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Posted: 9 years ago
take ur time n update when it is possible
but try to update soon plz
eagerly waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
Really missing you as your story is the best out here but you deserve space for yourself and personal life and you should relax for the time being as you had a hectic schedule past few days so please don't care about what people comment but do what you want to do and relax. Readers should understand that the writer is a human and they have a right to live their life as they want just like readers read stories and don't comment or like them because they don't want to so just deal with the fact that the writer has to put in a lot of time for writing the story and they have a right to decide when to write. I love your story and I am going to wait till you return and till then I will be reading the previous parts. Take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
Intehaa ho gayi intezaar ki..
Aayi na koi khabar ex's k update ki🥺
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Posted: 9 years ago
Please update na...
Anything will do ...
But please update
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Posted: 9 years ago


So here u go with this random moment.. Kindly ignore the errors and bear with this not so good update.


RANDOM MOMENT



I swayed in front of Manik in my sexy mid thigh night dress while he was drowned in his laptop. I dropped my hair clip, cleared my throat, tapped on the dressing table but nothing was fruitful enough to draw his attention. Sometimes Manik really had to behave this irritating as he was doing right now.

"Manik we should renovate our room..its so dull and boring...Don't you think so?", I made yet another attempt to make him look at me but that moron had literally buried himself in the laptop. He just hmmed and nodded his head without lifting his head.

I was seriously getting fed up now. It is actually true that husbands start ignoring their wives as their relationship gets older. I climbed the bed and crawled to him on my knees

"Manik are you even listening to me", I snapped irritably and grabbed the laptop.

"Nandu kya kar rahi ho?", Manik finally looked at me and his jaw dropped in the next instance. He obviously wasn't expecting me in a night dress like that.

"Mrs. Rawat is absolutely correct...all husbands are morons but I was the only idiot who was defending my husband that no Manik is not like that..he hasn't changed...I fought with her for YOUUU...and here you don't even look at me...like a fool I bought this dress but you don't even have time to look at me", I went on and on like a nagging wife without looking at Manik

I heard a chuckle escape his lips. Yes he found it funny and now as I gave him a dejected look, a convenient smile spread on his lips. He leaned back on the pillow and started giggling at my condition. I got annoyed and tried to get off the bed when he grabbed my hand and pulled me with a jerk that I fell on his chest. While one of his hand snaked my waist the other hand got engaged with drawing circles on my bare legs or to be precise my thighs.

"So Mrs. Rawat told you to dress like that", he said in a low cautious voice tracing the lace of my dress over my cleavage.

That crooked smile never left his lips and I blushed like a fool, "Amm what..who.. What you are talking about?", I allowed my hair to cover my red flushed face.

"I love this red Nandu", he bit his lip and paused for a smile, "So it seems my wife has a lot of complains from me...she thinks I don't notice her...that I don't see her tricks to get my attention...that I don't see that since the last two days she has been trying to make me pass in the silly women's magazine compatibility test", he glanced at the magazine lying on the side table.

My eyes were ready to pop out of the sockets, "You knew?"

He flipped our positions and got me under him, "You are living on sprouts and oats since the last two days...you had a hair cut and have been following the silly theories of that magazine so now does my wife know if I notice her or not", he held my chin up to make me look at him. I was grossly embarrassed now.

I still made a face looking at him. He knew I was having issues for his time and still troubled me.

"Fine I am sorry I know I was at fault for not giving you enough time but now that we have just the perfect occasion let's utilise it appropriately", he suggested in a controlled seductive voice hovering over my face.

Now that he was turned on I was tamed, "Ma..Manik..yo..you were working na...it must be something important..you please carry on"

"Aa..aan..Mrs. Malhotra now Mr. Malhotra has only one important work", he murmured whilst kissing my neck.

I was almost losing it to his delectable tortures when I suddenly heard something, "Manik did you hear something?"

"Come on Nandu now no more excuses"

"Manik I swear.. Dhyaan se suno na."

We both laid a good ear and heard some sounds from the living room. We quickly gathered ourselves up and stepped out to cross the living room and reached the kitchen and found our baby. She had opened the fridge door and had almost climbed on the second rack.

"Kadduuu what are you doing baby?", I quickly brought her down. She had spilled some ketchup and curry on herself.

"She was sleeping right?", Manik looked confused.

I huffed a sigh and rolled my eyes at her, "She is here for the ice cream"

"Mommy ishh cleam pleashh", Manini made a cute pouty face.

"Kaddu I said no right...now come on clean up and let's do sleepy", I tried to pick her up but she protested and hopped to Manik.

"Daddy I want ishh cleam pleashh...yumm yumm", he licked her lips to show her craving.

"Nandu give her some na then my princess will do nini happily right princess", Manik looked at her and she nodded her head in a yes.

I gave a sheepish look at the father and daughter, "There is no ice cream...I ate it...I was fed up of sprouts and oats"

Manini instantly cringed her nose at the piece of information and Manik let out a dirty snort at my failed diet resolution.

Manini distorted her face adorably. Now that she had thought she wanted it. She curved her lips as a warning that she was about to wail," Daddy ishh cleammm", she nagged sniffling her nose.

"Kaddu its late..come now"

"If Princess wants ice cream my baby will get it... Nandu come on get ready..our ice cream date remember? This time with this bonus", he looked at his daughter and kissed her adorably and we set out for yet another late night ice cream date.
Edited by sujal1fan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww.. that was really sweet
Nandu thinks Manik doesn't notice her nd gv her tym...
Bt the way Manik told her hw he noticed everything abt her...I so loved it...
Bdw nice idea...sometimes u cn gv some random moments from their past...
Bt plzzz gv a full fledged update this weekend...
M eagerly waiting aftr reading the promo...
Update asap plzzz...
Edited by mishti5 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res
Hey Sujal
How's everything ???
Hope all good.
Lovely MUAHHH !!!!! Superb.
Sho cute , nandani can behave this way only in front of Manik.

Awww !!!! She was seducing Manik 😳
So he did notice such minute things about nandnai. Lovely 👏

Hehehe she was on DIET . SRSLY like really.

Manini baby isshhh shooo cute.
Hehe climbing inside the fridge.
Awww Manini wanted to eat isshhh creame.

Kadduuu really knows who to instigate more with her trantrums

So another ice creame date , n that too with beautiful MANINI.


Edited by Vandyandy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww. .
Last part was so adorable. ..
Manini is the cutest baby..I could imagine her climbing the fridge to get ish cleam😆

And start ka part..
typical Nandu and her antics..


Thank u for this little before their separation wala part..

They are such a cute family...


Abhi muje update chahiye..kal ya parso . Acha lamba wala..plssh
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey di...
tht ws cute...

ye past ka scene tha kya??..
bt it ws awsm...

awww nandu trying to gain manik s attention...
tht too following a magazine tht ws so funny n cute..
hahah .
n embarrassing ffr nandu...

bt hw cute of manik noticing evrythng yet nt asking or doing smthng...

it ws damn funny... wat nandu did...
a lil romance ..ahhh ..
bt thn princess ki entry...
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lvd the most...
ishhh cleam chaiyeee...
awww so cute...

n nandu s diet wnt in dustbin... hahah...
too cute...
lvly...

n again their ice cream date wid a beautiful n cutest bonus...
our princess...
a cute update...

thnks di fr updating fr us...
thnk uuu..
lv u so mchhh...

cntinue soonn...tc...
wid exs at war s awsm rocking mindblowing chappy...
waiting fr it vryyy impatiently...
bye..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome
Loved it completely
Tq so much for this amazing moments dear
Take care and stay blessed

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