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piyu008

@piyu008

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Posted: 9 years ago

#191

Its awesome..cont. soonish😃

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pinky

@kimnana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#192

lovely update ..nandani needs to know abt manik past ..harshad his step brother

he managed to tell her finally ..loved their cute fight n possessive manik at club trying

to control drunken nandani who is his peace n happiness

ty for pm

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Redcrystal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#193

Amazing update

Try to open up Manik in front of Nandini

Maybe she will calm his senses down

Or may be he will feel relaxed sharing his past with her

My suggestion

Upto you but very nice story and

Going very good

I really like it

Keep writing

Thanks

Keep smiling and stay blessed

Edited by Redcrystal - 9 years ago

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SehrMemon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#194

i didn't see much of a response this time is all okay? story getting boring?

promo

"nandini I will explain later right now I need to go it's important" "everything is important manik expect me I think so" she says looking away from me

"How do you know Harshad n how is he your step brother?" "What?" he snaps. "You heard me"

"I will die loving you" he says with all of the emotion I know he truly feels. I am just submitting to him now.

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Nawrin Jahan

@NJahan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#195

superb

continue soon

tnx for d pm

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krishb

@krishb

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Posted: 9 years ago

#196

Awsome promo... beutiful story i love to read your store and i always wailt for update.

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kishubedi

@kishubedi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#197

Thanks for pm
Eagerly waiting for update!

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Kuushi

@Kuushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#198

Interesting promo..uff harshad harshad harshad when will this harshad exit from the story and leave manan in peace..and the last line of the promo just depicts manan undying love for eachother..will be waiting for the update please continue soon and thanku for the pm :)

Edited by Kuushi - 9 years ago