#5//The Ex's At War//Ch17 on Pg 126 n Link for Thread 6 on Pg 1 - Page 59

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thamannamanan thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
MISSED YOU VERY BADLY


haa whole update was superb

loved manik nandini Manini moments
rewa coming n sitting near manik nandu moves from thr to go n sit with mitin n harshad
n even Manini goes to her thinking her mom is alone
n kabeer telling ab tu ne kya kiyaa?/ but mnk couldn't understand why nandini
is angry

best was swimming pool scene

kabeer did fab job by adding fuel

nandini is not in a mood to listen to u see how she is holding mitin 😃

kabeer s dialog was awesome now they will be busy for some time shall we continue our game?????


nandini is hurt
she wants manik to take care of her
to love her
hope manik understand her feelings
n rewa s plannings


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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesomeee,fantasticcc...its worth waiting prt...i hope u will update soon ...becoz u leave d chptr at vry intrstng point...sumwhere
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Posted: 9 years ago
Well..first of all thank you soo much for the update
N it was awesome.. Manik n manini seeing cartoons together n manini telling him about all characters.. Aww nice daddy-daughter moment..
N poor nandu..misunderstanding ki wajah se kitna ro rh h..urggh I hate rewa..nandu ki seat pr bethi to bethi..she was taunting her abt taking her place..such a...
That pool scena was good..manik pehle Hi jealous tha n cabiraa did a grt job..lol
M that fighting was horrible.. Bichara dono bina bat k lad rh h..
Last part was shocking.. I thought he left..pr ye to kuch or Hi ho gya..he is really furious now..
Well that was soo nice..
Will b waiting for next week..thx for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg outclassed totally mind blowing fabulous update

Nandu was hell pissed at manik for not clearing things up between them rather behave like a clueless person and when she tries to be friends with someone else he cant stand it and wants to show his right on her. If she has some misunderstanding then he needs to clear it

He can only convince her by making love to her that he only loves her not anyone else

Continue soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally u updated ...throughout the update I was like manik ka gussa ab phutega ab phutega nd finally last mein phut hi gaya ; I really appreciate the way u portrayed nandini's emotions amazingly done:) nd both r still impulsive soulmates; another amazing update dear:))) God bless you:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
wowww too emotional i love manini too cute awesome update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh god do u know my heartbeat is beating so fast after reading ur update it ws dat amazing d way u have made did story manan n manini n every oder character hats off to u such amazing superb story n I am looking forward fr d next update please write it soon I know I am putting stress on u to update asap bt dats ur fault u have written such amazing story I CNT wait fr updates
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update yaar thanks for such a long update manini was superb she pour lotion on rose hair hahah so cute of her jealousy manik is good to see angry nandu helpless manik nandus outburst was superb thanks for pm continue soon excited for next part take care nd keep smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update.
Nandu z hell angry with Manik, and he doesn't know the reason. Like really sometimes I wonder z he dat dump, I mean after Nandini giving rewa his coat and said it doesn't belongs to her. Still he didn't get it.

Jealous Manik, he z always a treat to watch. God he can't even see her talking to another man, possessive Manik.
Nandu, I think she cant b pissed anymore. And she also makes Manik angry.

Last, dat words of Manik nobody can take his right on his wife not even you, wow it was just wow.
And he kissed her to show his right on her.
Loved it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
The chapter's title though .
And the last line . <3

Nandini is so pissed with Manik .
Manik knows about it but doesn't know the reason.

They make me want to pull my hair over their fights and impulsive-ness .
Kahan se le aaye inko ?
But I adore and love them for this .

Manini also likes to shave .
Ahh .. The Impulsive Soulmate chapter where Nandini shaved Manik .
Memories. ;)
Well , I might just read that one again .;)

Even though she was hell pissed at her man but his mere cut sure to scare her out of wits .

Manik and his possessiveness for both the ladies who mean the world to him. <3

'They should talk and sort out '
The cliched suggestion but they won't .
They can't and that's what makes them one hell of a couple and amazing lovers .

Their world revolves around each other and they don't give a damn to anybody around .
Ufff .. The way they fight !

Thankyou for the message .
Weekend complete . <3
Now is a long long wait till the next update .

Take care of yourself
-God bless :)

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