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Sofiafarooq

@Sofiafarooq

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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

Very nice update.

Amazing.

Will wait for next update.

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sweet_kaur

@sweet_kaur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#162

first and for most congratulations for the

new thread di

and the update was great

nandini was remarkably potrayed in this update

liked maniks steps also

and sorry cant give a long comment actually

m not well and im litrary hiding and

posting this also as im not allowedto use tech fr some days

but all i gotta say is this story is phenomenal

the plot ,characters and the emotions that the potray are

spectacular wish you many such threads

and keep up the fabulous work that u do

ty for pm!!

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samaira1103

@samaira1103

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#163

hello... kudos to ur way of thinking n writing those povs...👏👏 just amazing... just loved the idea of manik's apology in front of everyone without bothering abt anyone bcoz he actually hurt her to such a grt extent that too without even thinking abt her... loved the dream sequence... nw manik will cm to knw abt her complications...

i just loved the images of baby's room esp the first one... wow... loved it...n loved ur puzzle conversation part...quite different but so true n touching... so hats off n update soon... will be waiting for the next part...😆

sorry sorry...forgot to congratulate u on ur new thread... so heartiest congratulations...😊😃

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mona

@cmamona

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Posted: 9 years ago

#164

Hey
Congratulations for the new thread...

It is really amazing chapter...
Thank god he tore those papers in front of her...
Finally he realises that she was in pain cz of him...
And how she felt...
Its payback time... And its beautifully penned down...

Update soon
Egarly waiting...

Keep smiling
stay blessed

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mishghan

@mishghan

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#165

hey Girl!

Sorry for a late comment !!!

Glad you liked my idea and what question is this to ask that was it upto the mark or not?! totally stupid 😛

IT WAS WAY ABOVE MY IMAGINATION!!! i haven't expected that the truth will be opened in this way connected with the dream sequence 😲

i was on cloud nine after reading this 👏

i loved the way Manik decorated his princess's room... i loved those decorations...

i hope now Manik is going to find out about her pregnancy complications and will make use of his brain a little bit :/

ok now being a bit greedy! update thora chhota nahi tha? 😛

next time i want lamba wala update...

and jaldi update karna i know you're busy but m greedy too😛😆

ok i have something to point out... i know you like criticism but still no offence to your writing and pehle hi maafi maang rai hun !!!

manik decorating room for his baby is a step towards his repentence lekin this was only concerning his baby! that has nothing to do with nandini in particular. it is obvious that nandini is carrying his baby aur baby ki khushi mei nandini ki khushi hai lekin let manik do something exclusively for nandini...

may be in this way though not so soon but may be this lightens up some soft corner in nandini's heart...may be a tiny bit!

just a thought no offence to anybody...

just my thought!

may be many of you won't agree to this...

anyways looking forwards to a soonish update asap.

thank you once again for considering my thought! it was very generous of you!!!🤗

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Rooth348

@Rooth348

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Posted: 9 years ago

#166

Superb update dear...

I just wanna see manik's reaction when he comes to know about nandini's health...

I think it would be hell emotional...

Looking forward for the next part...

Continue soon..

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pinky

@kimnana

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#167

emotional update ..manik is sorry for his deeds ..he promised to be with her

she can't trust him anymore ...he took all blame infront of appa

he wanna live happily with her

ty for pm

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S.h.e.e.t.a.l

@S.h.e.e.t.a.l

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Posted: 9 years ago

#168

Finally got time and read the update

Its awesome

I liked it

Thank you for pm

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Apoorva Rath

@angelsparkling1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#169

Awesome poor nandini Manik ko v pata lgni chahiye about nandini's condition Updt soon

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barkhachawla95

@barkhachawla95

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#170

Hey a big Thanx fr ur pm ya I also don't want that manik should b forgiven so easily bt ya at the end he should don't wanna see manan separated its heartbreaking...Thanx fr ur lively story continue writing Thanx a lot

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