#6 MANAN FF LOVE IS MY LIFE PART 200B ON 139 - Page 79

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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing...waiting for next eagerly :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
waiting fr an update...when will u update...pleazz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey plz update. U will give us one update after ages and u will disappear. Please yaar if u do like this dheere dheere hum tumhara story bhool jaayenge... hehehe i was just joking please update soon yaar
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Posted: 9 years ago
Plz update soon. eagerly waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
Eagerly waiting for the GRAND ENGAGEMENT
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Posted: 9 years ago
update soon pleazz...dont leave it in middle...
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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful... Realily Awesome...
Am sorry for late reply... actualy PMs nahi mile toh socha u have not updated... but yaha toh 3 chapters reh gaye mere...


Read all the updates...
Proposal was superb ...Both in a different world of them...
woow...

Pls continue...
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Posted: 9 years ago
missing the story so much...😭
plz come soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
sryyy...sryyy...sryyy...i know sry kehke phir gayab hoke aur phir vapas sry kehke kuch nahi hotha... but still i want to apologise you all...am really really sry mujhe ap logon ko pareshan nahi karna hain but i end up doing the same...i was stucked with my personal matters and nothing more than that...i tried to update but couldnt and am sry for that...i read only few of your messages and am sry for not being able to reply you too...thanx a ton for caring about me and worring whether i was ok or not and a very big sry for troubling you and making you worry...reason behind my sudden appearance and dissapearance...ye sawal kaafi logon ka hain mujhse tho guys let me tell you i appear out of no where because i wana continue my stories and make you happy lekin beech beech main hamesha aisa kuch ho jatha hain jis ki vajah se main update nahi kar pathi hoon...bas itni si bath hain...main ye story bilkul bi adhi adhri nahi chodungi...jithna karib ye story aapke liye hain usse kayi zyada karib mere liye bi hain...isliye i promise jab thak main likh saku thab thak ye story main likungi... lastly do achi news share karni hain...ek ki main masi ban gayi hoon aur hamare parivar main nanni si gudiya aa gayi hain aur dusri meri results agayi hain aur main ek dam ache matlab ache marks se distinction la li hain...i will end my blabbering here... bohuth dino baad lika tho jaisa bi ho adjust karlo...sry and thank u once again...ooo haaa most importantly A VERY HAPPYYY FRIENDSHIP DAYYY...LUV U ALL...



PART 198 :

"Ab dar lagra" and manik asks tucking few hairs behind nandu ear while she nods her head as a no like a two year kid showing all her teeth making him smile like never before...

Thank you...!!!! and she pecks his lips out of no where making him look her surprised without blinking his eyes...

NANDINI : kyaaa

Kuch nahi and he utters smiling still looking her...

NANDINI : ummm manikkk

MANIK : hmmm

NANDINI : wooo

"kyaaa" and he once again gets surprised due to her yet another quick little peck...

"what" and she turns her head away from him smiling like an idiot...

MANIK : nandini

NANDINI : haa??

MANIK : i know ki climate kaafi acha hain aur ham dono yaha akele hain asmaan ke paas...i...i can understand mujh jaise handsome ladke ko apne paas aise...you know...par...par...please zara khud pe control rako na...tum...

manikkk...!!!!! and she starts hitting him hardly while he laughs out loud trying to hold her hands...

enough now and he finally holds her hands while she jerking his hands away pouts angrily folding her hands near her chest...

MANIK : acha listen... nandini... ek baar dekho tho sahi... areyyy... ok fine... lagtha hain tum bhul gayi so let me remind you... phir mujhe math bolna ki kuch kaha kyu nahi...

seeing her still not looking him he sighs and madam sagayi aaj hi hain...infact kuch hi der main...kisi aur ki nahi balki hamari...agar vapas jana ho tho batha do...

holding his hand instantly she widens her eyes looking at his watch and "hame jane hoga"

"oyeee" and he holds her tightly pulling her into his embrace...

