha hu..

Nandu- all the best..!!!! bye..

Manik- bye..


#uff...!!! itna bada chapter.. jyadha comments toh bantha hai...!!

so keep voting and commenting..!!!!😛😛😛











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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Nice read all the chapters
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Angelic_Doll

Nice read all the chapters



thank you..!!😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64

THANKS..!!😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Amazing update...
Manan's so cute...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: sruthilaya13



OBVIO SHREYA..!! AFTER ALL MY FRIEND, YOU HELPED ME WITH IT..!!


Hehe...😆
That's true... 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Awesomeee update as usual...I loved it to the Moon and back..!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
HELLO READERS..!! I KNOW I'M DAMN LATE.. SO FOR COMPENSATION HERE COMES THE DHAMAKEDHAAR OFFER.. TODAY NOT 1,2 OR 3 UPDATES..! BUT I'M GONNA POST TOTALLY 6 UPDATES..! HAI NA DHAMAKEDHAAR..!
CHALO DHER KIS BATH KE LIYE..! SHURU KARTHE HAI..!

HAPPY READING FELLAS..!!!


Edited by sruthilaya13 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
CHAPTER-8

MUKTHI'S HOME

manik went to meet everyone at mukthi's home.. dhruv mukthi and alya were already present there..

Manik- what's up guys..!

Dhruv- Hello buddy..!

Alya- Nandu nahi aayi kya...?

Manik- wo ghar chali gayi..

Mukthi- but why you guys were fighting..?

Manik- kuch nahi.. bas aise hi..

Mukthi- jaroor yehi kuch kiya hoga..

Manik- tumhe aise kyu lagtha hai..!

cabir enters..

Cabir- kyunki tum monster ho...!

Manik-(shouts) Cabirrr..!

Cabir- chilla kyu rahe ho..! (in manik's ear) kyu tujhe monster sirf nandu hi bhula sakthi hai kya..!

Manik hits him by elbow..

Manik- tum itna jaldi aagaya apni madhubala ko chod kar..

Cabir- haha.. bad joke tha..!

Mukthi- have some drink guys..!

Cabir- kyu nahi.!! chalo shuru karthe hai...

after lots of fun and chit chat..

Dhruv- it's too late.. i'll leave now..

Alya- yeah.. i think i should leave too..

Manik- toh kal college me milthe hai...

Cabir- ha chalo..

Mukthi- bye guys..

Everyone- bye..

MANIK'S HOME

Manik- Hai mom..

Nyo- hello beta.. How was your shopping..?

Manik- Very hectic mom.. these girls gave us headache..

Nyo- shut up manik..! we ladies love shopping.

Manik- wo toh hai..

Raj malhotra enters..

Raj- kis shopping ki bathe ho raha hai..!

Manik- Hai dad..!

Nyo- wo nandu aur uske friends shopping gaya tha aaj.. usiki bath ho raha hai..

Manik- Dad..! actually i wanna say you something..

Raj- ha.. bolo..

Manik- wo mein aur nandu ne socha ki navya abhi aur aryaman ko bhi weekend pe farm house le jathe hai..

Raj- isme puchne wali bath kya hai.. nandu ki friends hai na.. toh use bhi acha lagega..

Nyo- aur uski khusi me hamari khusi hai..

Manik- seriously..! you both pamper her soo much..

Raj(smiles)- someone looks jealous..

Manik- nooo

Nyo- okay... dinner time..!!

Manik- i already ate mom.. you both carry on..

Nyo- okay..

Manik- okay.. i'll go to my room.. goodnight..

Nyo- goodnight beta..

Raj- goodnight..

MANIK'S ROOM

manik freshened and was browsing his social websites..

meanwhile nandu messaged him..

Nandu- Tumne pucha uncle se abhi navya aur aryaman ke bare me..

manik thought of making fun for sometime.. so he replied..

Manik- ha.. pucha tha.. par dad ne mana kar diya..

Nandu- lekin kyu..

Manik- i dont know..!

Nandu- jhoot mat bolo monster..

Manik- stop calling monster.. mein monster nahi hu...

Nandu- toh such bolona..

MAnik- ha baba.. dad agreed..

Nandu- yippie...!!! we all can have fun..

Manik- hmm..

Nandu- okay.. goodnight. bye.

Manik- bye.

NEXT DAY

fab 5 were in their jamming room and NH 4 were also busy..

Manik- guys..! kal 8 bhaje ready ho jaana.. mein sab ko pick karloonga..

Mukthi- hmm..

Cabir- tum itna sad kyu ho...!

Alya- wo.. 2 dhin se abhimanyu se bath nahi huyi iski..

Manik was laughing himself as he told abhi and navya to ignore their respective partners so that he can surprise them in the trip...

Dhruv- busy hoga..

Cabir- ha.. mujhe bhi aisa hi lagtha hai.. navya bhi nahi dhik rahi hai..

