MANAN FS:OUR WILD KISS / EK VILLIAN( LAST PART ON PAGE 55) 27APRIL - Page 27

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Posted: 9 years ago
Really confusin promo..
Manik s shattered nt findin nandu...
Nandu laevin smewhere...
So shckin..Jaldi hi manan ko milado yaar.
Do continue n update soon yaar..
Waitin 4 nxt prt..Thks so much dear 4 d pm...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Woww mind blowing promo dr..
Thanks for the pm dr..
Waiting for the update eagerly Dr..
Always stay blessed and happy Dr
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb promo
Waiting for the chapter
Continue soon
Take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
PART -2 (B)




Manik was sitting on his car...he was remembering there past...which makes his eyes moist...

Manik Pov :

Please little one...don't give me such punishment...I couldn't bear it...I already live without u for 5 yrs...now i can't live without u for a second...if u angry naa...toh beat me...I will not say anything...but please come back little one...come back to ur manik...please come back ...I promise I will never leave u ...never makes u shade a single drop of tear...just come back...just come back to me little one...come back...

He opened his eyes and wiped his tears and started the car...


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MURTHY MENSION -


Manik reached murthy mension...he came out of the car...but every single memory of their came in front of him...

Manik Pov :

I don't know why? Why everything has to be happened with us only...I love u so much i couldn't even think to live without u...if u r here...I will make u understand...why I left...but if not...I don't know what am I going to do...

Manik ring the door bell...servants opened the door for him...while looking at him with tearfully eyes...manik who was seeing him first time...all surprisedby his reaction...

Servant smilingly said :Aap aa gaye baba...didi ne aapka kitna wait kiya...voh kehti nahi thi par bahot roti thi Akele main...ab aap aa gaye ho naa ...dekhna didi ki khushi ka thikana nahi rahega...

Manik was so happy by listening this...it's like his happiness has no bounds...

Manik stammeringly said :Na..nd..ani...yaha ha...

Servant face fell down by listening this...

Servant :nahi...voh...

Suddenly a voice came from behind...

Voice :Mohan kisse baat kar rahe ho...

Servant nervously said : sahab voh ma.n.ik baba aaye ha...

Mr. Murthy shockingly said :Manik

Manik entered the house and smirkingly said

Manik smirkingly said :hello Mr. Murthy...seems like am unexpectable haa ...well kaha tha maine aauga main vapas Apni amanat ko lene...toh dekhiye aagaya main...aaj mere paas itna paisa ki saari duniyaan bhi nandani ke kadmo main daal dunga toh bhi kam nahi padegi...ab aapka kya kehna ha...ab toh karoge naa nandani kI shaadi mujhse...

Mr. Murthy evilly smiled and said : Tumhe kya laga tum ese vapas aa jaaoge aur main Apni beti ki shaadi tumse kar dunga...kabhi nahi manik malhotra...maine tumhe nandani kI life se issiliye nahi nikala tha ki ek din tum vapas uski life main aa jao...nandani kI shaadi toh main tumse kabhi nahi karunga...ab jo tumhare baap ne kiya uske baad tumne soch bhi kaise liya ki MOHAN MURTHY...apne sabse bade rival RAJ MALHOTRA ke bete ke saath uska rishta kar dunga...

Manik shockingly said :iska matlab aapne voh sab ...

Mr. Murthy evilly said :haa voh sab maine tumhe uski life se nikalne ke liye kiya...taaki voh tumse nafrat kare...aur dekho voh nafrat karti ha tumse...in fact usne toh sagai bhi kar li ...aur next month uski shaadi ha...card bhijwauga...aana jarrur ...

Manik angrily said :Nandani kaha ha...

Mr. Murthy smirkingly said : Nandani nahi ha aur agar hoti bhi toh tumse nahi milti voh...beinthaa nafrat karti ha voh tumse...samjhe tum...aur ab nikal jao mere ghar se...I don't like uninvited guests...

Manik angrily said : Mark my words Mr. Murthy u r going to pay for all ur lies...nandani meri ha...mujhse pyaar karti ha iss baat ka sabot mujhe aapse nahi chahiye...kyunki main uski jaan...uski dhakan...uski ruh main basta hu...ek pal ke liye voh sab bhul sakti ha mujhe nahi...vishwas ha mujhe us par...hamare pyaar par...aur rahi baat shaadi ki toh aana jarrur aaj se ek mahine baad meri aur nandani kI shaadi main...and trust me I too don't like uninvited guests...cya...

Mr. Murthy was so shocked to react ...while manik left from there angrily...


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Manik was continuously drinking while cabir came and snatched the glass from him to which manik gave a deadly glare...

Cabir : c'mon manik tu ese haar nahi maan sakta...arre voh teri nandani ha...teri jaan...teri little one...agar tu haar maan jayega toh kaise chalega...

