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PART 199 :


Lights off...hawww...ye kya hora hain...kyu hora hain...

Dhruv...dhruv...dhruv...relax...kuch nahi hora hain...

Alia...tho phir ye sab...

Yeee sab... kuch dikane ke liye hain...

Aur wo kya hain mukthi...
Wooo...wooo...!!!!

Wo kya abhiii...bathayega bi...
Wo hainnn...!!!!

Kyaaa hain navyaaa...

ALIA : Alright...

MUKTHI : here you go...

NAVYA & ABHI : 1...2...3...!!!

Ladies and gentle men presenting you the star couple of the evening...MONSTER AND HIS SHINING STAR...that is none other than...THE HANDSOME MANIK MALHOTRA and THE BEAUTIFUL NANDINI MOORTHY...!!!!! and kabir utters walking towards FAB 4 as soon as a heavy focused light falls on MANAN who were standing at top of stairs...!!!!!



(Manik attire)



(Nandu attire)

Wooo...woaaa...!!!!!

KABIR : yar kya karre ho...janthe hain sagayi unki hi hain lekin zara dere se chillao na...kaan fatre hain...

Wooo...woaaa...wooo...woaaa...!!!!!

KABIR : arey arey ladkiyon kya karre ho kuch hi der main sagayi hone vali hain manik tho phir kyu bekar main uske liye apni dil ki dadhkane badare ho

DHRUV : zara aas paas ache se dekho...aur bi handsome ladke hain jo abi single hain aur kuch der ke baad bi single hi rahenge...

KABIR : hmmm

NAVYA : offooo tum dono kar kya rahe ho...ek tho yaha pura andhera hain aur upar se tum log...aur ye lights ko kya hua...ooo light vale bayya...manan sabke samne agaye hain tho phir aap light kyu on nahi karre ho...

ABHI : arey arey navya...manik ne pure lights off karne ki order di hain...

ALIA : lights off karne ki order

DHRUV : hmmm

MUKTHI : par kyu

DHRUV : wo iss liye thaki sabki nazre sirf aur sirf uski princess yani nandini moorthy par hi rahe

KABIR : aur wo ek dam princess ki tharah hi feel kare

ALIA & NAVTHI : awww

ABHI : acha acha bas...manik... isse pehle nandini sharam se sagayi chodke baag jaye tu please use leke neche aaja...

Failing incalculable times nandu stands yet again blushing while manik at the same time stands yet again adoring her and her blush...

KABIR : so guys please put your hands together for the most beautiful...

NAVYA : most attractive...

DHRUV : most appealing...

ALIA : most lovable...

ABHI : most charming...

MUKTHI : most alluring...

DHRULIYA : most enchanting...

MUKBHI : most bewitching...

KAVYA : and the most fascinating couple ever...

"Shall we...!!!!" and manik utters in suger filled tone all the time looking her while she nods her head slightly smiling to the fullest staring him secretly with corner of her eye...

"MAY I" and he puts his left hand in front of her while she instantly looks into his eyes understanding his silent question feeling blessed to have him for zillionth time...

Not moving her gaze she nods her head placing her hand in his giving him answer...granting him permission...replying him silently... "YES...OFCOURSE...YOU CAN..."

Pressing her hand a little he smiles knowing how well she understood his question and slowly gestures her to look in front of her instead of him...

Cringing her brows she diverts her gaze away from him lazily and gets happily surprised seeing scent electric candles arranged on ground on either sides of steps and sides of stairs decorated beautifully with huge bunch of pink roses having small light tubes fixed inside it making them glow ever so brightly...



"This is just the beginning princess...your prince has planned alot more for you tonight...!!!!" and manik whispers behind her ear leaning close to her while she closes her eyes in anticipation smiling and blushing...

lets go...!!! and he starts getting down along with her all the time staring her while she looking at the roses smiles more and more getting down each step feeling their essence...

Reaching last step and feeling him not moving she slowly turns towards him while he continuing his staring stands without moving smiling slightly at her...

Confused she stands looking him but hearing people's gasps turns her head only to get startled the very next moment witnessing the sight in front of her...



Rose petals were spreaded on ground in a zic zac way decorated with green thick small bunch of leaves on either sides while lights on the top were turned on only to reveal that particular rose filled path leaving the entire surroundings still in darkness...

