Manan- a cute love story INDEX ON PG-1 &CH-8 to 13ON PG 11&12( - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
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SORRY SORRY SORRY...!!!!

GOT STRUCK WITH MY EXAMS AND ALL..

HERE COMES THE NEXT CHAPTER FOR YOU GUYS..

HAPPY READING..

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CHAPTER- 6

MALHOTRA MANSION

Manik is having breakfast just then cabir called him..

Manik- ha cabir.. bol..

Cabir- arey yaar ye girls subah se mera dhimak kha raha he shopping le jane ke liye.. tu kaha reh gaya..?

Manik- yeah.. i'll be there in 30 min with nandu..

Cabir- please jaldi aaja bhai..

Manik- sure.. bye.

nyo- kya huwa manik?

manik- kuch nai mom.. aaj girls ko shopping karni hai.. so mujhe jaana hoga.. sab log mera wait kar raha hai..

nyo- hmm.. have fun.. take care.

saying bye to nyonika, manik leaves to murty mansion..

MURTY MANSION

Sanju- manik beta.. tum agayae..

Manik- hai aunty.. nandu kaha pe hai..

Sanju- apni kamare me hai beta..

Manik(SHOUTS)- kya..!! ab tak ready nahi huyi ..?!

sanju- pichle ek gante se dress selection me padi huyi hai...

Manik- oh god! not again..

Sanju- tu jaa aur uski help kar.. main toh thang aa chuki hun..

Manik- (sighs) hmm.. i'll be right back..

he enters nandu room..

Manik- aur kitna time lagaoge...?

Nandu- manik tum.. acha huwa tum aagayae.. bolo na konsi waali pehnu ye red wala ya green..??!!!

Manik- kuch bhi pehenlo na nandu.. kya pharak padtha hai.. sab kuch tumhari pasand ki toh hai..

nandu- please bolo na..(makes cute face)

manik- okay.. red pehenlo..

nandu- thanks.. you wait in the living room... i'll come in 10 min..

manik- make it fast.. everyone is waiting for us..

nandu- tikhe baba..

manik is drinking the juice given by sanjana.. meanwhile nandu comes downstairs..

sanju- finally you are done with your selection ha..

nandu- manik aa gaya na.. so its easy for me..

manik- ab chale..

nandu- ha ha chalo..

sanju- take care both of you..

manan together: bye..

both left in manik's car.. soon reached the mall where everyone is waiting..

nandu- hai guys..

alya- hey nandu.. you are late dear..

nandu- yeah.. i'm sorry.. chalo lets start..

mukti- yep.. chalo..

cabir- par hum kya kare.. !!

Dhruv- chalo..hum bhi kuch shopping kar lethe hai..

manik- yeah.. buddy is right.

nandu- nope.. you are coming with me..

manik- no. i dont.

cabir- koi bath nai nandu.. mukti aur alya teri help karenge..

nandu(half heartedly)- okay..

dhruv- okay.. after shopping lets all meet at the food court..

alya- okay.. done.. bye guys..

GIRLS SECTION

mukthi- i think nandini, you should try this crank top and jeans..

alya- nope.. this knee length frock will look good on you..

nandu- let me try both of them and she leaves to changing room..

alya and mukthi also goes to try some dresses..

BOYS SECTION

dhruv- how about this t-shirt guys said showing a v-neck full hands one..

manik- cool buddy...

cabir- i think this will look cool on me said showing a crew neck t-shirt..

dhruv- yeah.. fine.. tu kya loge buddy..

manik- i'll go with this red blazer..

cabir- saale.. red ke alawa kuch aur colour dhiktha nai hai kya,,

manik- ab tujhe kya problem hai..

dhruv- yeah buddy.. cabir is right.. try some other colour na..

cabir- nandu ko call karke poochu kya,,?(winks)

manik- no need.. and finally choses a white t-shirt...

GIRLS SECTION

mukthi- alya aur kitna dher lagega tujhe..?

alya- coming mukthi..!!

nandu- this crank top looks good on you mukthi..

mukthi- hai na.. waise tu ye jump suit kyu select kiya..

nandu- ha.. i tried both of them but they didnt comfort me so i chose this..

mukthi- this one looks better than those two..

nandu- hmm..

alya- how is it guys..?

mukthi- nice.. ab chale..

alya- yeah.. they must be waiting for us..

soon they reached food court where boys were waiting...


PRECAP- manan fight and manik amke it up with an ice cream treat


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nandininiti thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
beautiful but very short update
plz update next part asap and make it big
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
lovely cute update
loved it😃
shaan... thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Amazing update...
Fab5 & nandini went 4 shppng...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
sruthilaya13 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#55


thanks..!!😊😊
sruthilaya13 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#56

thanks dear
Edited by sruthilaya13 - 9 years ago
sruthilaya13 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: nandininiti

beautiful but very short update
plz update next part asap and make it big


will give double updates at a time..!!😉😉
sruthilaya13 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: rockstarlover

lovely cute update
loved it😃



thanks dear..!😊😊
sruthilaya13 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#59


thanks..!!😊😊
sruthilaya13 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: shaan...

Amazing update...

Fab5 & nandini went 4 shppng...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...



haha.. will update soon..!😃😃😃

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