#5//The Ex's At War//Ch17 on Pg 126 n Link for Thread 6 on Pg 1

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Shrabasty Habil

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1061

This was amazinggg. Manik's Pov was too good. I loved his point of view they both are immatured about their relationship tbh that's why they are facing problems. Anyways update soon pleaseee.

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Pravallika69

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1062

Awww such a beautiful update dear
Manik pov was jus soo nice the way he exolained his point of view n wat evr he felt n in the end he accept he was also at fault it's jus good
Tooo good update
Manini s jus super cute awww I love dis baby more hehe the way she troubled rose was jus wow
Hehe too good
Manan dance n nandu drunk was like wow
Drunk nandu s always fun coz she speaks her heart out
Hehe she made Manik tel everyone tat he s her husband hehe n dis possessive Manik dint leave chance to tel it to mitin hehe naughty monster
Awww best dialog was I love you pls dnt leave me
Awww update full on jus wow
Can't wait for next update

Thanks for pm
Lots of love
Pravallika

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NiyaJaiswal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1063

awsome update...
loved it very very very much...
pls continue soon...

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aarvi-manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1064

nice update...

i just loved their dresses...

n nandu is drunk waooo thats surprice...

n ya thanks for tha maniks POV...loved it...

waiting for next...now wat will happen btw them,bcoz nandu is not her senses n manik ne b drink ki thi...kya hoga jab manik ko b CHAD jayegi...???

plz next update soon

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S.h.e.e.t.a.l

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1065

Fantastic update

Lol manini is one naughty kid..its nice to read it in manik's pov

God drunk nandu is always a tough job to handle

Continue soon

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Sujitha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1066

Such a looong update..
Just loved it..
Manik's POV about their past life was really good..
We got to know what happened in the past..
I loved it when Manini put marbles under rose stilloites..
Hilarious..
Drunk Nandini when she insisted Manik to tell everyone that he is her husband..
I loved that possessive part of nandu..
I want to see that rewas face.. Stupid Rewa..
Last part Nandini mumbling in sleep..
So touching..
Tanq for pm..
Continue soon..

Love
Suji :-)