Manik who was frustrated...while cabir talk were not helping a bit ...

Manik : toh kya karu main cabir...kya...har jagah dhundh liya...har jagah...yaha tak ki uske papa ke yaha bhi gaya...par esa lagta ha...jaise kismat main hamara Milna likha hi nahi ha ...

Cabir was shocked by listening this...he couldn't even believe in his ears his best friend who just want to spread happiness now talking like shit !!!

Cabir :tu pagal ho gaya ha...kismat ki baatein haare huye log karte ha...aur Jis manik ko main jaanta hu voh kismat banata ha...soch manik kuch toh esa hoga...koi insaan...koi jagah jaaha voh jaati ho...

Cabir looks at manik hopefully to which manik closed his eyes ...suddenly a picture flesh in front of his eyes and brings a smile on manik's face


Manik : shit!!!shit!!!shit!!!How can I forget ...am coming little one...am coming


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Nandani was sitting on the bed...and remember all the moment she spend with manik...she smiled...but soon her smile faded when she remember all the touchers which druv did...tears were made their way...


Nandani Pov :

Ab aur nahi seh sakti main ...thak chuki hu Inn sab se ladte...Apni kismat se lagte ladte...ab aur himmat nahi ha mujhme...nahi jii sakti ese pal pal gHut kar...mujhe jaana hoga...yaha se ...in sabse dur...jaha koi druv nahi hoga...aur naa hi koi aur...bahot wait kiya maine tumhara par tum nahi aaye ... kyu nahi aaye tum manik...please maaf kar dena mujhe...ab jaana hoga mujhe...am sorry manik...am sorry...

Nandani was packing her stuff...suddenly aryaman came from back...

Aryaman cheekily said :baby girl...are u going somewhere?

Nandani looked at aryaman and takes a deep breath and said

Nandani :haa aryaman...am going...ab bahot ho gaya...bahot intazaar kar liya...bahot sah liya...ab bas aur nahi...main jaa rahi hu aryaman...HAMESHA HAMESHA KE LIYE...

Aryaman shockingly said :what?


Nandani :yes

Aryaman :No u can't go like this...aur agar manik vapas aa gaya kya jawab dunga main usse...kaha ha uski little one...nandani think about manik please just stay...


Nandani :I can't stay here anymore...this place...people...every dam thing is haunting me aryaman...every single...if i stay here anymore...I doubt...u will never see ur friend alive...please arya jaane doo mujhe...just let me go...and I promise...I will stay in touch with you...aur rahi baat manik ki...he will find me...jaahe main duniyaan ke kissi bhi kone main chali jaau dhundh lega voh...pata ha naa kitna bada chipku ha voh...

Aryaman smiled and little and said : I knew...par iss will miss you baby girl...

Nandani : I'll miss you too...


Nandani hugged arya and left from there...she took the cab...

Nandani Pov :

Kitni ajeeb ha yeh zindagi...jab jeena chahti thi toh Jine ki vajah chin li ...aaj jina nahi chahti par ussi zindagi ke liye jeena pad raha ha...I will miss you manik...


Driver: madam church aa gaya...

Nandani : thik ha aapke thodi der wait kijiye main abhi aati hu...


Driver : thik ha madam...


Nandani came out of the car and went towards the church...



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Nandani lit the candle and joined her hands in front of jesus Christ ...










Nandani : shayad aakhiri baar aa rahi hu main yaha...aap toh sab jaante ha naa...jaa rahi hu main...bas hamesha ki tarah mere manik ki life main khushiyaan laana...kyunki...agar voh khush rahega to main bhi khush rahungi...I love him jesus...give him all my happiness...never makes him sad...never ...


Nandani started walking...her eyes were filled with tears...


Suddenly a voice came which makes her froze...




Voice :TUSI JAA RAHE HO...TUSI NAA JAO...



A lone tear fell on her face...












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Oh god!!!! That was pretty long...so now here is the update...hope you guys like it...
Comments karna mat bhulna...varna main update karna bhul jaaungi...
Love you all
Diya❤️

Edited by diyaNarwal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
First one... Yepi... Next part soon plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz cnt wait plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz it's amazing awesome superb outstanding mind blowing fantastic lovely update tysm dear fr the update plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz upload next part soon plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Story bhul gayi thi going to read again.. dekha na that's why I always request to update jaldi..

Res..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesssmmeee

Manan z gnna meet

Woowwee

Amaziinnggg ch :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update.. .
I just loved it.. .
Awesome Ya.. ..
So finally manik aa gaya ...
Please update soon. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG!!!!!!!! Awesome update...loved Manik and Mr. Murthy's confrontation...Manik trusts nandini so much...i think that;s manik who has found Nandini...continue soon if you can pleaseee!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Best update
Keep writing
Keep smiling 😊

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