#3MANANSSOUR WILD LOVE(Chapter7D/E-128&link to next thread on pg-1

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Sree

@Sreeja_babu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#731

Res

Unressing...

Wow!!! Awesum update... A mixture of both emotional n drama.

Lvd it 2 core dear.. U really nailed it yaar...👏👏

Update was really fantastic...u penned vry well d pain of manan..

Thnks so much dear 4 d pm dear...

Manan r hurt n in si much pain widout each othr..

Lvd d way nandu's father supported her n gv d freedom 2 tk her luf's decision...he s really nice... Lvd it...

Nandu s rite in her pov...Even though manik hide d marriage fact nt 2 lose nandu, he s wrong.. Nandu s feelin betrayal...

Manik shud hv gain her trust n love again...

Manik s totally broken also... Phir bhi he have 2 win nandu...

He shudnt give up...he has 2 fought 4 her 4gvness...

Manik came 2 meet nandu.. Nandu dnt wanna see him...

Dat scenes n all u portrayed vry much perfectly...

Pakka iss aarya aur shreya ko mein hi maarunga...

Donon kitna chipku he.. Aarya s hell bend tryin his luck in nandu's lyf in d absence of manik... He s vry selfsh...

Kya voh dekh nhi sktha he kya hw much pain she s suffering..

😡😡 dusri taraf shreya...manik ko chodne ka irada hi nhi he...

Poor manik... Jo bhi kro voh chipku chipakthe hi rhegi...

Manik has 2 di sumthng nw...

Waitin 4 nxt update.. Do continue dear...

Edited by Sreeja_babu - 9 years ago

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akiraroy

@akiraroy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#732

It was so emotional...

It's really painful to see manan like this...

Just hate that shreya...

Continue soon

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Hetal.D

@Hetal.D

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#733

U hve penned it beautifully Alisha. D pain,longing, betrayal ,love,loneliness everything in one.too good

Nandu is right, but manik does regret,it was his fault but was scared of loosing her was greater.

M happy her dad is giving her d right to choose. Hope he too realises manans love for each other n sends her bck to him.thy hve to fight it together.

Thanx for d pm.tc

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Radha Sahdev

@MaNaN_trS

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#734

This waa tremendous!!!

Like I said earlier, your stories really are worth the time.

I want to see the progress...how will the 2 get back together when there are certainly no hopes left at all..!! I am so desperate to know that. Too much desperation in me at the moment!! Mere exams chal rahe hain aur bar bar story ka khayal dimag mein aata rahega...just a request!! Plzz update soon. Thankss.

Love you amazing writer!!

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absnads

@absnads

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#735

so emotional...but loved it..

want manan to be together soon..

pls make them together soon...

thanks for the pm...

pls cntinue..

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subbatanisha

@subbatanisha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#736

awesome amazing emotional update... their separation is damn interesting yaar...jus loving it...

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Shreya

@Sjmanan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#737

Awesome and emotional update!!

I don't know what to say...

I just hope MaNan will be together soon!

Thanks for the PM!

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LUCKYRICKLY

@LUCKYRICKLY

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Posted: 9 years ago

#738

ayyo,, bechara manik

haa,,, manik galat kiya ! but esa nai dek paa rahi hu manik ko

beeh mai eh aaryaman 😡,, aur o chudail

such mai nandu manik ko forget karegi??? nai,,,, esa nai ho sakta haina??

past mai kitne ache the eh dono,, ab kitne dard mai hai 😭

in dono ka dard maine feel kar rahi hu,, wow alisha,, 👏

is liye mujhe aap ki writing style achha lakta hai👏

ho saketo next post juldy deejiye

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Geet *wink*

@dreamy_doll15

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#739

Wow.

So beautifully penned emotions.

totally loved it. ..
Manan Heart Wrenching Pain 😭

U write very thing soo amazingly.
I could feel their pain.

Manan r in soo pain.
miss their togetherness. .

Hopee manik never give up.

n just win nandu.

because nandini us right at her place.
now its time for manik to fo something.

waiting for next update eagerly. .
thanks for pm