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devilkhushi

@devilkhushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#591

Awesome update nandini is upset with manik n manik doesn't know about it

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Sudha14

@Sudha14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#592

Nooo...!!! What's this di? U don't get to end it here..shit..ami toh next weekend ashte ashte morei jabo! 😭 God!! Purai nainsafi! Tumi kobe next part update korba???

Ok..I honestly felt really bad for nandini today. I know manik is not really at fault but that doesn't change the fact that he is a big time moron.

Nandini is under the impression that manik is moving on with rewa the bitch..bechari was crying even in her sleep..poor thing.

Manini also wanted to shave manik. Like mother like daughter! 😛

Even after being this mad at manik she can't see him in pain. 😔

Rewa actually said "I took your place"? Huh!! O just chair ei jaega pabe..never in manik's life 😡 If I was in nandini's place I would have beaten the shit out of her by now.

But hats off to manini..she is doing all the things to the two plastics, I so badly wish I could 👏

Manik can't even stand any random guy adressing nandini "nandu"! Eto possessive! Can't even begin to imagine what nandinin is going through right now with the idea of manik moving on 😲

Rewa must have been "tawa fried rewa" when manik scooped nandini out of the pool in his arms🤣

N the last part!! di I've read it 3 times by now..I could totally feel their anger, frustration, pain, love, possessiveness...n every other emotion that there was! Loved it to bits 👏 Really really really well written. U nailed it!

"Nobody questions my right on my wife..not even YOU" line of the day 👏 👏

N lastly welcome back favourite writer.. missed you to the moon n back..seriously!!

Pls pls pls promo dio!

Keep writing..keep rocking.

Stay blessed.

Edited by Sudha14 - 9 years ago

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anaita arora

@fireflies10

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#593

amazing update manik baba short term memory loss samjh hi nhi aa raha ki nandu kyun gussa hai but when he is jealous...thats mind blowing cartoon and shaving part was superb rewa she is such a bitch manini is a pro in making fun of rose and rewa cabiraaa ne aur fuel daal diya fire mai loved it update soon take care ty for pm

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nandinimanan

@nandinimanan

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#594

Its amazing I think manik is talking abt sum deal wid Reva. I luv kaddu baby, awww she pour rose's lotion & clean her oily hand wid reva dress days superb. Hope manan will b 2gethr soon. Thanx for lovly update

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Sm0405

@Sm0405

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Posted: 9 years ago

#595

OMG OMG OMG ... This was truely amazing ... Matlb gussa, pain, jealousy, bhara pada tha iss me toh ...

Nandini nd Manik k verbal fights ... Nd last me Manik ne puri tarah se apna ryt Nandini pe jta diya ... I really liked tht line of Manik "Nobody questions my right on my wife..not even YOU" ...

Nandini was very hurt nd disturbed becoz of tht Rewa thing nd was really ready to give Manik a tuff time ...

She was determined to ignore Manik in all possible ways ... Bt this was only confusing Manik more n more ... He wanted Nandini to clearly tell him Whts bothering her bt she was nt ready to do tht ...

Manik was getting irritated by Nandini's behavior in the pool also as she was nt listening to him nd was with Mitin ... Nd the way he pulled Nandini out of the pool ... Seriously this update was really zabardast ...

Bt Manik still dosent knows Whts bothering Nandini this much ...

Wohooo I enjoyed this update very much nd this always happens after I read ur updates k when it finishes na I feel lyk yaar itni jaldi khatm ho gya ... Kaash thoda aur Baki hota ... U know I can never get enough of ur writing ... Bt u always give us long updates ... So thank u soo much fr this ...

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Apoorva Rath

@angelsparkling1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#596

Awesome

loved it

updt soon

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Sid

@BrightNSparkle

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#597

Oh wow Nandini is more impulsive than Manik, I love this Mannini baby a lot cute little kiddo... She will surely piss everyone one who comes in between MaNan...

Oh that small barber was so funny...

Ofo she really want to make him angry so she got inside the pool, how cute he took her and walked to their room...

After all this Manik is Manik loved this update...

Thanks for the update

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Zara Khan

@ZaraKhann

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Posted: 9 years ago

#598

Nowww this was a sixer!

U finally updated!

Andd i feeelll likeee the most happiest one on this earth>3

Hayeee!

This iss par excellence!

I couldn't stop awwing!

Manan gets cuter day by day!

And manini is truly a Manan's baby!

Manik is always found on nandu's bed!

No matter what the situation is!

And beechari manini is sandwiched!

Manini explaining doraemon to manik!

And nandini getting pissed off!

Atleast this way manik understands nandu!

Manini shaving manik!

Just like nandini!

And then the cut!

Bam!

It was an effort to seek attention baba!

We all know him inside out!

But mitin is surely advisable for someone like manik!

Always getting overboard!

And proud of nandini!

She makes the best use of these situations!

Manini is surely the cutest one!

Pouring the lotion on rewas head!

And trying to get her parents together!

The volleyball gaamee!

How i wish it could be more written!

And more of jealousness!

The bedroom scene was adorably written!

Nandini took out all her frustration!

And manik sab sunta gaaya!

The last part was when i actually started laughing!

Manik ko kitni der baad hosh aaya!

Lastly he camee rey!

Continue soon!

Will be waiting!

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life_923

@life_923

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#599

I just love Manini, she is adorable.

Hope they understand each other's pov n let go of the differences.

Great update. Eagerly waiting for ur nxt update. 😊

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Pinkypie

@Pinkypie

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#600

Wowww update was Superb it was full of MANAN'S action Godd u writee so amazing that waiting eagerly 🤗to read "Hats of"👍🏼 to u for this Story Luvv it🥳
Take care.!
God bless uh 😊

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