Manan FF-One Night With My MOnStEr!!(COMPLETED) epilogue-2 pg~122 - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Yup the update was A1. Laughed even after reading it again Waiting for the next update 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: ps_angel



thnakuuu sooo mch
aftr exam
im also giving u a nickname :P
n tku fr the water thing
il try it
hope its helps ;)
bbye
tc :) :)



Hehehe..
I am waiting.. 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Happyme2016

Brilliant story...read it all in one go. U r a fabulous writer. Love this Nandani she has spunk.

Update u.




Thank You..😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: manya_189

Best story!
So love it!
^_^





😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: kyaramalhotra

this one is hillarious hahahaha... love this nandu oops sry nancy cool name !!!!!! this jitendra is really awsm and queen i mean nyonika perfect character haha,,,,,ohh god the royal ones's r surely going to have mini heart attack or may be big hahaha awsm yaar so eager to read nxt chapy update soon




THANK Y😊UUU
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Fullofthoughtss

Yup the update was A1. Laughed even after reading it again Waiting for the next update 😊




😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: iloveSTARS143

Its just amazing!!!!😃


TY!!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
SHOT-5 (Funny Dinner 😆)


Nandini Pov

"Good evening my lady. How are you?" He asked stepping closer to me. I
sighed internally...I'm going to have to whip his ass aren't I? I narrowed my
eyes at him, and I saw a flash of amusement in his before it disappeared.
He didn't give me time to respond, as he put a hand on either side of the
railing, trapping me to him. Yep! Definitely an ass kicking! Suddenly his
hand snaked it's way to my ass, and I snapped,

"I like you." He whispered in my ear. I smirked, and twisted his arm back
before flipping him to the floor. His eyes showed surprise, and I faked
surprise...,

"What a coincidence! The floor likes you!!" I said in a humiliating tone. I bent down to his level,

"You try something like that again...I won't be so forgiving, and you won't be able to have children." He nodded, and I helped him up. Damn, I've been doing that a lot lately...

"I think you should know I don't normally act like that." He smiled.
Something told me he was telling the truth, but I motioned for him to
elaborate,



"It was a test to see if you were genuine or not. Please forgive me. I won't try something like that again." He asked. What the hell does that test mean? Oh well. I nodded,

"Sure whatever." I shrugged. He chuckled,

"What's your name beautiful girl?" He asked.

"Nandini, but a lot of people call me nancy." I smiled, and crossed my arms. He looked over my appearance and his eyebrows furrowed,

"Were you not given a stylist to get ready for the dinner in 10 minutes?" He asked. I nodded,

"Yes, but I beat his ass as well. I wasn't going to wear that hideous dead flamingo!!! And I don't want to impress anyone if I'm getting out of here. Especially since I shouldn't be here." I answered,

"What do you mean?" He asked. I put a hand on his shoulder which was
hard to do since he was so tall and I was so short and started to walk,

"C'mon pretty boy, I'll explain on the way, you just show me to this dinner
and things will clear up." I smirk!!!!


He started laughing at me as he lead me through the hallway. I punched his arm,

"Ow!! Sorry!! But you have to admit it's funny!" He tried to reason. I had just
explained my situation to him, and the idiot thought it was funny

"No it's not! You try waking up in some room you don't know only to find someone
wants to make you look like Kirby the pokemon ate you! Eventful yes...funny...ask
me again when I get out of here." I scowled at the black marble floor. He chuckled,



"I really like you...as a friend!!! Don't flip me again!" He said quickly when he saw
my challenging gaze. I smirked at him and jumped up to pat his head. I really hate
being this short sometimes. He laughed when I missed, and I gave up with a huff.

"Awww, you're too cute! I just want to stick you in my pocket!" He cooed
patronizingly. I stuck my tongue out at him. We made it to these double doors that
went all the way up to at least 15 feet. Wow! I was about to open the door, when he
stopped me,


"Wait, wait, wait, wait!!! I have to see their reaction! So stay here real quick and
then come in after you hear the okay." He said hurriedly. I shrugged, and said okay...



Manik POV



I sat boredly at the long table as these girls tried to shamelessly flirt with me. We
were waiting on one to arrive before we could start and eat. I saw some girls sitting
across from me and I politely smiled at them at them and they giggled back. Wow. I
then see Jitendher rush in and I give him a confused look as he sat next to me, since I
saved him one next to me...