Getting down on ground manik presses her hand slightly while she coming into senses stands staring into his eyes not caring that all the people present over there were just looking her...

Making her get down on ground he slowly starts walking ahead while nandu silently walks along with him looking him without blinking her eyes for once...

Not paying heed to anyone's aww's she continues staring him all the while without blinking her eyes while he being very well aware of her gaze continues walking silently smiling to the fullest...

Forgetting the fact that they were no more walking nandu stands continously staring him ever so lovingly but then hearing all the young girls wowww diverts her gaze and becomes awstuck witnessing the set up in front of her...



Turning her head ever so lazily she looks him not being able to utter anything while he finally glancing at her smiles pressing his lips inside and "chelo...we are done with walking...!!!"

seeing her not replying he silently climbs the three stairs and slowly turning towards her offers his hand once again like a true gentleman standing between the stage...

Knowing her very well he blinks his eyes looking her assuring her that it all was true but seeing her still not responding licks his lips and with a horrified expression "nandini...tum ne sagayi ke liye haan kaha tha... abi na kehkar hamari story main twist tho nahi lane vali ho na...!!!!"

biting her lower lip and hiding her smile she places her tiny hand in his lengthy one while he smiling happily pulls her close muttering "thank you ayyappaaa...tussi great ho...!!!!" as soon as she reaches stage making her smile hugely bending her head down...

"am really really sry people...I know dono kaafi pyare lagre hain aur unhe bas aise dekthe baitne main apko koyi problem nahi hain lekin hame un dono ki sagayi ki rasam bi puri karni hain aur wo bi bina der kiye tho isliye please don't mind that am interrupting the beautiful sight in front of you...!!!" and kabir utters bringing everyone out of manan world reaching near manan standing beside nandu...

"hmmm tho manik malhotra ji aap kripaya karke nandini moorthy ji ke sath vaha uss sofe pe bait jayiye thaki hamare bade sagayi ki rasam shuru kar sake" and navya utters reaching on stage standing beside manik...

Nodding his head like a kid manik walks towards sofa along with nandini and settles himself comfortably making sure that his princess was settled much more comfortably than him...

KABIR : ooo teri

NAVYA : kya hua

KABIR : hamne tho khud ko introduce hi nahi kiya

NAVYA : arey haan

KABIR : ham bi na

lekin ek minute and alya utters joining them both...

KABIR : haan...bolo...

"stage pura lights se decorated hain aur ham stage ke upar hain tho shayad ham sabko dikre hain lekin abi bi hame tho koyi dikayi nahi dera na" and dhruv utters walking close to them reaching on stage...

ALIA : exactly...

"tho phir tum log apna introduction doge kaise...!!!!" and mukthi utters appearing from no where keeping her hand on kabir...

NAVYA : haan tho ham sabko dekenge na

DHRUV : lekin manik ne tho light off karne ko kaha na tho phir ham andhere main kaise

"arey jab princess nandini ari thi sirf thabi light off karne ko kaha tha manik ne...kyu manik" and abhi utters appearing lastly on stage

manik nods as a matter of fact while abhi continues "prince aur princess apni jagah pe pahunch gaye and so now lights can be turned on so that even they can watch their guests"

NAVYA : hmmm...tho cheliye light vale bayya jaldi se lights on kardijiye...

Manik smiles seeing nandu eagerness to witness hall decorations while nandu gets frozed at her place getting numb not being able to blink as soon as her eyes witness amazing view of the hall...






Square shaped top with huge light at its center decorated with white and gold roses having same white and gold rose combination hangings to its three sides was arranged with a white round table under it having flowers and candles placed on table...

MANIK : nandiniii

Not getting any reply he slowly holds her hand and nandiniii

blinking her eyes she turns towards him and slowly smiles huger and huger making him smile back in a similar way...

so many lights...all together... seems like it's shining... it's... it's...just beautiful manikkk...!!!! and nandu finally utters roaming her eyes all around looking so many tables glowing under a single light which made the entire hall look heavenly awesome...

"like I always say...you are the one who shines the brightest nandini...and nothing is more beautiful than you...!!!!" and he utters with utmost sincerity getting completely lost in her while she not having any other option gets drowned in his eyes turning towards him...

