Hey there!
i wanna begin with the answer to your last question! YES U DID COMPENSATED WELL 👏👏👏
ismei standing await-ion ka smiley q nahi hai?!
ok now coming to the update...
cross my heart i will be honest to each and every word that follows...
when i started to read this update honestly after the first papa when Swati take Manik with her to discuss the consequences and formalities of the procedure i couldn't read any further...
i was in a car already going through a hard time and above that this update made me cry 😭
i paused for a moment or two...swallowed the lump in my throat and resumed reading further!
but still tears didn't stopped...
sometimes i felt i was Manik going here and there his mind saying something..his heart instruct something... and something else comes out of his tongue...
sometimes i felt i was Nandini fighting in between life and death with the pain i was bearing for a sweet fruit in the end... i don't know from where did i got this strength to endure this amount of pain!
basically through out the whole delivery scene my sight was blur but i did not give up reading... i had full faith in your pen and thus i decided i wanna know hats gonna happen next... though i knew since the beginning k tum Nandini ko kuch honay nahi do gay...
i know its the exam time and at this time even the strongest person is weak... fighting with the inner turmoil whats gonna happen next is not known. same is my condition these days... life and death... thinking about these two things only...trust me every day i come up to a point where i loose and then win myself in these two conditions... and its hard taking ones side!
every time i feel your Nandini is the best part of this story... but today Manik stole my heart! this Manik is my hero ... Nandini's her... the baby's Hero...
i have all my sympathies with Manik and i know he is a broken soul but a damn strong guy and he will stood up... for his love... fro his life... for his wife... for his family!
coming to the point where you have asked why people whether it be a girl's Father or brother, Her husband and after that her offspring try to control their life...
My dear Aashna... i want to share... i have lived in a very liberal family... although i am a proud Muslim girl like all other Muslim girls i was never ever controlled and manipulated like a puppet by my parents and today i am very proud and May Allah bless my parents with a long happy and healthy life ahead ameen.
there were times when they told me what is right and what is wrong but they never ever tried to impose their decisions on me! yes there were times they were as hard as any Desi parents but also very trusting and forgiving too at the same time...
i wish all kids in our world could get Parents like ammi and abba i have!
i know Nandini is going to be back in Manik's life soon...and they will live happily ever after... but this journey of courtship was immensely difficult for both of them and now they know their love would never let them down coz now they know what does it actually mean living without anyone of them...
at last i would say please continue writing coz u are superbly talented and God's blessed child! i wish you all the best for future...
sorry to keep you bored with my comment but just a little emotional me after what you wrote!