"Where's your girl my boy?" My father asked at the end of table. He had to talk
loudly since the table was annoyingly long. I could tell Jitendher was trying not to
laugh as he struggled to talk,



"Your Highness...*chuckle* she is just...*chuckle* outside those doors." He
answered. I bent closer to him,

"Why didn't she walk in with you like the other guards did?" I asked lowly. He tried
not to laugh again,




"I wanted to see your reaction." He managed to get out. I quirked an eyebrow as he
motioned for the butler to open the door. Everyone gasped especially the girls.
Jitendher was trying hard not to crack up.

(A/N he is jithender)
The girl before us was...beautiful. I was wondering why everyone seemed shocked,
as all I could see is her face, and it was angelic and graceful looking. Then I looked
at her attire and knew why everyone gasped.

She was not in a formal gown like every woman in here. She was in jeans and a t-shirt,
with simple shoes. But I thought she pulled it off quite well. I couldn't even
focus on her clothes that well, as her eyes held me captive. I wanted to know where
she would be sitting and saw the only available seat was just to the right of me. I
wanted to grin at that.

She did a playful smirk and literally skipped over! She definitely had a playful side
and her eyes shown a mischievous glint to them, letting me know she was not to be
messed with. She smacked the butlers hand away that was trying to pull out her
chair,

"I have to hands, so I can do this thank you though." She smiled kindly at him. He
showed shock but reigned it in. No one had uttered a single word, as it was so silent
I swear I could hear heartbeats. This mischievous angel then spoke looking at the
other girls...,



"So...how long did it take you all to get ready because it took me 5 minutes!!!" She
smiled at them. Some laughed under their breaths while others scowled. One girl
who had black hair and looked particularly nasty spoke to her,

"well...it shows. But if it only took you that long, then why were you so late?" She
said in a squeaky voice. Ow, her voice hurts my ears!




"What's her name?" I asked Jitendher under my breath



"Nandini." He breathed back, still chuckling... Nandini spoke again..,

"Well after showing Carlous how gravity works, I then had to show JItendher over
here how ass kicking is done." She shrugged. My father actually started laughing,

"Why?" He chuckled, clearly amused by her charisma. Hell, I was mesmerized by it.
She was so interesting.

"I wasn't going in here with a dress pinker than Paris Hilton's wardrobe, and
Jitendher made a pass at me so I showed him how to kiss the floor instead of me."
She shrugged. I started laughing then, imaging him on the floor at the mercy of her.

Jitendher scowled at me,

"Not funny Mannu! She's good!" He defended his wounded pride. I patted him on the
back and I saw Nandini looking at me. Her mouth was slightly ajar, and I couldn't help
but look back. Even though she was only wearing common clothes, she still looked
more beautiful then any other girl in this room. Because hers was natural. I heard a
throat clear and she looked down embarrassed. I looked up to see my mother and
father grinning knowingly at me.




"Well, let's get started shall we?" My father announced. Nandini then held up her hand

(A/N he is king)
"Excuse me? King person? I need to go home." She said. No! She couldn't go now!
She seemed so much more interesting than the others! My father furrowed his
eyebrows,

"Why dear?" He asked. She sighed,

"I wasn't supposed to be here. I came here on some stupid radio contest. I went into
that building these other girls were in because I though they sold girls clothes in it.
So I was mistaken for another girl." She explained. My face fell. I looked at my father
and silently begged him to figure out a way for her to stay. I knew it was selfish, but
she was the only silver lining I had seen so far to this ridiculous completion.
He looked at me and sighed,

"Um...?" He trailed off,

"Nandini, but people usually call me Nancy!!" She answered. Some people chuckled.

"Well, nandini. I'm sorry you were put in this predicament, but we have to keep this
quiet. This whole competition thing. We don't want the media finding out. So I'm
sorry but for the time being, you must stay here, until we sort this out." He said. I
felt a small smile creep up to my face. Nandini's jaw dropped...,

"What?! I don't belong here! Find that other chick who skipped out! I'll keep my
mouth shut I promise! I need to get back to school, and then there's my mom and
my friends!" She rambled on and on, loosing steam as she goes. There was silence
as she thought it over...

"How long?" She asked with a resigned voice. My father sighed, he didn't like it
when people under his roof were upset!!

"The competition is around 3 months long. The tradition is using 15 girls. So I will
ask you to participate in the end it will be my son's decision." He said. She looked
confused...,


"What is this completion anyways?" She asked. Oh wow, she didn't even know
about that yet!

"Every generation as far back as this county began the eldest son in the royal family
has to choose his bride out of 15 girls chosen for him by his parents. Each girl no
matter what gets one night with him. If he likes or takes interest in one or more of
them he can choose another night to get to know them better. In the end he will
chose a bride and future Queen of this country and be married by the end of this
competition." He explained. She was silent for a few moments,

"Well, at least I don't need to worry about him choosing me." She chuckled. I didn't
though, she had every right to worry. I think I can win her over with my looks and
charm...hopefully...