KABIR : hello

NAVYA : hi

DHRUV : namasthe

ALIA : vanakkam

ABHI : sasriyakal

MUKTHI : I know ham late hain lekin please thoda adjust kar lijiye

KABIR : main hoon kabir

NAVYA : aur ham hain navya

DHRUV : main apka dhruv

ALIA : aur main alia

ABHI : ham rahe abhi

MUKTHI : aur hum mukthi

KABIR : aur aaj aap sabko hame kisi bi haal main jelna hoga

NAVYA : haan haan muskurayiye

DHRUV : kyuki aapke paas philal ke liye koyi kaam bi nahi hain

ALIA : thodi hi der main sagayi ki rasam shuru hogi

MUKTHI : aur aap thab thak muskurane ke sath sath aram se bait ke drinks bi lijiye

ABHI : yaha pe hame bas thode se arrangements karni hain tho ham bas yu jake yu athe hain

KABIR : jane se pehle main ladka aur ladki ke parivar valon ko stage pe bulana chahtha hoon

NAVYA : Mr Malhotra

DHRUV : Mr & Mrs Moorthy

ALIA : please stage par ayiye...

MUKTHI : and now we are going

ABHI : but will be back soon

NAVYA : yayyy

KABIR : shhh kya karri ho pagal ho

NAVYA : mike off kiya hamne

KABIR : thoo...chillao gi...

ALIA : arey guys what are you doing look them na

KABIR : haa???

ABHI : goshhh

MUKTHI : like seriously

NAVYA : arey shhh kitne pyare lagre kisiki nazar na lage

DHRUV : mujhe nahi lagtha ki inhe kuch sunayi deri hain

ALIA : look at the way they are lost in each other

MUKTHI : sale iski tho

NAVYA : arey kya

MUKTHI : manikkk... manikkk...!!!!

haa...haaa...!!!! and manik utters finally coming into senses breaking eye contact with nandini...!!!!

MUKTHI : kamine...tu gaya kaha tha...patha hain ham kitne tension main the tu...

ALIA : babbyyy

NANDINI : haa...haan...kya hua...

MUKTHI : whats wrong with you alia... tu kyu aise chillari...

ALIA : ek minute mukthi...babyyy what is wrong with you...what are you exactly wearing...

DHRUV : unbelievable

ALIA : tujhe ye lehenga mila kaha se aur tune usse blanket ki tharah kyu pehna...maine ek se badke ek designer lehnge choose kiye the aur tu ne...

ABHI : vaise sale tujhe kya ho gaya...tu kyu suit pehna...tere pasandh ke sherwani ke liye jaan nikal di thi tu ne meri tho phir ye kaha se pehen ke aa gaya...

MANIK : ahhh wooo

ALIA : forget it baby tu chel mere sath

MANIK : kahaaa

ALIA : she need some changes we will be right back

MANIK : nahiii...she doesn't need any changes...

MUKTHI : just shut up idiot...tujhe ladkiyon ki mamlon main beech main bolne ki zarurath nahi hain...

NANDINI : mukthi...alia...main teek hoon...mujhe kuch bi change nahi karna hain...

ALIA : goshhh baby why can't you

KABIR : alia

DHRUV : its fine

KABIR : shona kehri hain na ki usse kuch bi change nahi karna hain

ALIA : par

DHRUV : par var kuch nahi meri pari yaha sabse sundar hain tho usse zyada pareshan math karo

NAVYA : aur vakth barbad kiye bina shagun ki sare cheeze yaha arrange karo

MUKTHI : ohh yaaa

ABHI : patha nahi uncle aunty bi kaha reh gaye main jake unhe dektha hoon

MANIK : vaise rishab kaha gaya kayi dikayi nahi dera

DHRUV : shayad guests ko attend karne main busy hain

MANIK : ohhh

NANDINI : papa???

ALIA : I guess I need to look for him

NAVYA : chelo phir sab apne apne kaam pe lag jao

MUKTHI : main in logon ke sath rehthi hoon

ABHI : arey yaha kya karogi chelo mere sath

KABIR : haan dhruv tu bi alia ke sath jake uncle ko dekh vaise bi ab ye dono romance karne main busy ho jayenge

NANDINI : kabirrr

KABIR : jara hoon

MANIK : ufff

NANDINI : kya hua

MANIK : kuch nahi...vaise ye suit kaha se liya tumne...kaafi dino se main aise suit ke liye try karra tha...