Manik- chill guys.. kal time pe ready hojanaa...

Alya- okay.. bye.

NH4 JAMMING ROOM

Aryaman- toh nandu.. kal kitne bhaje nikhalna hai..

Nandu- kal 8 bhaje mein aur manik will pick you all..

Abhi- i hope mukthi wont be angry..

Aryaman- kyu.. kya huwa..

Abhi- manik ne kaha use ignore karne ko.. mukthi ka temper toh tum log janthe hona..

Navya- kuch nahi hoga.. kal tumhari surprise dekthe hi bahuth khus ho jaayegi..

Nandu- ha bhai..! aap stress math lo.. everything will be okay..

Abhi- i just hope so..

Arya- tikhe.. toh kal milthe hai..

everyone leaves..


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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER-9

NEXT MORNING..

Malhotras and Murthys got ready for their weekend plan... Fab 5 were waiting for Manik and Nandini..

Raj, Yash, Nyonika and Sanjana left in one car.. while Manik and Nandini went to pick their friends...

manik reaches cabir's flat and calls him to come down.. soon he wishes both manik and nandu and then the trio left to pick others... all the way they picked Dhruv, mukthi and alya..

everyone settled in the car.. manik in the driving seat, nandini beside him in the passenger seat, mukthi cabir in the middle one and alya dhruv in the last seat..

All the while.. cabir and mukthi were so much engrossed in their phone as they were waiting for an important call.. manik and nandini observed this.. both got a smile on their faces to watch them so silent..

suddenly manik halted the car with a break.. everyone got startled..

Dhruv- what happen buddy..? tumne ghadi kyu rokh dhi..

Manik- waise dhruv tumhe nahi lagtha ye journey thoda jyadha hi boring hai..

Alya- yeah cabir..! where did your humour go..?

Cabir- dont irritate me yaar.. mera mood nahi hai..

Nandu- tujhe kya huwa mukthi..?

Mukthi- kuch nai.. just a headache..

Manik- toh tere headache ka medicine toh tumhe jaroor dhena padega.. kyu nandu..!!

Mukthi- (irritated) maine kaha na mujhe kuch nahi chahiye..

Manik- jara aage dhek ke toh bol ki tujhe chahiye ya nahi..

Cabir- kya yaar manik.. just chuck it and drive..

nandu- par cabir mujhe laga tum ye dhek ke kush ho jaoage..

Mukthi- ye tum dhono ko ho kya gaya hai...! Ye typical bathe kyu kar raha hai..

Manik- ek baar aage dhyan se dhek lo baba..

Mukthi looked through the window side and found abhi standing there..

a million dollar smile appeared on mukthi's face.. without any second thought just went off the car and hopped onto abhi take him in a beary hug... abhi too responded to her sudden action with equal passion..

Now rest of them also came towards mukthi and abhi...

Cabir- TOh ye hai uska medicine..

Nandu- medicine kaise laga..

Alya- finally i got to see your smile mukthi..

Cabir- par mera kya..!

Nandu- oh my sweet brother.. how can i disappoint you.. just look behind you..

cabir turned and now navya hugged him tight..

Manik- abhi toh hasle saale..

Dhruv- ye tum dhono ka plan tha kya..!

MANAN- yesss...!!!!

Aryaman- even i'm here to entertain you guys..

Alya- oh.. this is so sweet manik and nandini.. this trip gonna be memorable one..

Nandu- toh mukthi and nandini kaise laga surprise...!!!

Manik- rehne dho nandu.. mukthi ne kaha na use kuch nahi chahiye.. toh abhimanyu ko yahi chod dhethe hai..

Mukthi- (shouts) nooo...

everyone laughs while abhi tightens his grip on her..

cabir(to navya)- tum apna phone kyu nahi uta rahi thi..

Mukthi(turns to abhi)- tum bhi...

Abhi- wo baby.. ye sab manik ka plan tha.. to give you surprise..

Navya- humne mana bhi kiya cabir.. par manik na..

manik- ab surprise mil gayi toh dosthi chali gayi aur dhusmani shuru haaa.. kaise dosth ho yaar..

Nandu- this is not fair navya..

Cabir- everything is fair in love and war..

everyone agrees... navya abhi and aryaman hugs everyone and greets them.. when aryaman was about to go and hug nandu.. manik came towards him and hugged him..

manik- hey aryaman.. main toh tumhe bhooli gaya..

Aryaman- that's okay manik..

without giving second chance to aryaman..

Manik- chalo guys journey shuru karthe hai..

Dhruv- haa.. chalo chalo..

Mukthi- ek minute.. hum toh 9 log hai.. ye car sirf 8 logo ko fit hoti hai,... ab kya kare..?

Manik- manik hothe huye chintha kis bath ki haa..

Nandu- guys, we already arranged a mini bus for all of us.. it'll be reaching here at any moment..