"She's great huh?" Jitendher whispered in my ear. I nodded in agreement. And my
father started to ask questions to the other girls but I tuned him out. The food was
served, and of course it was delicious. When the maid served Nandini she turned and
smiled at her,

"Thank you so much! Oh! And tell whoever made this that they are awesome!" She
grinned. The maid stood there shocked, but quickly smiled. I think the maid was
happy for acknowledgement. Everyone at the table sat there shocked at her actions
but otherwise continued talking. My father moved his questioning to Nandini, which I
listened eager for...





"So, Nandini. You go to school? How did you get this time off to do the contest
anyways?" He asked interested. She smiled to herself, and I saw that mischievous
glint in her eyes,

"Yes, I go to this smallish school in Montana. And I was on Detention for 2 weeks.
That's how I got the time to do this." She smiled proudly. Jitendher butted in,

"Why did you get detention?" He asked eagerly knowing it would be good. Everyone
else had stop talking to listen as well. What can I say? She was captivating..



"Well, I put a cow on the second floor of the school and put a sign on either side
that said, 'Nancy Rules'. Ya, my principle was not happy! I guess it's better than the
month long sentences I have been getting. Those were good pranks! Oh, and I
managed to wrap up Principle Mathur's car with clear wrap! That was funny!" She
started to laugh. Wow, she was a little she-devil! I like it.




Jitendher was cracking up next to me and I couldn't help but laugh as well. She
was funny, but I'm sure it isn't so funny when it's happening to you. The black
haired girl sneered,

"So your grades must suffer from all your absences." She smirked..Nandini smirked
right back,


"Actually they're perfect. Straight A's." She shrugged. The girl looked shocked
before her eyes narrowed,

"That's a lie! That couldn't be possible!" She argued. Nandini shook her head,

"Listen...what your name?" She asked.

"ELISE." The black haired girl answered.

(A/N she is elise)

"Well, elise. It's simple for me because I have a photographic memory. There,
mystery solved." She took a bite of her food, and continued eating. I shook my head
smiling at her. She was beautiful, funny, smart, witty, and seemed down to earth.

"Father? Who gets tonight?" I asked, eager to know if it is Nandini or not. HE smiled
knowingly at me,

"It's miss Elise." He answered. Elise showed me a mega watt smile, then Nandini
interrupted,

"Um...Elise? You have spinach in your teeth." Elise looked horrified, and tried to
look for a shiny surface to inspect. I chuckled at her,

"You know there's nothing in her teeth." I said lowly to her. I could've sworn I saw
her shiver since I was close to her, but that was probably my imagination.


"And? She's a bitch." She said it like it was nothing. Jitendher heard her and
started choking on his water laughing. I patted his back, trying not to laugh as well,
at her bluntness. I bent over to her ear, and I saw her stiffen,

"You speak your mind, don't you?" I asked. This time I knew she shivered and it sent
a smile to my face. She turned and narrowed her eyes at me,

"Listen Prince dude! I don't know you and you just popped my personal bubble!
Unless there's a game of Twister, know one pops my bubble. Well, unless I really
know you, collection?" She raised her eyebrow in a sexy way. My father was
laughing from down the table along with mother,

"Oh I like her spunk!" He said chuckling to himself. Nandini grinned at him.

"So...what's to do around here?" She asked my father. He grinned at her and told
her various rooms. Like the club room, the gyms, pools, sports room, music room,
game room, work out room, and then finally the training yard. Her eyes lit up on
that one,

"Ooo! Really? Can I check it out?" She asked excited. We all looked at her
bewildered, because I knew she flipped Jitendher on his back but I didn't think
she'd be interested in the training yard. Frankly most women find it boring.

Although I'm beginning to see Nandini isn't most women. My father nodded slowly..
I will take you there. Everyone in there gasped because my father never gives his time to anyone else except family. This girl is definitely one in million..




Bohout lamba hai na.. hehe patha hai.. ghar peh no-one..thats why lamba one.. cholly i am poor at hindi.. eee.. abh comment bhi lamba lamba do naa..pleachjjj..pleachjjj...


TAKE CARE!
STAY BLESSED!!
KEEP SMILING!!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
lolzzz

manik ki silent pleadingg


phli nazar ka pyaaarrr



nancy ruless


mujhe wo elsie shuru se hi psnd ni thi

huh

training yard me jo hna walaa h

usse pdne k liyeee

excited me edda :P

lolzzz


cntnue soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
hi,
nice, witty n different story :)
plz ct this
best wishes:)

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