NANDINI : aur tumhe kyu lagtha hain ki ye suit maine liya hain

MANIK : maine nahi liya hain tho ofcourse tumne hi liya hoga na

NANDINI : nahi...maine nahi liya...

tho phir ye hamare room main and stops sighing nodding his head

NANDINI : kyaa

MANIK : kuch nahi

NANDINI : bolo na

RESHMA : kya bathe hori bai

NANDINI : kuch nahi pehle aap bathayiye the kaha jab se

RESHMA : bai main tho yahi pe thi par tumhe kaise dikh sakthi hoon tum tho apne hone vale pathi ke sath busy thi na tho

NANDINI : maaa...!!!!!

RAJ : hayeee...meri beti sharmathe hue kitni pyari lagri...

NANDINI : papaaa...!!!!

RAJ : arey nahi tum sharmao na main yahi pe hoon

MANIK : hahaha

NANDINI : papaaa...!!!!! aap dono mujhe kyu thang karre ho isse thang karo na...!!!!

MANIK : sharam se laal tum hori ho tho mujhe kyu thang karenge

RESHMA : hmmm dekh mera beta kitna intelligent hain tujhe tho itni choti si bath bi nahi patha

NANDINI : maaa

MANIK : heehehee

NANDINI : papa nahi hain isiliye aap mujhe aise pareshan karre ho thodi der ruko papa aane ke baad wo hi apko sahi karenge

RESHMA : vaise bayya kaha hain

RAJ : kaafi der hogaya hain unhe dekhe

NANDINI : kyaa...papa kaafi der se nahi mile apse???

MANIK : yahi kahi honge tum zyada pareshan math ho

DHRUV : nahi manik

ALIA : hamne pure hall main dekh liya

DHRUV : uncle kahi nahi hain

MUKTHI : haan

ABHI : hame bi kayi dikayi nahi diye

NAVYA : tho phir ab kaisa

KABIR : sari cheeze thayar hain lekin agar uncle

NANDINI : papa ko main leke athi hoon

RESHMA : lekin beta

NANDINI : main bas yu jake yu athi hoon

MANIK : nan

NANDINI : guys aap please sab ko batho main rakiye main bas panch minute main vapas athi hoon

MANIK : main bi cheltha hoon

NANDINI : nahi...main akeli jaongi...

"tum dono ko akhir jana kaha hain wo bo sagayi ki rasam shuru hone se teek pehle" and mohan utters reaching on stage standing exactly opposite to manan

papa...!!!! and manan sigh uttering in unison

MOHAN : kya hua tum dono

NANDINI : aap the kaha jab se...neche aaye hue hame itna vakth ho gaya aur aap hain ki...

MOHAN : arey arey bas...wo tho mujhe ek wire ki vajah se current shock lag gaya tha aur...

"kyaa...current shock...kaha...aap ko kuch hua tho nahi na...aap teek tho hain na...!!!" and nandu starts blabbering checking him from top to toe not even letting him finish completely...

MOHAN : aishhh...bas kar gudiya...mujhe kuch nahi hua...

NANDINI : haa

MOHAN : ek lambi saas le aur pehle meri puri bath sun

NANDINI : hmm kahiye

MOHAN : mujhe koyi bada vala current shock nahi laga wo tho bohuth sare wires hain na tho achanak ek wire ko hath lagane se thoda shock jaisa laga...kaafi log hain yaha tho short circuit jaisi problem na ho main electrician se kaam karva raha tha...tho uske sath bahar hi tha...bas...aur kuch nahi...

NANDINI : haan tho aap ko akele electrician ke sath rehne ki kya zarurath thi...yaha itne sare log hain...aap kisi ko bula sakthe the na...apko hamare sath hona chahiye aur aap hain ki...

MOHAN : maaf karde galthi hogayi...ab se yahi rahunga aur kahi nahi jaonga...

NANDINI : ummm

MOHAN : kya hua dar gayi

NANDINI : hmmm

NANDINI : arey pagal main apni beti ki sagayi chodke kaha jaonga ummm

"lo...lagtha hain main bekar main yaha kada hoon...mujhe tho koyi apna beta samaj tha hi nahi hain..." and manik utters finally stopping adoring his love and father bond...

MOHAN : chup kar...notanki...

