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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Poushi

NICE STORY...
MANIK KI PAST MAE KUCH BURA HUA ISS LIYA USKI THOUGHT ASA HA...
NANDINI KI PARENTS R NO MORE...THAT'S VERY BAD NEWS...PATA NAHI KYA HOGA FUTURE MAE...COZ MANIK DECIDE KIYA WO APNI POINT NANDINI KO PROVE KARAGA...
NEXT PART PLZ ASAP...

thank you soo much rvry thing will b sorted out very soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Please yaar update thoda jaldi na.. Nandini lost her parents and now what?? Wait, manik slapped nandini kya??
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Kavyashree22

Please yaar update thoda jaldi na.. Nandini lost her parents and now what?? Wait, manik slapped nandini kya??

thanx dear. im busy with my studies dear. i try to update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Veryy shocking update

Manik slapped nandu

Nandu's parents accident

Lovely writing


Coun sooon

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jamunamanik

Veryy shocking update

Manik slapped nandu

Nandu's parents accident

Lovely writing


Coun sooon

Thanks for the pm

thank u dear will try to continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
nice update...
poor nandu...
pls updte soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Nice one
Nandu parents are dead
Shocking
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm
Sry for late comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: prathyushaeluri

Nice one

Nandu parents are dead
Shocking
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm
Sry for late comment

thank u dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
hello guyz im back with an early update
here you go

CHAPTER 4


She didn't know what happend after she heard her parents are no more..she got unconscious..
When she gained her sense she was in village bua on her side..
Nandni bua ama apa chod k chale gahe bua mein kya karon gi ab..
She was sobbing very hard..
Bua let her cry...
Bua was also loved his brother he was the only one in this haweli who loved her..
I'm their family they don't do inter cast marriages so here she is still single.. She loved someone but her elder brother threatened her..
Nandni hugged her bua..


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In collage manik was really anxious she is not seeing nandni in collage its been a week.
Hr can't ask navya because he never talked to her.he thought may b he can asked dhurv he has talked to dhurv sometimes..
But he rejected his thought..
Manik: I don't care. Mein kyun pochon kisi se...


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Bua enter the room
Bua nandu tumein abi yahan se nikalna hoga..
Nandni bua hua kya hai muje batahen to ghabra q rai hain ap?
Bua tumare Chacha tumein marna chahte hain take sari jahedad un ki ho ske..nandu beta collage mein aisa koi b nai hai? Jo tumari madat kar ske?
Nandni thought for a moment suddenly she thought about dhurv..

Flash backs..

Nandni was sitting in canteen when dhurv came there..
Dhurv: Hi nandni.. He was very fluster..
Nandni Hi dhurv..
He was very nervous nandni noticed this..
Nandni kya hua dhurv itna gabra q rahe ho? Sab teak ti hain na?..
Dhurv ha han nan nandni sab teak hai he said quickly..
Nandni: tum aise stammer q kar rahe ho dhurv..
Dhurv wo muje much kehnaa hai nandni
Nandni kaho na dhurv
Dhurv wo nandni I love you..
Nandni was shocked..
Dhurv kuch kaho na nandni?
Nandni mein kya kahin dhurv mein ne tumare bare mein khabi aisa nai socha we are just frnds..
Dhurv plz nandni kya frnrship pyar mein nai badal skti? I really like you..
Nandni didn't know what to say..
Dhurv give me a chance nandni?
If u need time?
Nandni dhurv tum mere frnd ho or abi k liye mein kuch or nai sochna chahti I Hope tum samaj gahe ho?
Dhurv its OK nandni but we are still frnds right.
Nandni of course dhurv...

Flashbacks end..

Nandni han bua ek hai mera frnd Jo shayd madad kar ske..
Bua; nandu tum usey call karo beta..
She called dhurv and told him the whole situation she told him to meet him in the main road of gahon..
Nandni was couldn't believe her own Chacha is planning to kill her she was sobbing very hard..
Bua beta jaldi karo yahan se niklo..
Nandni hugged her bua.
Bua helped her to escape from back door...


SO HOW IS IT?
DO SHARE YOUR THOUGHTS NEXT CHAPTER WILL START FROM PROLOGUE..
HIT LIKE & COMMENT
LOVE SAMAA
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Awsmmm

Awsmmm

Awsmmm

Shocking part

Thanks for the pm

Coun sooon

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