MANIK : pagal ho

NANDINI : sryyy...manik jaldi neche chelo na...gar main guests aa bi gaye honge...

MANIK : arey nahi nahi abi jaldi kaha hain tum tho bohuth achi mood main thi na tho wohi continue karthe hain

NANDINI : tchhh manik please abi mazak nahi jaldi se gar chelthe hain na please...please...

MANIK : fine...fine...sagayi hamari hain...thooo...chelthe hain...

DHRUV : connect hua

KABIR : nahi yarrr

ALIA : mujhe bi connect nahi hora

MUKTHI : goddd ye call connect ho hi nahi raha hain... manikkk... am so gona kill you idiot... kaha hain tu...aajaaa yarrr

ARYAMAN : romance karra hoga nandu ke sath aur kya

MUKTHI : ahhh mannn pick up the calll

KABIR : arggg ek gante se bi kam vakth hain function start hone main

DHRUV : ham chelke sambal the hain na

ALIA : kab thak

DHRUV : haaa

ALIA : kab thak sambalenge akhir engagement tho un dono ko hi karni hain na

KABIR : ek kaam karthe hain main yaha mukthi ke sath un dono ko contact karne ki koshish kartha hoon tum sab jake neche sambalo

ARYAMAN : ummm i think its better

DHRUV : chelo phir

MUKTHI : ye dono akhir gaye kaha honge

KABIR : wo bi khud hi ka engagement chod ka

NANDINI : manikkk...manikkk...

MANIK : uuummm kya hua

NANDINI : ham yaha kyu jare

MANIK : kyu...sagayi nahi karni...

NANDINI : manikkk

MANIK : arey ander jana hain na hame isiliye

NANDINI : ye yee sab tumhari galthi hain...agar tum mujhe pehle hi propose karthe na tho ye sab nahi hotha...hame khud ki sagayi ke din choro ki tharah aise gar ke ander jana nahi padtha...

MANIK : shukar manao ki kam se kam maine aaj tho propose kiya aur ye tum mujhe kya bolri ho maine jo kuch bi kiya plan ke hisab se kiya aur mera pura ka pura surprise on time hua wo tho tum hi thi jo mere sath romance karne pe thuli huyi thi isliye late ham meri vajah se nahi tumhari vajah se hue

NANDINI : hawww manik tum

MANIK : chup bilkul chup...jo main kahu wohi karo aur apna muh bandh rako...ye peche ka rastha hain...tumhe pehle se patha hi hain lekin phir bi bathara hoon...iss diwar ki madad se ham apni balcony main pahunch jayenge... tum mere peche ched jao aur mujhe zor se pakdo...hmmm...

Seeing her not opening her mouth he glares her and "bolo bi kuch goor kya rahi ho"

"apna muh bandh rako" and seeing nandu acting saying this words moving her fingers he grits his teeth angrily and pulls her close lifting her on his back...

MANIK : ache se pakdo

seeing her not holding him he sighs and "nandini gir jayenge please ache se pakdo...pleaseee..."

Ignoring their closeness and controlling himself manik finally reaches near balcony while nandu helps him getting inside she herself getting down into balcony first...

Staring into her eyes for a minute breathing very heavily manik pulls nandu close with a jerk smashing his lips on hers while she widens her eyes instantly getting totally startled...

getting into reality she starts hitting him hardly while he holding her hands kisses her chewing her lips completely increasing her anger every single second...

breathless he breaks apart and "tumhe paas rake koyi bi kaam karna mushkil hain...janthi ho kitne mushkil se khud pe control raka..."

jerking him away she walks inside pouting angrily while he smiling follows her and "abi bi gussa ho...ek aur kissi doon???"

turning back she glares him angrily while he walks closer to her and "vaise abi jo kiss diya na maine tumhe wo tumhari height badne ki kushi main thi"

fisting her hands she raises them angrily to beat him but he holding her in time pulls her close and "ye ladayi rath main continue karthe hain...sirf adha ganta bacha hain...main yaha change kartha hoon...tum bi jaldi se change karke ajao..."

seeing her not replying he bites her nose and "chorryyy...please apna muh kolo aur bath karo...pleaseee"

seeing her not saying anything he pulls her even more close and "you are mad at me na...tho i will make it up for you...let me change you aurrr..."

nahiii...!!!! and she shouts out loud while he smiling nods his head and "acha now go and change...quick..."

getting inside the washroom nandu stands smiling and blushing biting her lower lip...