RESHMA : ummm bayya rasam shuru kare der hori

MOHAN : haa haa bilkul...chelo...

KABIR : bayiyo aur bayiyo ke behno

NAVYA : sagayi ka rasam shuru hone vala hain isliye

KABIR : isliye galthi se bi apni ankhen yaha se hatayiye math

NAVYA : kyuki agar hatayenge tho

KABIR : tho apko iske baad kana nahi milega

NAVYA : kyaa

KABIR : haan aur ab ham bi jare hain manan ki sagayi ka rasam enjoy karne tho aap aram se apni jagah pe hi baitiye aur kahi hiliye math aur haan ankhen math japkiye kyuki phir khana nahi milega na...

NAVYA : pagal

KABIR : mike off kardiya maine ha ha haaa

RESHMA : navyaaa

NAVYA : jee ayi

MANIK : papa rishab

RISHAB : sryyy...am here...

RAJ : thooo manik thayar hain na zindagi barbad hone vali hain

RESHMA : rajjj...

RAJ : nahi main tho bas

RESHMA : manik...laga doon teeka...bana loon tumhe jamayi...

MANIK : maa kam se kam aap tho aisi vakth pe mazak math karo na

everyone giggles seeing his expression while reshma too smiling fully applys teeka on his forehead holding thali (tray) in her another hand...

taking a piece of sweet she lovingly makes him take a bite while he after eating it instantly makes her eat the same sweet wiping away fews tears of her with his another hand...

MANIK : mere jamayi ban ne ka itna dhuk

RESHMA : kushi ke ansu hain pagal

MANIK : tho phir abi ke liye bas kyuki aage apko isse kayi zyada kushi milegi

reshma nods while manik in turn gestures her to smile only to see her smile the very next second...

RAJ : chel bai mohan ab teri bari... jaldi se nandini ko shagun dede aur mujhe chain se jeene ki izazath...

NANDINI : papaaa

RAJ : sach kehra hoon aur kya...tu...dekh kya raha hain...de shagun apni beti ko...

Mohan stares nandu while she smiles to the fullest blinking her eyes...

Moving a little close mohan stands staring all the items placed on the table having tears in his eyes while nandu understanding everything stares him for a moment and papa...!!!!

looking her lazily mohan blinks his eyes continously trying to stop his tears while nandu nods her head as a no asking him not to get weak...

controlling him self he slowly arranges red dupatta on her head and places each and every item one after the other in her lap which were part of shagun and which included jewellery,dress and alot more...

RAJ : mubarak mohan ji aaj se nandini apki beti hi nahi apki bahu bi hain...

Mohan smiles lowering his head finally letting tears roll down his eyes while nandu holding his hand kisses it lovingly and "thank you"

looking into her eyes he nods his head as a no and "am sryyy"

nodding her head in turn as a no she smiles at him and "gudiya loves her papa...der sara..."

smiling he nods lazily and "papa loves her gudiya...der sara se zyada...!!!!"

"tho lag gaya teeka ladke ko aur mil gayi shagun ladki ko" and kabir utters turning on mike enlightening the atmosphere...

lekin...lekin...lekin...and navya along with mukbhi joins kabir turning on their mike...

"abi ek asli rasam baki hain...!!!" and dhruv joins them while alia coming from back stands beside him and "aur wo hain rings cermony"

KABIR : yesss

NAVYA : tho kya kehthe hain shuru karde wo bi

MUKTHI : arey nahi

ALIA : abi nahi

NAVYA : kya matlab

MUKTHI : matlab ye ki yaha MANAN ki ENGAGEMENT hori hain

NAVYA : haan...thoo...

ALIA : thooo...arey bai konsi sagayi nach gane ke bina hothi hain hmmm...

NAVYA : ooo tho ye bath hain

MUKTHI : hmmm

DHRUV : tho phir kade kyu ho

ABHI : jao na shuru karo

KABIR : nachon...gao...jo jee main aye wo karo

MUKTHI : haan haan bilkul

ALIA : lekin hamse pehle yaha ke sare chote chote bache nachenge

MUKTHI : gumenge...aur gayenge...

NAVYA : kyu bachon...haan ya na...

haaannn...!!!!!!

DHRUV : so guys please put your hands together

ABHI : for all the lovely kids over here

KABIR : common bacha party...aag lagado...