Alya- nandu, you're the best..

Manik- oye hellooo.. idea mera tha..

Nandu- abhi navya aryaman ko lane ka idea mera hi tha na...

Manik- par mukthi cabir ko surprise dhene ka plan mera tha.. so credit goes to me..

Nandu- how mean manik..!!(makes an angry pout)

Abhi- arey ye dhono kahi bhi shuru ho jata hai.. koi toh rokhlo unhe..

Cabir- arey nahi bhai.. bahuth majaa aaraha hai.. ladne dho dhono ko..

Alya- cabir, this is not done..

Mukthi- no alya.. cabir is right.. It's so amusing...

Dhruv- no guys.. it's already late.. i think we should stop them..

Soon the bus comes..

cabir(shouts)- lo guys.. bus bhi aagayi..

Aryaman- let's go..

everyone hopped on the bus and seated..

navya and nandu on one seat.. cabir and manik.. aryaman and abhi.. mukthi alya and dhruv..

Cabir- so guys.. lets play something..

Mukthi- truth and dare..

Abhi- baby, yaha kaise kheloge.. kuch aur khelthe hai..

Navya- anthyakshari khele..

Manik- cabir, mein is liye ise black and white madhubala bhulatha hu..

Cabir- tu chup kar.. thats not a bad idea dude and smiles looking at navya and navya blushes...

Alya- oh cabir... how sweet..!

Aryaman- arey koi aur game toh boldho..

DHruv- hmm.. how about never have i ever..?

Nandu- noo.. i wont play..

manik- kyu nahi.. already dar gayi kya..??

Abhi- come on nandu.. khelthe hai na.. bahuth majaa aayega..

nandu- no bhai... you dont know.. ye log bahuth creepy questions puchthe hai..

CAbir(dramatically)- humare shakal dhek ke bolo yaar.. hum toh chote bachae hai...

Fab5- yaaa...

Aryaman- tu kam thodi na hai in sab maamlo me.. come on nandu..

Nandu- aryaman.. just shut up or else i'm gonna kill you..

Navya- arey nandu.. ise kyu dhant rahi ho.. chalo khelthe hai na..

Manik- no more discussions.. hum yehi game khelthe hai... koi darpok hai toh khelne ki jaroorat nahi hai..

Nandu- hey.. mein darpok nahi hu.. samjhe..

Manik- par mein tumhare naam kab liya..

Cabir- kitna jagadthe ho tum dhono.. phir bhi thakthe nahi ho...

Mukthi- chalo guys,, shuru karthe hai..

Alya- first kon puchega..

Abhi- mein puchtha hu..

mukthi- wah mera sher..! kya bath hai.. chalo.. pucho..

Abhi- meine kabhi kisi se flirt nahi kiya hai..

Cabir- toh phir mukthi ko kaise patali yaar..

Mukthi- mein toh uske pyaar se phidha ho gayi..

Manik- wah mukthi.. kya filmy lines maarthi ho tum.. not bad ha..

Dhruv- abhi ke sath reh kar ye haal ho gaya iska..

Abhi- ise pareshaan karna chod dho aur apna apna jawaab bathaadho..

everyone nodded yes except manik and nandini..

Aryaman to manik- dude.. seriously.. didnt you ever flirt..?

Cabir- ye dhiktha sher jaisa hai.. par ladkiyo ki bath ayi toh bhikul bhi nahi..

Manik- not so funny cabir...

Mukthi- nandu, tumne kabhi kisi se flirt nahi kiya..

nandu- (casually) bhilkul bhi nahi.. mujhe itna handsome ladka kabhi nahi dhika aaj tak..

cabir took this opportunity and asked her..

CAbir- kya tumhe manik bhi handsome nahi dhik raha hai..


manik was sipping his drink.. listening to cabir, he spitted out and coughed..

Dhruv- kya huwa buddy.. you okay..!!

mukthi- waise manik sirf handsome ki bath huyi hai koi swayamvar ki nahi..(winks)

Nandu- chup karo tum log.. (sarcastically) manik aur handsome..!! no way...

Cabir- tum aise kyu bol rahe ho..!

Alya- in our college, all the girls go crazy over him na nandu..

Abhi- ha nandu.. i too agree with alya..

nandu- bhai.. just leave it and continue the game..

manik smirked looking at her which was noticed by our evil twins mukthi and cabir...

now mukthi's turn..

Mukthi- meine kabhi mandir nahi gayi..

everyone nodded their answer as yes except alya as she is a christian..

Aryaman- i never dated a girl more than two days..!!

Abhi- tera shakal hi aisa hai..

navya- no yaar.. mera bhai bahuth sweet hai.. (navya calls aryaman as her brother)

Alya- dont worry aryaman.. soon you will find a perfect girl for you..

Cabir- ab sab log jawab toh bathadho...

😊

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