#5//The Ex's At War//Ch17 on Pg 126 n Link for Thread 6 on Pg 1 - Page 106

Thankyou for the PM!
First of all that was a beautiful update!!
You penned it down amazingly!!
The wait was worth it!!
I really liked the suprise of having it in Manik's viewpoint! Was so good!
It bought out the past really well!
I loved their outfits, looking sooo hot!
Manini was just adorable and her cute little antics!
Manik and his possessiveness when he went over to Mitin and Nandini was too good!
Hayeee there dance was perfect!
OMG I love drunk Nandini!
Awww she was sooo cute telling Manik to say he's her husband to everyone!
She loves him and needs him!
I hope they get together properly soon I can't wait for that day!!
Oooh she kissed him on his cut, does it still count towards his bet!! Haha soo blissful!
My favourite dialogue was Manik saying I didn't drink milk that why mummy is mad at me!!!
That was super adorable!!! Cuteness overload!!
Aaahhh I loved it so much, now I'm impatient for the next part!!!
Please update next part soon, can't wait for some more Manan moments!!!!:)

Wow

Very nice update..Infact loved every bit of it..Romance is not always the building block in a relationship..Family bonding is and to what extend ...you have pictured it very nicely...whats most intriguing is...you make the story real and acceptable...that keeps us going with curiosity..

thank god finally came out the behind story of separation

yes we are looking reunion of this relationship

this update also wonderful as usual

ha ha

Ja teri biwi ne tujhe yaad kiya", Cabir was just left to roll on the floor laughing. My whole family had given his enough feed to laugh his guts out in a single evening.


that was really funny

I wish they make out this time

Awesome update
update soon.. 👏 👍🏼

awesome update...mtlb aj to meri khushi ka thikana hi nhi h...ek to maniks pov and we actually get to know how they seperated...

kitni bhi baar bolu na that u are an awesome writer..har baar bolne ki ichha hoti h...that u are superb..seriously

loved the update...whole update
bta bhi nhi skti ki konsa part fav tha mera kyuki ehole update was damn awesome

and nandini drunk was funny ...manini has such great ideas yaar...she is a sweetheart..love her

Omg mindboggling wonderful incredibly beautiful amazing update

Manik would have lost it completely if they weren't disturbed by the knock and he never wanted to be away from his family his love and daughter

All the past events which leads to their separation revolves around in his mind and he still couldn't register the fact that how messed up his life has become why can't he think before doing things

She is drunk and driving manik crazy in the whole event and he loving the fact that she wanted to him to claim her but when he heard her saying that he doesn't know what he should do now

Continue soon and thanks for pm

Awesome update love the way both manan are struggling with deir emotions...hope to see them reunite soon

Wow wat a beautiful update...
Manan nd der amazing love towards each other...
I so love manini hw she always manange to ruin rewa nd rose party hahahahahahahhaha...

Nandu drunk nd her kiss publicly...
Nandu's confession ohhh god such a. Cute update...

Plzzz update new part soon