RESHMA : tum dono baito ham chelthe hain

MANIK : nahi maa kyu

RAJ : beta gar ke sabi yahi par rahenge tho acha nahi lagega

MOHAN : aur upar se abi bi rishab akela hi neche sab ko dekhra hain

MANIK : wo tho yahi pe tha na tho phir

MOHAN : samaj daar hain isliye chup chap sab sambal ra

NANDINI : koyi tho ruko na hamare sath

RESHMA : tum dono ko kab se kisi aur ki sath ki zarurath pad gayi hmmm

NANDINI : maaa

RAJ : chelo phir baito tum log

NANDINI : hmmm

MANIK : kayi door math rehna

RESHMA : teek hain...cheliye bayya...

MOHAN : haan...zyada thang math kar isse...

MANIK : yes sirrr

NANDINI : manikkk

MANIK : haan

NANDINI : wo

SOHA : hi manik...hi nandini...

MANIK : hey

KABIR : arey soha tum yaha kya karri ho bache sare vaha hain dance karre hain

NANDINI : kabirrr

KABIR : sryy

ABHI : soha why don't you dance next

SOHA : main?

ABHI : haan...

SOHA : nahi...am okay...

NAVYA : awww mukthi dekh bache kitne pyare lagre

ABHI : ooo...madam...hame next kya karna hain pehle wo dekho

MUKTHI : arey dekne do na usse wo enjoy karri

MANIK : vaise kon kon kya kya karra hain I mean dance and all

NANDINI : haan mujhe bi kisine kuch bathaya nahi

ABHI : haan tho ham ofcourse nahi bathayenge na

ALIA : surprise jo hain

DHRUV : guys I guess song end hone ko ara

KABIR : panch minute hain abi

uhmmm...manikk...wo...ye ring...!! and soha utters holding the diamond ring making everyone look her...

yee...!!! and manik takes the ring while everyone stand staring each other and then nandu...

SOHA : am sry am late

manik...!!!! and nandu whispers in mere audible tone...

yeee...!!! and she taking ring from his hand looks him without blinking her eyes...

KABIR : shona...kya hua...tu...

tum mujhe ye anguti pehnaoge...!!! and she utters interrupting kabir still staring at manik...

DHRUV : pari ye teri anguti hain...

ABHI : tum khud chahthi thi na ki manik tumhe yehi anguti pehnaye tho phir

tum mujhe ye pehnaoge...!!!! and she utters still staring manik but this time with anger filled tone...

MANIK : nandiniii

NANDINI : pagal samaj raka hain mujhe

Everyone stare each other getting totally confused while manik sits silently staring her with a calm expression...

NANDINI : bolooo...samaj kya raka hain mujhe...

KABIR : shona ye wohi anguti hain jo

ye wo anguti nahi hothi kabirrr...ye nakli hain...!!!! and nandu shouts out loud making everyone taken aback for a second except manik...

anguti kaha hain...!!! and nandu asks stretching every word...

tumhare paas hain bi ya nahi...!!!! and she continues trying to control her anger...

"tumhare liye wo anguti mujhse zyada maine rakhthi hain kya" and manik utters still maintaining his calm expression

NANDINI : haan...aur agar tumhare paas wo anguti nahi hain tho...

MANIK : thooo...tho kya yaha se cheli jaogi...

haan...shayad...!!!! and she utters looking into his eyes making every one shocked to the core...!!!!







extremely sry for making you people wait again and again...I know my sry can do nothing but still I wanna apologize you guys and trust me I really mean it...I am very much sad along with you for not being able to update regularly and trust me am seriously trying my best to give you updates whenever it is possible...about this update I dont how it is and am really really sry if it was not up to your expectations...one more sry since I don't know exactly how engagement cermony is done traditionally...jitna patha tha sirf utna hi likha aur agar galath tha tho please maaf kar dijiye...that's it...once again sry for making u all angry and a very big thank u for supporting me inspite of all these...would love to know your feed back isliye please do let me know how this update was...
Edited by anumanan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Missed you very much n update was awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
lots of thanks fr giving this update...
missed ur story so much...
superb n amazing update...
dreamy environment,,,u also written it perfectly...
everything is awesome...
eagerly waiting to know the ring problem...
once again tysm fr this update,,,loved it...

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