VIII - MaNan FF : Life With Nandini [CH67-PG94/LinkToCH68-PG01] 20 Jun - Page 13

Congratulation for new thread...🥳
You deserve much more...👏👏
Keep writing..
take care dear😊

Beautiful!

loved it

Awesome update...
Arrav is sooo cute...😛
The birthday party was very good...
manan convo was Nice...
The song you select was very good match with situation...
Hope koi bahot bura na ho...
Waiting for next part..
Update soon
Take care dear😊

Fab juhi
Loved aarav teasings n his cute english
His equation with manan is just out of the world
The birthday party wgs such a blast
Loved aarav excitement knowing that hawaii is aloha itself
That last part was bit scary
I can sense smething wrng. Plz juhi dn't let a mishap happen; neither to manan nor to fab5 n all
The song was apt, too gud
Fanx 4 pm n cntinue soon dear

Congo 4 d new thread.. n awsum update.. aarav can't be angry 4m his massi maa.. hehehehe.. mann gye cabir ko.. luved it.. hope manan ka separation na ho.. n jo bhi ho.. at last sab aacha ho jaye.. update ASAP

Wow I liked this update a lot, I really enjoy reading the way u write and I always admire you command over the language...

awesoem update dear jst loved it

Like a child waits and jumps to get a candy!
I wait for ur update!
And the wait has always been worth it !
Loved it !!
Thankyou for such a wonderful update!
Loved everybit of it!
Be it Aarav's cuteness or MaNan's romance or Cabir's one liners!
Everything on point and entertaining!
Good work :)

hy juhi congrats for the new thread and about the update as usual u always make simple things awesome i don't like mushy much but life with nandini is something i like the most not because of romance i adore the bond of trust,respect and love you created between manan i adore this ff for that bond only other world really doesn't matters for them. but since so long i wanna tell you something you said the right thing yes criticism helps so i wanna suggest you something
1 your writing is little difficult like the English you its difficult or describe other things a lot like description is too long sometimes i feel bore with it update aisa hona chiye jisme readers ek bhi word skip na kare

2 describe feelings more pov writing why don't you try that in books, novels on wattpad everyone writes in pov you know why because readers ussey connection feel karte h character se or they usually use simple words and your words. they are little difficult its not like i don't understand but i don't feel much intensity through this

3 try to describe feelings much rather than describing places or things i know its important to described them also but you got carried away with them so try to describe feelings pov writing can help hope u found them good and helpful i just felt like telling you sorry if its a writer's point of view