"madam smile aur blush karne ke sath sath zara change bi karlo...jaldi haaa..." and he utters smiling changing himself...

composing herself she stands before mirror and crings her eyebrows seeing a box on slab but soon smiles noding her head getting ready to open it...

Kaisa laga??? and she smiles to the fullest hearing his words hugging the lehenga choli chosen by him...her love...

MANIK : acha teek hain kuch nahi kehna hain tho jaldi se pehenke bahar ajao

smiling and nodding her head she quickly starts changing herself all the time blushing looking adorably cute...

nandiniii...nandiniii...kya karri ho...das minute ho gaye... tumhe thayar hone main bees minute hi hain and manik utters moving to and fro looking towards washroom door again and again...

"nandiniii jaldi karo...tumhare baal bi sukane hain...tum agar change karne main hi itna vakth lagao ge tho" and he stops opening his mouth getting dumbstuck witnessing his lady love standing at door looking breathtakingly beautiful having her hairs tied up wearing his chosen dress devoid of any ornaments...

Lowering her eyes nandu stands crushing her duppatta on either sides but seeing him not moving an inch she composes herself and reaches near mirror taking slow and steady steps...

watching him from corner of her eye nandu slowly opens her hairs but seeing him not uttering anything and standing in same position sighs closing her eyes doubting whether she was looking good or not...

feeling him near her she opens her eyes suddenly while he without seeing her starts drying her hair wearing a million dollar smile...

Without saying a word he makes her ready from top to bottom all the time smiling doing even the tiniest thing by himself leaving her to do nothing but adore him...

Moving back he quickly glances her but then again arranging her dupatta a little finally smiles like a kid showing all his teeth while she smiles nodding her head seeing how well he covered her entire body leaving people to only witness her hands that too only half...

Looking into her eyes he shows her his watch indicating that they still had five minutes while she just stares him without blinking her eyes...

Moving back slowly and again close to him suddenly she gels his hairs tip toeing while he stands holding her securely staring her lovingly...

Getting done she looks into his eyes while he slowly moving closer to her rests his head on hers...

yar abi thak kuch patha nahii and kabir stops widening his eyes entering into manan room...

Moving back nandu stands straight while manik smiling at him waves his hand saying him a hello...

Saale teri tho main and kabir runs towards manik while he holds him tightly and abey kya karra...sagayi hain meri...kapde karab ho jayenge...

KABIR : ooo tho tujhe yaad bi hain ki aaj sagayi hain

MANIK : haan yar baagne ki bohuth koshish bi ki par teri shona ne baagne hi nahi diya

KABIR : kaafi log intezar karre hain tum dono ki sagayi ki tho philal ke liye chelthe hain aur ham bath baad main karthe hain

MANIK : haan haan bilkul

KABIR : chelooo

MANIK : chele

NANDINI : hmmm

arrey chelo yar aur kitna vakth barbaad karoge and manan smile walking out hearing kabir words...




Edited by anumanan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
thank u so much...n welcome back...
missed u veryyy much...
lots of congrats fr ur two good news...sooo happy fr u...
update is awesome,,amazing n as usual very romantic...
love the manan parts...n like always ur writing is superb...
so finally engagement is the next...so excited fr it...
continue soon,,,n again tysm fr the update...love u n ur stories so much...

yey...i'm the first...
Edited by lovlytuli - 9 years ago

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